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高三英语写作练习AnEnglishwritingpracticeforthestudentsofSeniorThreeHowtowriteaCompositionAccordingtoTablesandGraphs1.情景作文某学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动，并针对图表2中任何一个数据中反映的情况写出你的一个看法。词数不少于60。生词：图表chart一、内容要点：1.图表1中六项活动及所用时间2.图表2中一个数据反映的情况3.自己的一个看法二、说明：1.内容要点可用不同方式表达。2.对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。1.Whatisthemainideaofchart1?thedailyaverageamountoftime,differentafter-classactivities.2.Howlongdostudentsspendonhomework?93minutes3.HowmuchtimedoesittakethemtowatchTV?46minutes4.Howmuchtimedoeslisteningmusicandworkingonthecomputertakeup?34minutesand30minuteseach5.Dotheyhavemuchtimeleftforsports?25minutes6.Dotheystillhavetimeforhousework?12minutes7.Anycommentsononeofthedatagiveninchart2?Littletimeforsports8.Anysuggestions?domoreexercise1.Chart1showsthedailyaverageamountoftimethestudentsspendondifferentafter-classactivities.2.Thestudentsputthemosttime－93minutes－intotheirhomework,3.watchingTVtakesup46minutes..1.thedailyaverageamountoftimedifferentafter-classactivities.2.theirhomework93minutes3.watchTV46minutes3.Jointhephrasesintosentence4.Theyputinaboutthesameamountoftimelisteningtomusicandworkingonthecomputer,34minutesand30minuteseach.5.25minutesisspentonsports,6.12minutesgoesintohousework.4.Listeningtomusicandworkingonthecomputer34minutesand30minuteseach5.forsports25minutes6.housework12minutes10%ofthetimeistakenupwithsportsactivitiesencouragethestudentstodomoreexerciseafterclass7.chart2:Littletimeforsports8.suggestions•3.Demonstrationandanalysisoftheexampleofgoodwriting•Whatdoyouappreciatemostwiththesamplewriting?•Canyoufindoutsomegoodpoints?Chart1showsthedailyaverageamountoftimethestudentsoftheschoolspendondifferentafter-classactivities.Thestudentsputthemosttime－93minutes－intotheirhomework,andnextinlineiswatchingTV,whichtakesup46minutes.Theyputinaboutthesameamountoftimelisteningtomusicandworkingonthecomputer,34minutesand30minuteseach.While25minutesisspentonsports,only12minutesgoesintohousework.•AsisshownonChart2,only10%ofthetimeistakenupwithsportsactivities.Ithinktheschoolshouldencouragethestudentstodomoreexerciseafterclass.Thisway,theymaybehealthierandmoreenergetic.•＊Chart1showsthedailyaverageamountoftimethestudentsoftheschool⊙spendondifferentafter-classactivities.Thestudentsputthemosttime☆－93minutes－intotheirhomework,and☆nextinlineiswatchingTV,whichtakesup46minutes.Theyputinaboutthesameamountoftimelisteningtomusicandworkingonthecomputer,☆34minutesand30minuteseach.☆While25minutesisspentonsports,only12minutesgoesintohousework.•＊mainidea•⊙spend•Putinto•Takeup•Putin•Gointo•☆补充说明•☆inversion•☆同位语•☆contrast•☆AsisshownonChart2,only10%ofthetimeistakenup⊙withsportsactivities.•＊Ithinktheschoolshouldencouragethestudentstodomoreexerciseafterclass.Thisway,☆theymaybehealthierandmoreenergetic.•☆定语从句•⊙concerning,asto•＊commentsandsuggestions•☆形容词比较级•Step2Sumupthefeature:•Introduction•Thiskindofwritingisaninformationinterpretationprocess．Theinformationmaybegiveninnumbers，linesorcurves，etc，usuallyafewexplanationsaregiven．Theorganizationofthewritingisessentialtoagoodessayoftablesandgraphs．Generally，itisasfollows：•Thatis，inthefirstparagraph，youhavetodemonstratethegeneralsituationofwhathasbeenreflectedinthetableorgraph；•Then，inthesecondparagraph，youhavetoanalyzecarefullythenumbers，linesorcurves，andpointouttherateofincreaseordecrease；•Intheend，youhavetowriteyourownopinionorcomment．•Generalintroduction——Analysis——Conclusion•概要介绍——分析图表——总结概括•Step3:Howtowriteacompositionaccordingtotablesandgraphs•图表作文1.SampleItemDirections：Writeacompositionbasedonthetitleandthefollowingchartinnolessthan120words．Thecausesaregivenunderthehorizontallineandthepercentageofthetotalof80fireincidentsisgivenintheverticalcolumnontheleft．writeclearly．LeadingCausesofFiresinChina（1997）•2.AnalysisoftheSampleItem•1).Themainideaofthegraphis：•Firecauses．•2).Fromthegraph，weknowthattherearethreemaincausesoffires：•a．Smokers（nearly50％）•b．Defectiveinsulation（38％）•c．Childrenplayingwithmatches（12％）•3).Thus，wecan，bycomparingtheaboveinformation，makeacommentofthemaintopic，thenreachaconclusion．•Ananalysisofthewritingsofthestudents•ModelEssay•Fromthegraphabove，wecanseethatfire，oneofthemostterriblekillersinChina，ismainlycausedbysmokers，defectiveinsulationsorchildrenplayingwithmatches．•In1997，80fireincidentstookplaceinChina．Whilenearly50％werecausedbysmokers，38％werecausedbydefectiveinsulation，and12％werecausedbychildrenplayingwithmatches．Nomatterwhatthetypeofthefire，wecanalmostbesurethattheywerecausedbycarelessness．•Fromthegraph，wecanconcludethatsmokersaretheleadingcauseoffires，butwealsoneedtoeducateourchildren，warningthemofthedangersofplayingwithmatchesandinstructworkersbemorecarefulwithinsulation．•Step4.AWritingPractice•请根据下面曲线图（graph）“Thenumberofcaraccidentsin2001”，写一篇文章。•1描述2001年不同月份汽车事故分布（distribution）及总趋势。•2描述汽车事故的可能原因及对策。•3词数：100左右。•4参考词汇：高峰—peak；多雨的日子—rainydays。•Mainpoints:•Part1:demonstratethegeneralsituation•1.twopeaksinaccidentsin2001•2.March,numberofaccidents:35•3.August,numberofaccidents:42•4.accidentsdecrease•fromAugusttoDecember•5.thelowestpointoftheyear:December•Part2:Cause:rainysea