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高三英语书面表达指导看图写作一、观察不细，审题不清：对画面提供的信息观察不仔细，审题不认真，以致在写作时丢三拉四，信息缺损，内容不完成，有的对题目的提示未看清或理解不透而匆忙落笔，所以其作文尽管通篇没有什么语言错误，却因为信息不全未能得一个高档次的分数而令人感到惋惜。二、语言错误多：有些考生的要点几乎都提到了，只是语言错误太多，表达不准确，表现出其对英语的规范系统知之甚少，基础知识薄弱，缺乏良好的语言规范，因而得分不高。1、主谓不一致码2、句子主要成分残缺。3、时态、语态错误。4、词性混用。5、习惯搭配或习惯用法错误。6、词性变化错误。7、汉式英语或英汉混用或用汉语拼音三、偏离主题、随意发挥：有些考生表达时不紧扣主题，随意发挥，写出了很多与要点挂不上边的话，尽管写出得不错，却浪费了时间，得不了高分。四、字迹潦草，书写不规范：有大约百分之二十的考生书写不规范，“”不分，“”不分；“”不分，大小写不分。字迹潦草，龙飞凤舞，涂涂改改。书写清楚得该档次最高分，书写不认真的得本档次最低分五、句子不够简练，篇幅冗长是影响书面表达得分的重要因素：有词数限制，说明一件事三言两语可表达清楚，就无需长篇大论地来叙述。六、态度不老实，有欺骗行为是影响得分的一个道德因素。有些考生在考试过程中有投机的心理，想蒙骗过关，1、用汉语拼音代替不会写的词、短语和句子，有的甚至通篇都是汉语。2、有意漏掉某些不会写的词、短语或句子。3、从其它书面表达内容尤其是从阅读理解的语篇中抄袭，企图蒙骗得分。解题步骤：1、首先仔细观察，读懂题意：2、住要点，依图编似提纲）为每一幅图找一主题句）在弄清了题目所要表达的主要意思之后，便可根据每幅图画主要内容列出提纲。3、将要点用重点词和短语列出。4、将要点扩展成句。最后用适当的关连词不达意，过渡句把扩展的句子组合成文。对扩展的句子可做适当的调整和修改，使文章内容自然连贯，层次清楚。1.IthinkI’mfitforthejobneededinyourcompany2.IthinkI’msuitedfor…3.IthinkI’msuitablefor…4.I’mingoodhealth5.Aftergraduationfromauniversity,IhavelearnedGermanforseveralyears.6.Iwantverymuchtobeacceptedbyyourcompany.7.Iwantverymuchtobeacceptedbyyourcompany.8.AfterreadingyouradvertisementforasecretaryinChinatoday,Iwanttoapplyforthejob.9.Ihaveshownaninterestinthepositionasasecretary).11.I’minterestedintheposition(inthejob)12.I’mabitpoor/weakinlistening.13.I’mgoodatinlistening.14.I’llbeverypleasedifyoucouldkindlygivemea(favorable)replysoon..15.I’llbeverythankfulifyoucouldkindlygivemeareply16.Ihaveenclosedmyresume.（简历）书信1.GladtoreceiveyourletterofDec12.I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter.3.Welcomeyoutowuhantostaywithmeinthevacation./WelcomeyoutoourEnglishSummerCamp.4.PleasetellmewhenyouwillcomeandI’llmeetyouatthestation.5.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreplysoon./Lookingforwardtoyourreplysoon.41.Iwon/gotthefirstplaceinlastyear’sEnglishcompetitionofourschool.2.Ioftenhelpmymother(to)cookmeals3.Icanmakenoodles.4.I’mastudentinSeniorGradeThreeofNoIMiddleSchool.5.IliveatNo115TaiPinStreet.6.TakeNo33busandgetoffatRengMingRoadyoucan’tmissit.7.IcancommunicateandtranslatescientificandtechnicalmaterialsofChemicalindustryfromEnglishintoChinese..8.IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish通知1.Comrades/Ladiesandgentlemen,MayIhaveyourattentionplease/Attentionplease.2.I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutouractivity./Ihavesomethingtotellyou.3.TherewillbeanimportantlectureinROOM301.4.We’lldecidedtoorganizeanactivitytodosomecleaningattherailwaystation.5.Everyonemustspeakatthemeeting,tellingtheclassmateshowyouaregettingalongwithourEnglish.(英语学得如何)6,Youmustspeakofyourownexperience.谈谈经验）7.IfyouarenotgoodatEnglish,youmayexpressyourdeterminationthatyou’lldoyourbestinyourEnglishstudy.8.Pleasegeteverythingready.9.Themeetingwillbeginattwoandlastaboutanhourandahalf.10.Bethereontime.11,OurEnglishspeechcontestwillbeheldat2.00PM.12.ThosewhowanttotakepartinthecontestarerequiredtogetthespeechreadyandhanditinbeforeSep,20.13.Allstudentsarewelcometoattend(出席).14.ThosewhowanttotakepartinthecontestshouldcometotheStudentsUniontosignup/(signyourname)beforeSaturday.15.Wewenttoafour-daySummerCampheldinYantai.16.ManyEnglishteachersarefromChina,theUSA,England,andAustralia.17.WehadanEnglishSpeechCompetition.18.We’vevisitedsomeplacesofinterest.19.OurSpokenEnglishhasgreatlyimproved.20.Ihavemadealotofnewfriendsthere.22.MultimediaTeachingSystemmakesteachingandlearningeasierbutmuchmoreinteresting.22.Studentscangetmoreinformationandknowledgeinclass.23.WecansendE-mailtoallpartsoftheworldincomputer.24.TheInformationcenterisopentoteachersandstudents.25.Studentscanstudyathomeiftheyhaveacomputer.26.SchoolManagementSystemhelpstoimproveourschoolmanagementandmeetstheneedsofamodernschool.介绍学校：1.Our1.schoolhasahistoryofmorethan90years.Itwasfounded/setup/establishedin1907.2.Moststudentsarelivingandhavingmealsatschool.Theyarecleveranddiligent.3.Theteachersofourschoolarethefirst-classteachers.4.Ourschooliswellequipped./Theequipmentofourschoolisfine/thefirstclass.5.Thereare3teachingbuildingandanofficebuildinginour.class.6.Wehave5sciencelabs.7.computerroomsand2soundlabs.8.Thereis“AnEnglishCorner”inourschool.9.PeopleoftengototheEnglishcornertopractisetheirspokenEnglish.10.OnWednesdayafternoons,studentsgatheraroundandtalkwitheachotherinEnglish.11.Amongthemareteachersandstudentsfromeverygrade.12.Allthethreeyears,Ihaveneverbeenabsentfromthecorner.13.I’msureIhavemadealotofprogressinlisteningandspeaking.Ihopemoreschoolmateswilljoinus.路线14.I’msorrythatIdon’tknowhowIcangettotheschool./thewaytotheschool./wheretheschoolis.15.Gosouthstraightdownthestreet,andthenturntotheleftatthefirstcrossing.16.Gostraightfortwoblocksandthenturnleft.17.Walkstraightforwardfroabout200paces.(步)andyouwillseeanewbuildingontheright.18.TaketheN0.4busandthenchangetheNo10bus.欢迎词1.Mr,Chengweareveryhappytoinviteyoutoourschool.2.NowletmeintroduceMrChengtoeveryonehere.3.Youarewelcometogiveusaspeechonyourinvention.4.I’mveryhappytotelltheSchedule(时刻表)ofyourstayhere(youstayinBeijing)5.Ourheadmasteristomeetyouat7.o’clock.6.TheStudentswillgive(puton)niceperformances.Attheparty.欢送词onbehalfofsb代表某人，为了某人Speakonbehalfofthemonitor代表班长讲话1.I’mverypleasedtospeakonbehalfofmyschoolmatesat