高三英语写作训练高三英语课件

高三英语写作训练首都师大附中王军23/9/2003Maincontents五种基本句型句子的种类写作要领写作指导五种基本句型1、主语+系动词+表语2、主语+不及物动词3、主语+及物动词+宾语4、主语+及物动词+间接宾语+直接宾语5、主语+及物动词+宾语+宾语补足语主语+系动词+表语1.Jackisagoodboy.2.Theparklooksbeautifulinspring.3.Hisleggothurtjustnow.4.Thespeechisveryexciting.5.Hishobbyisplayingfootball.6.Heisagainstourplan.7.Thetruthisthathehasneverbeenabroad.主语+不及物动词1.Mygrandmaissleepingnow.2.IwillstayinShanghaiforaweek.3.JackisleavingforNewYork.4.Itrainedhardlastnight.5.LucyarrivedinBeijingyesterday.6.Wehavelivedherefortenyears.主语+及物动词+宾语1.Mysisteriswritingaletteratthismoment.2.Weshouldlearnfromhim.3.Jackenjoyscollectingstamps.4.Ourteacherpromisedtoseethemoviewithus.5.Idon’tknowwhichschoolheisin.主语+及物动词+间接宾语+直接宾语1.Hisfatherboughthimacomputer.2.Isentabirthdaygifttoheryesterday.3.Mymothertaughtmehowtodoit.4.SheaskedLucywhosepenitwas.主语+及物动词+宾语+宾语补足语1.Wemustkeeptheclassroomclean.2.TheyconsiderJackabraveboy.3.Letthefreshairin.4.Whathesaidmademeveryangry.4.Lucywillmakeherselfknown.5.Isawthelittlegirldancing.PracticeFillintheblanksThisafternoonsomeAmericanstudents_____________(到达)atourschoolforavisit.Iwillbetheirguide.FirstIwill____________________________(向他们介绍校史).PracticeFillintheblanksThenIwill____________________(带他们参观)thelecturehall,thelibraryandtheplayground.I____________________(觉得这个计划不错)andtheywill_______________(过得愉快)。PracticeFillintheblanksThisafternoonsomeAmericanstudents_____________(到达)atourschoolforavisit.Iwillbetheirguide.FirstIwill_____________________________(向他们介绍校史).arearrivingtellthemthehistoryofourschoolPracticeFillintheblanksThenIwill_________________(带他们参观)thelecturehall,thelibraryandtheplayground.I__________________(觉得这个计划不错)andtheywill_______________(过得愉快)。showthemaroundthinkthisplangoodenjoythemselves句子种类简单句(SimpleSentences)并列句(CompoundSentences)复合句(ComplexSentences)SimpleSentences1.HecanspeakGerman.2.BothTomandJackenjoycountrymusic.3.Wesanganddancedyesterdayevening.4.MybrotherandIgotoschoolat7:00inthemorningandcomebackhomeat4:00intheafternoon.CompoundSentences1.Workhard,andyouwillmakeprogress.2.Iwastired,butIfelthappy.3.Itwascoldoutside,sowestayedathome.4.Hurryup,oryou’llbelateforclass.ComplexSentences1.Itbegantorainwhenwegothome.2.Jackdidn’tgotoschoolbecausehecaughtacold.3.Allofusknowthatwemuststudyhard.4.Whenweareleavinghasnotbeendecidedyet.5.Theladywhomyoutalkedtoisourteacher.PracticeMakesentenceswiththegivenwordmusic/sportsSimpleSentencesJacklikesmusic.Hisbrotherenjoyssports.PracticeMakesentenceswiththegivenwordsmusic&sportsCompoundSentencesJacklikesmusic,buthisbrotherenjoyssports.PracticeMakesentenceswiththegivenwordsmusic&sportsComplexSentencesThelittleboywholikesmusicisgoodatsports.PracticeJoineachpairofsentencesintoonesentence.e.g.Tomoftenarriveslate.Hisbossgetsangry.Tomoftenarriveslate,sohisbossgetsangry.BecauseTomoftenarriveslate,hisbossgetsangry.写作要领抓住内容要点正确使用时态恰当选用过渡词语变化表达方式抓住内容要点(NMET1998)5月3日，你参观了一个农场。请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。注意：1、日记须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增减细节，使日记连贯；2、词数100左右。抓住内容要点内容要点：1、集合／出发2、到达3、参观4、野餐5、娱乐6、告别抓住内容要点内容要点：1、集合／出发2、到达3、参观4、野餐5、娱乐6、告别meetattheschoolgategivesb.awarmwelcomeshowsb.aroundhaveapicniclunchhavegreatfunsaygoodbyetosb.Pleasefindthemistakesabouttenseinthefollowingpassage.IwasborninMarch,1980.WhenIwastwoyearsold,MothertakemetoGrandma’homeinShanghai.IstaywithGrandmaforfiveyears.Pleasefindthemistakesabouttenseinthefollowingpassage.ThenIhavetoreturntoBeijingforschool.Atfirst,Ididnotenjoyschool.SoonIbecomeveryfondofit,becauseIlearnhowtowriterletterstoGrandma.Pleasefindthemistakesabouttenseinthefollowingpassage.IwasborninMarch,1980.WhenIwastwoyearsold,MothertakemetoGrandma’homeinShanghai.IstaywithGrandmaforfiveyears.______tookstayedPleasefindthemistakesabouttenseinthefollowingpassage.ThenIhavetoreturntoBeijingforschool.Atfirst,Ididnotenjoyschool.SoonIbecomeveryfondofit,becauseIlearnhowtowriterletterstoGrandma.____________hadbecamelearntApassagewithoutconnectorsIhadabadcoldlastweek.Ihadarunningnose.Ididnottakeitseriously.Ibegantocough.Ihadafeverandfeltweak.Iwassenttohospitalandhadtolieinbedforthreedays.ApassagewithconnectorsIhadabadcoldlastweek.Atfirst,Ihadarunningnose,butIdidnottakeitseriously.ThenIbegantocough.Afterthat,Ihadafeverandfeltweak.Finally,Iwassenttohospitalandhadtolieinbedforthreedays.恰当选用过渡词语时间顺序空间顺序并列关系转折关系因果关系条件关系让步关系递进关系概括性词语过渡性词语过渡词语时间顺序first,second,next,then,finally;atfirst,inthebeginning;afterthat,afterwards;atlast,intheend;…Atfirst,Ihadarunningnose.ThenIbegantocough.Afterthat,Ihadafever.过渡词语空间顺序ononeside…ontheotherside(of);infrontof,atthebackof;ontheright/leftside;nextto,closeto;…Ononesideoftheschoolisalecturehall.Ontheothersideisalibrary.过渡词语递进关系what’smore,besides;infact;…Idon’twanttogoskating;besides,theiceistoothin.过渡词语概括性词语inshort,inaword;generallyspeaking;…Inaword,itisimportantforustolearnEnglish.PracticeJoineachgroupofsentencesintoonepassage.Shewantedtobesuccessful.Sheworkeddayandnight.Sheworkedforafamousadvertisingagency.Shebecamethemanager.PracticeJoineachgroupofsentencesintoonepassage.Sheworkedforafamousadvertisingagency.Becauseshewantedtobesuccessful,s