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专题复习：书面表达训练之一如何使句子优美鸦滩中学词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑4.语言得体要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？语言地道，规范句式多变化作文更优美怎样用不同的表达方式表示相同的意义怎样通过对句子结构的变化,使文章显得更加丰富多彩怎样运用高级词汇，给文章增加亮点怎样使句式多变语言优美呢？1.Whatsurprisedmemostwasthathedidn'tknowmeatall.→=surprisedmehedidn'tknowmeatall.=,hedidn'tknowmeatall.ItthatTomygreatsurprise2.Themandidn'tknowwhatheshoulddonext.=Themandidn'tknow_______________next.3.Hurryup,oryou'llmissthetrain.=Youwon'tcatchthetrain_____you________hurry.=Youwillmissthetrain________youhurry.whattodoifdon’tunless4.Toomanypeopletothezoowillcausetrafficjam.Toomanypeopletothezoowill_________trafficjam.Toomanypeopletothezoowill__________trafficjam.leadtoresultin5.虽然他是个孩子，但他懂得很多．(一句多译)1)___________________________________________________________________2)__________________________________Although/Thoughheisachild,heknowsalot.Childas(though)heis,heknowsalot.6.这本书是如此的有趣，以致于我读了一遍又一遍。1)________________________________2)________________________________3)_________________________________4)________________________________ThisbookwassointerestingthatIreaditagainandagain.ThiswassuchaninterestingbookthatIreaditagainandagain.SointerestingwasthisbookthatIreaditagainandagain.ThiswassointerestingabookthatIreaditagainandagain.7.Theteachertookabookinhishandandcameintotheclassroom.=Theteachercameintotheclassroom,________________________．(用with的复合结构)＝Theteachercameintotheclassroom,________________.（用独立结构）withabookinhishandbookinhand1.把其中一句改为分词短语Hehadfinishedsupper.Hewentouttohaveawalkthen.Havingfinishedsupper,hewentouttohaveawalk.A.合并为简单句2.把其中一句改为介词短语Hewasbroughtin.Hishandsweretiedbehindhisback.Hewasbroughtinwithhishandstiedbehindhisback.B.合并为复合句1.TheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnight.Thenewscheeredeveryoneofus.ThenewsthattheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnightcheeredeveryoneofus.2Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast.Allthesemakepeople’slivesconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.whichInrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast,makespeople’slivesconvenient,pleasant…WiththedevelopmentofsothatBeijing,people’slivesarebecomingmoreandmoreconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.Nowadays,Beijingisdevelopingfastpeople’slivesaregettingmoreconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.C.把复合句改为简单句Shewasanxioustofindajobaftershefinishedherstudies.Havingfinishedherstudies,shewasanxioustofindajob.1.把从句改为分词短语C.把复合句改为简单句2.把从句改为介词短语Iinsistedthatheshouldgo.Iinsistedonhimgoing.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.Thoughheiswealthy,heworkshard.Wealthyasheis,heworkshard.Inspiteof/Despitehiswealth,heworkshard.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.Hedidn’tgetupuntil7o’clock.Itwasnotuntil7o’clockthathegotup.Notuntil7o’clockdidhegetup.Assoonaswearrivedatthevillage,wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagers.Onarrivingatthevillage，wewerewarmly….Themomentwearrivedatthevillage,wewere…Wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagersimmediatelywearrivedatthevillage.Nosoonerhadwearrivedatthevillagethanwe……Hardlyhadwearrivedatthevillagewhenwe….句子开头的变化1.Theboywassurprisedatwhathehadseen,hestoodthereandcouldn’tsayaword.=__________whathehadseen,theboystoodthere,_______________aword.(形容词做状语)Surprisedatunabletosay2.Ididn'trealizemymistakeuntilyoupointeditout.→=________notuntilyoupointeditout_____Irealizedmymistake.(强调句型）=_________youpointeditout______________mymistake.（倒装句）NotuntildidIrealizeItwasthat3．Youaresuretosucceedbyworkinghard.=____________________________suretosucceed.(only+状语提前)4.Weallknowthatheishonest.=____________________________(It做形式主语)=.(as引导的非限制性定语从句)Itisknowntousallthatheishonest.Asisknowntoall,heishonestOnlybyworkinghardareyou5.Ipassedthephysicsexamwithyourhelp.1).Ipassedtheexam__________yourhelp2).Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexam__________ourhelp.3).Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsyourexam_________help.thankstobutforwithout1.Theybelieveapublicparkshouldbefree.Theybelieveapublicparkshouldbe_______________.2.Therailwayinourcountyisbeingbuilt.Therailwayinourcountyis_________________.freeofchargeunderconstructionusingcomplicated/advancedwords注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替一些单词，以增加文采。3.Wethinkthemeetingisveryimportant.=We______________thatthemeetingis_____________________.4.Theresultisnotsatisfyingatall.=Theresultis_______satisfyingholdtheviewofgreatimportancefarfromDon’tworryaboutyourexpensesforuniversityeducation,andwewilltrytohelpyou.……andwewillmakethegreatesteffort/doourbest/tryeverymeanstohelpyou.Atthattimethetaxidriverhadtoaskthetouristforhelp.Atthattimethetaxidriverhadnochoicebuttoturntothetourist.Icameupwithagoodidea.Ihadagoodidea.Agoodideaoccurredto/struck/cametome.Somepeopleclaimthatreadingselectivelyismorehelpful,sincetheybelievethatreadingwithoutchoiceisawasteoftime.However,someotherpeoplearguethatweshouldreadextensively,fortheyholdtheviewthatinsucharapiddevelopingsociety,weneedtoenlargetherangeofourknowledgeinsteadofrestrictingittooneortwofields.Inmyopinion,bothsidesaregoingtoextremes.欣赏一下Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②Ithasch