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2003高考英语考生书面表达评价与失误分析2003高考英语考生书面表达评价与失误分析•2003年高考NMET书面表达题沿用1999年和2000年的看图说话形式提供材料。用写信这一写作手段来考查考生的写作水平，考生普遍感到题材贴近现实生活、立意新颖，比较好下笔，要点容易抓住，内容易于表达。同时可适当增加细节，以使短文前后连贯，意思通顺。笔者认为，本题命制地很巧妙，给考生很大的自由发挥余地，让考生有话可说，有内容可写，突出了语言的实用性和交际性，全面考查了考生的基础知识。2003年的书面表达的难度比2002年有所降低。区分度较好，有利于高校选拔优秀英语人才。笔者参加了湖南省2003年高考英语书面表达题人工阅卷工作。下面就三篇考生习作，做要点点评。1.2003年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语书面表达假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文。来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元注意：1．词数：100左右；2．参考词汇：房租—rent(n.)。Onepossibleversion:DearBob,I’msogladtolearnthatyou’recominginSeptember.I’vefoundaplaceforyou.It’sasmallflatof25squaremeters,withabedroom,abathroomandakitchen.Inthebedroomthereisabed,asofa,adeskandachair.Therentis500yuanpermonth.TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxiuChineseSchool.BusNo.11cantakeyoustraighttotheschool.Infact,it’sonlyonestop.Doyouthinkyou’dlikeit?Ifnot,Icantryandfindanotherplaceforyou.Justletmeknow.YoursLiHua习作1DearBob,I’mgladtotellyouthatIhavebookedaseriesofroomsforyoutostudy【live】here.Theylive【lie】inFangcaoStreet.Besides【beside】thebusstationwhichleadstoJianxingChineseLanguadgeshool.Therearethreerooms,includingthewashingrooms【room】,thekitchenandthebedroom.Thethreeroomswillbeyournewhomehereandtheywillgiveyouacomfortablesense.Theyhavea【an】areaoftwenty-fivesquaremeters.andtorentthem,itwillcostyoufivehundredyuan,shallyoucomeoverearlytohavealookatitbyyourself?Then,youwillfinditgreatful【nicetoliveinit.】Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.yoursLihua习作2DearTom:I’mgladto【have】receive【received】yourletter.NowI’dliketotellyousomethingabouttheflatI【have】rentforyou.itisinFangcaostreetandit’snotfarfromthebusstopwhereyoucantakeabusdirectlytoJianyingChineselanguageschool.Besides,its【itis】convinient【convenient】【in】transportation,boththesurroundingsoutsideandtheconditionsinsideareverygood.Aroundthebuildingareallkbindsofgreentreesandcolorfulflowers.Atthesametime,all【the】neededfurnitureisavailableforyou.[What'smore,]youhaveachicken【kitchen】and,abathroomaswellasabigenoughlivingroom【intheflat.】.therentis500yuanpermonthI’mlookingforwardtoseeingyouinSeptember.【Bestwishes.yoursLihua】习作3DearBob,Iamgladtohaveheardfromyou.YousaidyouweregoingtolearnChineseinJianxinChineseschoolandaskedmetofindaflatforyou.NowIamwritingtotellyousomethingabouttheoneI’vefoundforyou.ItisonthesecondflooratFangcaostreetandcovers25squaremeters.Itdivide【isdivided】intothreeparts---thebedroom,thebathroom,andthekitchen.Whenenteringthebedroom,youwillseeabedonyourleft.Infrontofyouliesasofa.Thereisawindowontherightwithadeskbesideit.youcanstudythere.Asfarasthebathroomisconcerned,itisOK,inmyopinion.Bytheway,youcantakeNo11bus【straight】totheschool,Itisonlyonestop.Furthermore,therentis500yuanpermonth.Ithinkyoucancomeandseeitforyourself.Bestwishes.YoursLihua