高三英语课件英语书面表达的润色高三英语课件

英语书面表达的润色句式的多样选词特色关联词的使用合理的想象和发挥顺德勒流中学易桂清《高考英语科考试说明》中第五档（21~25分）的给分范围和要求覆盖所有内容要点；应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言应用能力；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，完全达到了预期的写作目的。全、准、顺、雅一、复杂多样的句式复合句倒装句强调结构非谓语感叹句虚拟语气独立主格结构、反意问句、并列句、名言、警句等2004年广州一模的书面表达为例假设你是某中学生英文报的小记者，对中学生课外上网的利弊进行调查采访。以下是学生们对上网的看法。请你根据他们的观点写一篇简要的调查报告，并呼吁正确使用互联网。使用互联网的益处1、资源丰富2、节省时间3、方便交流和沟通使用互联网的弊端1、内容良莠不齐2、沉迷网络游戏会影响学业3、过多使用会影响健康1．各种复合句1）There’snodoubtthattheInternetdoesusgood.2)ThemajorityofstudentsbelievethattheybenefitalotfromtheInternet.3)Asisknowntoall,onceaddictedtotheonlinegames,thestudentsnolongerconcentrateontheirstudies.4)Helpfulasthecomputeris,somestillsticktotheopinionthatnoteverythingontheinternetisgoodforusstudents.2.倒装句1)Neverbeforecouldwebeexposedtosomuchinformationwithjustaclick.2)Onlywithgreatcareandunderproperguidancewillthestudentsimprovetheirstudiesandenjoymakingnewfriendsbysurfingtheinternet.3)Withtheincreasingpopularityandconveniencethattheinternetbrings,therearisestheargumentoveritsbadeffectsonteenagers.4)PresentedasfollowsistheresultofarecentsurveyonhowstudentsviewtheInternet.3.强调结构1)Itistheinternetthatmakestheworldmuchsmaller.2)Isn’tistheinternetthatprovidespeoplewithamoreconvenientwayofcommunication?3)Theinternetdoesenablepeopletocommunicatewitheachothermoreeasilyandquickly.4.非谓语1）Weshouldtrytomakeproperuseofthecomputer,makingitagoodpartnerthatbenefitsourlifeaswellasourstudy.2)Beingabsorbedinthegames,studentsmayhavedifficultyincontrollingthemselves,leavingtheirhomeworkundone.5.感叹句1)Howhardsomestudentsfindittotearthemselvesawayfromcomputergames！2)Howconvenientitistousethecomputer!6.虚拟语气1）Asmoreandmorestudentsstayupsurfingtheinternet，itishightimethatwediscussedtheproblem2)Withouttheinternet,wewouldnothaveenjoyedourlifesomuch.3)Somepeopleinsistthatteenagersbekeptawayfromtheinternet.二、选词特色(2004年广州一模)dosbgood,dosbharm,haveone’shealthdamaged,leaveone’shomeworkundone,benefit,addictedto,concentrateon,beexposedto,underproperguidance,provide,enable,absorbedin,havedifficultyindoing,tearoneselfawayfrom,bekeptawayfrom,makeproperuseof,stayup,actasatwo-edgesword,teenagers,asfollows等等。三、关联词的使用（1）表时间的：now,then,afterwards,soon,beforelong,shortlyafterthat,…minuteslater,justnow,justthen,suddenly,immediately,themoment,etc.（2）表顺序及过程的：first(ly),firstofall,second(ly),atfirst,then,next,atlast,finally,etc.（3）表转折的：but,yet,andyet,instead,however,although,though,otherwise,orelse,inspiteof,etc.（4）表结果的：thus,therefore,so,asaresult,seeingthat,luckily,(un)fortunately,etc.（5）表强调的：firstofall,aboveall.indeed,surely,certainly,ofcourse,afterall,atleast,atmost,etc.（6）表并列的：and,also,aswell,etc.（7）表递进的：besides,what’smore,inaddition,even,oncemore,whatwasworse,tomakethingsworse,etc.（8）表解释或说明的：inotherwords,thatis,thatistosay,namely,forexample,actually,andsoon,suchas,personally,believeitornot,totellyouthetruth,accordingtothis,forthisreason,etc.（9）表比较的：justlike,justas,inthesameway,moreorless,onthecontrary,ononehand,ontheotherhand,while,etc.（10）表总结的：finally,inconclusion,inaword,ingeneral,generallyspeaking,inshort,asyou/weknow,intheend,inall,etc.2004年广州一模的书面表达可以用上以下的过渡性词语:what’smore(also,beside,inaddition),worsestill(what’sworse,tomakethingsworse),however,therefore,asaresult,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,generallyspeaking等待。四、合理的想象和发挥LastSunday,ourclassorganizedsomevolunteer’activities.GroupOnewenttothePeople’sParktoplanttreesandwatertheflowers.GroupTwowenttotheBusStationtodosomecleaning.GroupThreewenttothestreettoraisemoneyfortheHopeProject.GroupFourwenttotheoldpeople’shometoputonperformances.Lateintheafternoonwereturnedhome，andwewerehappy.“流水帐”式，缺少“血”和“肉”。LastSunday,ourclassorganizedsomevolunteer’activities,fromwhichallofuslearnedalot.GroupOnewenttotheparktoplanttreesandwatertheflowerstomakeitmorebeautiful.GroupTwomanagedtogivetheBusStationaspringcleaning.Asaresult,ittookonanewlook.GroupThreeheadedforthestreetandhelpedtoraisemoneyfortheHopeProject,sothatmorepeopleinthepoorareascanaffordtheirschooling.GroupFourwenttotheoldpeople’shomeandpresentedwonderfulperformances,theagedlaughingallthetime,happierthanever.Lateintheafternoonwereturnedhome,wornout,butwewerehappytohaveenjoyedameaningfulday.关联词的使用练习OnedayIwaswalkinginthestreet.Isawathiefstealingacarnearahouse.Irantothehouse.Iwantedtotellitsownerwhatwashappening.Nobodywasthere.Idecidedtoshoutatthethiefandstophimstealingthecar.Thethiefgotoutofthecar,seizedmeandthrewmetotheground.Igotbadlyinjured,myheadbleedingallthetime.Istruggledtostandup.Igaveaphonecalltothepolicestation.Thepoliceturnedupandcaughtthethief.OnedayIwaswalkinginthestreetwhenIsawathiefstealingacarnearahouse.Withouthesitation,Irantothehouseinordertotellitsownerwhatwashappening,butnobodywasthere.SoIdecidedtoshoutatthethiefandstophimstealingthecar.Suddenlythethiefgotoutofthecar,seizedmeandthrewmetotheground.AtthattimeIgotbadlyinjured,myheadbleedingallthetime.Istruggledtostandupandgaveaphonecalltothepolicestation.Severalminuteslaterthepoliceturnedupandcaughtthethief.某报纸刊登有人化装行乞的照片,请你为此写篇评论,要点为:1.假装残疾和无助是欺骗行为2.行乞原因3影响市容4.政府应采取措施杜绝此类事件要点分析及发挥：看到这些图片感到震惊。这些st