高考作文练习答案解析高三英语课件

书面表达（1）：根据下面的表格以“HowtoReducetheCity’sPresentpopulation”为题，写一篇作文，谈谈你对这个问题的见解注意：1。只需把表格中的要点写清楚。短文的开头与结尾已写出，不记入总数。2。词数：100-120。参考词汇：政策policy；压力pressure；郊区suburb；生活小区livingblock；Ourcityistoocrowdednow,andtosolvethisproblem,threeproposalsareputforward---正文---Iftheseproposalsarewellcarriedout,thecity’spopulationwillbegreatlyreduced.建议具体措施目的I。A。晚婚B。一对夫妇，一个孩子减少人口自然增长（人口出生率）II。严格控制外地人口进城务工经商减少外地人口对城市的压力III。在郊区建立便于生活、集学校、电影院、医院、购物中心于一体的生活小区吸引城市居民到郊区的生活小区工作和生活答案：HowtoReducetheCity’sPresentpopulationOurmoderncityistoocrowded,andtosolvetheproblem,threeproposalsareputforward.Mostpeoplebelievethatweshouldfirstpracticethepolicyoflatemarriageand“Onecouple,onechild”inordertoreducethebirthrate.Secondly,thecitygovernmentmushhaveatightcontrolofcountrypeopleenteringcitiestoengageintradeordomanuallaborsoastoreducethepressureonthecitycausedbytheincreasingpopulation.Finallymoreandmorepeoplesuggestthatlivingblockswithshoppingcenters,schools,hospitals,cinemasandtheatresshouldbeinthesuburbs.Inthiswaythecitypeoplewillbeencouragedtomovetheretoliveandwork.Iftheseproposalsarewellcarriedout,thecity’spopulationwillbegreatlyreduced.书面表达（2）假如你是李欣，对和“Allright”的“That’sallright”用法及区别不太清楚，你的英语老师给你作了简单的讲解，还鼓励你向英文报纸的外籍编辑(editor)写信问这个问题。现在，请你用用语向某一英语报纸的编辑写一封信，询问和的用法和区别，并请他举例说明。最后问他是否有空来学校作英语讲座，谈谈如何学好英语。注意：1）不要逐条翻译2）注意书信格式3）词数：100-120。答案：Deareditor,MynameisLIXin.I’mamiddleschoolstudent.IwonderifIcanaskyouaquestion.Myteachertoldmethattherewassomethingdifferentinmeaningbetweenthetwosentences“Allright”and“That’sallright”.ButIcan’tunderstandthemverywell.WouldyoupleasetellmethedifferencebetweentheminsimpleEnglish?AndIalsohopethatyouwillgivemesomeexamples.Bytheway,wouldyoubekindenoughtocometoourschooltogiveusalectureohowtolearnEnglishwell?Wishtogetyourreplysoon.YourstrulyLiXin书面表达（3）假如你是学校学生会主席。现请按下列要求，以学生会的名义用英文写一个举行英语演讲比赛的书面/口头通知，欢迎全体同学参加。1）目的；诣在提高全体学生的英语口语水平。2）报名时间与地点；星期五，六月四日前，学生会办公室3）比赛时间和地点：下周三晚7：00-10：30学生礼堂4）在本校工作的加拿大老师格林先生和五位本校英语老师将被邀请当评委，前六名优胜者或奖。5）字数：100-120答案（3）NoticeInordertoimproveourspokenEnglish,wearegoingtohaveanEnglish-speakingcontestfrom7:00to10:30p.m.nextWednesdayintheschoolauditorium.Mr.Green,whocamefromCanadaandnowworksinourschool,togetherwithfiveEnglishteacherswillbeinvitedasjudges.Thefirstsixwinnerswillbegivenrewards.ThosewhowouldliketotakepartinthecontestmaysignupintheofficeoftheStudents’Union,beforethisFriday,June4th.Allthestudentsarewelcometothecontest.May30th,1998.theStudents’Union答案：Allthestudents,mayIhaveyourattentionplease?OurStudents’Unionaregoingtoorganizea----inorderto----in---.Mr.Green----togetherwith----.Thefirstsixwinners---.Thosewhowill---should---in---before----.Thankyouforallyourattention!TheWeakAretheSlavesoftheStrongAnoldmanwassittinginanarmchairathome,readinghisnewspaper.Besideshimlayadogsleepingsoundly.Suddenlytheoldmandecidedtoleavehomeforawhile,buthecouldnotgooutwithhisslipperson.Sohewokeupthedogandletitfetchtheshoesforhim.Outofhisexpectation,thedogdidn’tevenstandup,butjustbarkedwithtwoeyesclosedagain.Theoldmanwascompletelypuzzled.Ashewaswonderingwhatwashappening,hesawthecatcomingtowardshimwiththepairsofshoesinitsmonth.Seeingthis,hewastotallydumbfounded.Isthisthelawthattheweakaretheslavesofthestrong?书面表达：评分原则以及给分范围第七档：（25---29）能写明全部或绝大部分要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，表达清楚。第六档：（20---24）能写明全部或绝大部分要点；语言有少量错误；行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。第五档：（16---19）能写明大部分要点；语言有一些错误，行文不够连贯。第四档：（12---15）能写明基本要点；语言虽然有许多错误，尚能达意第三档：（8---11）能写出部分要点语言错误多，影响意思表达。第二档：（4---7）只能写出一两个要点，语言错误教多，只有个别句子能懂第一档：（0---3）只能写出与所给要求内容有关的一些单词。内容要点：1）老人在家，坐在椅子上，看报，狗在旁边睡觉。2）老人想出去，唤醒狗，去拿鞋3）狗闭眼叫，老人迷惑不解4）猫叼鞋走来，老人目瞪口呆注：内容要点可用不同的方式来表达，对紧扣主题的发挥不扣分。99年高考英语作文评分原则：1）本题总分为30分，其中内容和语言占29分，词数占1分，按七个档次给分。2）平分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。词数在90---110之间的，加1分。内容要点：1）开头语2）结束语3）盖起了一幢新教学楼4）新建了一座图书馆5）新操场位于学校前面6）种了许多树99高考作文答案：DearMr.Smith,Iwassopleasedtohearfromyouandamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyschool.Quiteafewchangeshavetakenplace.Ononesideoftheroadthereisanewclassroombuilding.Onetheotherside,wheretheplaygroundusedtobenowstandsanothernewbuilding----ourlibrary.Initthereareallkindsofbooks,newspapersandmagazines.Theplaygroundisnowinfrontoftheschool.Wehavealsoplantedalotoftreesinandaroundtheschool.Ihopeyoucomeandseeforyourselfsomeday.BestwishesyoursLiHua