基础写作系列之三如何写人物介绍March7th,20071.例文:假如你叫李明,你的美国朋友布鲁斯开始学习中国文学,来信询问鲁迅其人及作品。你回信介绍鲁迅,内容如下(1)鲁迅,原名周树人,浙江绍兴人(2)为了国家,弃医从文。(3)著名的作家,思想家,而且还是中国现代文学的开创者。(4)小说被译成多种文字,并被制成电影,如《阿Q正传》、《祝福》这两部影片。(5)一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本。参考词汇:《阿Q正传》:TheTrueStoryofAHQ《祝福》:TheNewYear’sSacrifice注意:1)介绍必须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐条译成英语。[写作要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。文章首尾已给出,不算字数。[评分标准]句子结构的准确性,信息内容的完整性。DearBruce,IwasgladtoknowyoubegantostudyChineseliterature.NowletmetellyousomethingaboutLuxun.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.SinceyouarelearningChineseliteratures,IthinkreadingLuXun’snovelswillhelpyoutoknowmoreaboutit.Yours,LiMing审题的步骤是什么?1、2、3、4、5、文体主体时态人称信息点整合不要打草稿,但应有提纲人物简介的一般步骤:Givetherightorder()教育:education()外貌/性格appearance,character()生平bigeventsinhisorherlife(inorderoftime)()评估evaluation()概况age,sex,birth-place,background12345概,貌,育,平,估平(估)菇概貌(盖帽)概,貌,育,平,估介绍人物步骤记忆技巧:1.A.概况:译:钟南山1941年出生在广州,他是中国最伟大的医生之一1)BorninGuangzhouin1941,ZhongNanshanisoneofthegreatestdoctorsinChina.2)ZhongNanshan,oneofthegreatestdoctorsinChina,wasborninGuangzhouin1941.B.外貌,性格:译:我的历史老师是个漂亮女人,她长着两只大眼睛,留着长发*语法,句法高分tips尽量用分词短语、同位语结构,使文章简洁,通顺Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwomanwithtwobigeyesandlonghair.巧用with做定语C.教育经历:1)MajoredinScience,hegraduatedfromafamousUniversityinthenorthandafter4years,hewentabroadforfurtherstudies.2)GraduatedfromthedepartmentofEnglishofZhongshanUniversity,shewentonfurthereducationandreceivedadoctor'sdegree.D.生平:1)Notonlyisheinterestedinscience,butalsohehasagiftformusic.2)Hesetanewworldrecordofswimming,whichwonagoldmedalforChinaTeam.注意尽量用非谓语动词,使文章精炼尽量用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等,润色文章E.评估:1)Leifengsetusagoodexample,soallthepeoplespokehighlyofhimandallrespectedhim.2)HeisoneofthegreatestnovelistsinChinaandwillbealwaysrememberedasanoutstandingman.3)LishizhenmakesgreatcontributionstoMedicalliterature.注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组生词大扫荡:Groupwork:Ingroupsof4or5,writethecompositionintenminutes:Correctwithyourpartners(Howtocorrect?)1、是否恰好五句话?2、是否每句都含必要信息?3、可否自由发挥?4、pants纠错原则:1)pattern2)agreement3)number4)tense5)spellingWhowillbevolunteertoshowyourcompositiontotheclass?FindoutthegoodsentencesinthepossibleversionandrememberthemwithyourpartnerDearBruce,IwasgladtoknowyoubegantostudyChineseliterature.NowletmetellyousomethingaboutLuxun.BorninShaoxing,ZhejiangProvince,LuXunwithrealnameZhouShurenabandonedthestudyofmedicinebecausehethoughthecouldchangesocietymorethroughwriting.NotonlywasLuXunawell-KnownChinesewriter,athinker,andtranslator,butalsothefatherofmodernChineseliterature.Hisnovelshavebeentranslatedintomanylanguagesandsomeofnovelshavebeenmadeintofilms,suchasTheTrueStoryofAHQandTheNewYear’sSacrifice.Someofhisnovelshavebeencollectedinhighschoolandcollegetextbooks.SinceyouarelearningChineseliteratures,IthinkreadingLuXun’snovelswillbenefitalot.Yours,2.仿写:假如你叫白云,从广告上得知广州某公司需要工程师。写信应聘。要求内容包含如下要点。(1)姓名:白云,出生于广州市越秀区,年龄27岁。(2)2001年毕业于中山大学,后来留学英国伦敦大学。(3)2005年数学方面成果显著,获博士学位。(4)英国一家公司想用高薪聘用他,但拒绝了。(5)为了报效祖国,于2006年毅然回国。(6)有数学天赋。注意:1)介绍必须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐条译成英语。文章首位已经给出,不算字数。[写作要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。[评分标准]句子结构的准确性,信息内容的完整性。牛刀小试;Nowcomesyourtern!DearSir,Howdoyoudo?Throughthead.Iknowyourcompanyneedsanengineer.Iwouldliketohavethisjob.Nowletmeintroducemyselftoyou..Iwillappreciateitverymuchifyouwouldgivemetheopportunity.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Sincerelyyours,BaiyunI’mBaiYun,borninYuexiuDistrict,GuangzhouCity,aged27.AfterIgraduatedfromZhongshanUniversityin2001,IwassenttoLondonUniversityintheUK.Throughhardworkfor4years,Iachievedextraordinaryachievementonmathsbecauseofmygiftformathsandreceivedadoctor’sdegree.ABritishcompanytriedhardtoinvitemewithagoodofferofsalary,butIrefusedit.TodevotemyselftoourChina,Icamebackthisyearwithoutanyhesitationin2006.基础写作注意事项:1)能写几句就写几句,不留空白2)主要评分要素包括内容的完整性和连贯性、句子结果的正确性。3)每句占2.5分,每0.5分为一档4)连贯性共占2.5分5)多写或少写一个句子,扣一分,决不要自我发挥。6)文不对题给0分,写出相关短语给0.5分。7)每个句子要含有表中的信息,否则该句不得分。8)不要生搬硬套,强加关联词。注意“三写”,在规定的时间内完成Homework