高二英语课件HowtoImproveWriting高二英语课件

2020/6/171HowtoImproveWritingTrytoavoidsillymistakesUsesomebigwordsPhrasesareidiomaticSentencepatternsarealwaysusefulActivateyourthoughts2020/6/172原稿:MyEnglishTeacherThedaybeforespeechcontestmyEnglishteachertalkedtome.Shesaidthatsheandmyclassmatesallhopedmetosucceed.WhenIwasonthestagethenextday,IfeltsonervousthatIshooklikealeaf.Thereweresomanypeoplepresent!SuddenlyIcatchedsightofmyEnglishteacherinthecrowd.Shewassmilingandnoddingatme.Irememberedherwordsandcalmdown.WhatagoodworkIdid!Iwonthefirstprize.Nowmypicturesandprizeareshowninthelibrary.WheneverIseethemIcannothelpthinkofmyEnglishteacher.2020/6/173修改稿:MyEnglishTeacherThedaybeforethespeechcontestmyEnglishteachertalkedtome,sayingthatsheandmyclassmatesallwishedmesuccess.WhenIwasonthestagethenextday,IfeltsonervousthatIshooklikealeaf.Thereweresomanypeoplepresent!SuddenlyIcaughtsightofmyEnglishteacherinthecrowd.Shewassmilingandnoddingatme.Irememberedherwordsandcalmeddown.WhatgoodworkIdid!Iwonthefirstprize.Nowmypicturesandprizeareshowninthelibrary.WheneverIseethemIcannothelpthinkingofmyEnglishteacher.2020/6/174UseSomeBigWordsifYouKnowThatisadifficultjob.Thatisanchallengingjob.Thereisanincreaseinthenumberofwomen’sjobs.Thereisanincreaseinthenumberofjobsavailableforwomen.Therearemanydesignsforyoutochoose.Avarietyofdesignsareforyoutochoose.2020/6/175Therearemanyformsofelectroniccards.Therearevariousformsofamazingelectroniccards,whichcanbeusedtosatisfyeveryone’srequest.Wholedayofferswarmwaterandtherearealsomanyelectricladders.Thehotwaterissuppliedalldaylongandtheelevatorisinoperationdayandnight.Soontheyfellinlove.Prettysoontheyfellcrazilyinlove.2020/6/176UseSomePhrasesifYouCanHewillbebackinafewdays.Hewillbebackinacoupleofdays.SuddenlyIhadanidea.SuddenlyIcameupwithanidea.Hecameandbroughtusanewstory.Hecamewithanewstory.IhaveasurprisetogiveyouIhaveasurpriseforyou.2020/6/177Wehadtostayindoors.Dueto/Asaresultoftheheavyrain,westayedindoors.Ifyouwanttotakepartin,pleasewalkquicklytotheoffice.Ifyouareinterestedinit,pleasecallattheoffice.Cometotheofficeandapplyforit.Thosewhowouldliketotakepartinitpleasecometotheoffice.2020/6/178AlectureonInformationTechnologyandEnglishLearningistobegivenbyMr.LiPingonFriday.Inordertodeepentheeducationreformandkeeppacewiththetimes,alectureonInformationTechnologyandEnglishLearningistobegivenbyMr.LiPingonFriday.Ioftensende-mailcardstomyfriends.Ioftensende-mailcardstomyfriends,tellingthemwhatIthinkorfeelinmyschoollife.2020/6/179SentencepatternsAreAlwaysUsefulThedogjumpedintotheriverandpulledthegirltothebank.Itwasthedogthatjumpedintotheriverandpulledthegirltosafety.ThesquareisneartheGreatWallHotel.NearbyistheGreatWallHotel.YouwillhavetoworkhardforyearstospeakgoodEnglish.IttakesyearsofhardworktospeakgoodEnglish.2020/6/1710Ifailedintheexamagain.WhatdisappointedmemostwasthatIfailedintheexamagain.MissLiwillgiveusareportsoon.MissLi,whohasawideknowledgeofEnglish,willgiveusareportsoon.WealllikeJim.WealllikeJim,whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers.WealllikeJimbecauseofhishelpfulnessandkindness.2020/6/1711ActivateYourThoughtsIwasathomeaftersupper.SuddenlyIheardasoftknockatthedoor.So…NotapersoncouldIfindwhenIopenedthedoor,thenIreturnedhome,feelingpuzzled.Amomentlater,Iheardaknockatthedooragain.ThistimeIdidn’tgodirectlytothedoor,instead,Iwenttothewindow.ThroughthewindowIsawaboyrunningaway.Itwasjustatrick.2020/6/1712Iopenedthedoorandfoundalittleboyinfrontofme.Helookedabitnervous.“Whatisthematter?”Iasked.Slowly,theboyansweredinalowvoice.“Iamsorrytotroubleyou.IwonderwhetherIcouldgetbackmyballwhichflewintoyoubackgarden?”Oh,whataboy!Ismiled.2020/6/1713SoIwenttothedoortoseewhoitwas.Therewasamanstandingoutside.Heseemedfamiliartome,butIdidnotrecognizehimatthemoment.“Comeon,guy,letmein.”Hesaidwithatrickysmile.Suddenlyanameflashedonmymind.Simon,oneofmyclassmatesinjuniorhigh!Itwasamazingthathestillrememberedme.Thenwetalked,laughedandhadalotoffun.2020/6/1714Iopenedthedoorandsawastrangemanwithglasses.Iwasabouttosaysomethingwhenhebegantoshowmethewatcheshebroughtwithhim.Ididn’tlikethematall,soIsaid“Thankyouallthesame.Goodbye.”2020/6/1715Ithoughtitmightbeoneofmyfriends.ButwhenIopenedthedoorwithdelight,tomysurprise,Ifoundastrangerthere.“IsMr.Whitein?”Sheasked.“Iamafraidyouhavegotthewrongnumber.Mr.Whitelivesinthenextroom.”Ianswered.Thensheapologizedandleft.2020/6/1716Itwasapostman.Therewasaletterforme.Tomysurprise,thelettercamefromoneofmyclosefriendswhoIhadnotheardfromforalongtime.Shetoldmeintheletterthatshewasstudyingabroadandthatshewouldreturnhomeforherwintervacation.Iwasveryhappyandlookedforwardtothedaywhenshecameback.2020/6/1717SoIopenedthedoor.Muchtomysurprise,therestoodabeautifulgirl,withasweetsmileonherface.WhileIwasthinkingwhatwouldhappen,shetookoutagunandshotatmebeforeIcoulddoanything.Withaterriblesound,IopenedmyeyesonlytofindthatIhadjustfallenoffthebed.2020/6/1718AssoonasIopenedthedoor,Igotabigsurprise.Therewasnobodybutalittledog.“Youmusthavelostyourway,comeon.Iwillgiveyousomethingtoeatandtakeyouhome.”Isaid.Thenthedogcameint