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1续写的一些素材积累一、环境描写的素材环境描写分为客观和主观两种角度：客观为从环境事物本身入手，主观则从观察者角度描写。通常在描写时主客观交替进行，主观描写比重稍大。客观环境描写：Part1环境描写的adj要求：有声，有色，有质感，有味道thebluesky(蓝天）thesongsofbirds（鸟鸣）thethunderingclouds（电光闪雷鸣）thefragileflowers(娇嫩的花）;（thedark,rainingevening雨夜交加的夜晚）thegreengrass（青草）thefragrantroses（艳丽的玫瑰）;thesetting/risingsun(落日/冉冉升起的太阳）…Part2环境描写的verb（vi&vt）要求一)．Wind（blow/click/howl/wail/roar）acryofsorrowandgrief1.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain,…一阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。2.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.风，轻柔却寒冷，轻点着树枝，搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛。3.Acoolbreezeblewthroughthequietpark.凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。4.Acoldbreezewaftedthroughmyhair.(冷风吹拂过我的头发）Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift.（今日正是放风筝的好天气，强劲的风力带动了风筝的上升。）二)．Water(flow/travel/move/meander/enter)声音：1.Atonepoint,thefaintsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.在某处，潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。颜色2.Thewaterwasdeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglass-clearsurface.水是深蓝色的，阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。3.Alittlewayoffwasasmallbrook,rushingandsparklingalongbetweengreenbank.离此不远,有一条小溪，在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。4.Itmurmuredinasoftvoicelikealittleinnocentgirlwhisperedtoherlovingmother.似乎它在温柔低语，就一位天真少女对着她那慈爱的母亲细细私语。(action,sound,colour)三)．Sky(stand/appear/turn)1.Theskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.天空是浓浓的灰色，伴着拥挤的朵朵云2.Blueskiesstoodtallandfar蓝蓝的天空高高耸立主观环境描写：1.Sbfoundsthadj/doing/done某人发现某物（状态/动作/被）...2.Sbsaw/heard/felt/smeltsthdoing/done某人看到/听到/感到/闻到某物（状态/动作/被）3.Itwassoadjthatwefind/feel它是如此....以至于24.Sthkeptsbspellbound/amazed/景物使我如此陶醉/惊讶/sthheldsbentirelyintheirpower景物让我完全惊呆了5.Itlooked/seemed/appeared/feltlike…景物看起来像…二、场景描写的素材（来自原著：追风筝的人）1.Atleasttwodozenkitesalreadyhunginthesky,likepapersharksroamingforprey.Withinanhour,thenumberdoubled,andred,blue,andyellowkitesglidedandspuninthesky.Acoldbreezewaftedthroughmyhair.Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift,makethesweepseasier.（放风筝的场景描写，从各个角度，立体描述）空中已经挂着至少二十来只风筝，如同纸制的鲨鱼，巡游搜猎食物。不到一个钟头，这个数字翻了一番，红色的、蓝色的、黄色的风筝在苍穹来回飞舞，熠熠生辉。寒冷的微风吹过我的头发。这风正适宜放风筝，风速不大，恰好能让风筝飘浮起来，也便于操控。2.Thewaterwasadeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglass-clearsurface.湖水澄蓝，波平如镜，阳光照在湖上熠熠生辉。3.ThenIglancedupandsawapairofkites,redwithlongbluetails,soaringinthesky.Theydancedhighabovethetreesonthewestendofthepark,overthewindmills,floatingsidebysidelikeapairofeyeslookingdownonSanFrancisco,thecityInowcallhome.（场景、比喻）我抬起头，望见两只红色的风筝，带着长长的蓝色尾巴，在天空中冉冉升起。它们舞动着，飞越公园西边的树林，飞越风车，并排飘浮着，如同一双眼睛俯视着旧金山，这个我现在当成家园的城市。4.Blueskiesstoodtallandfar,thesunlikeabrandingironsearingthebackofyourneck.CreekswhereHassanandIskippedstonesallspringturneddry,andrickshawsstirreddustwhentheysputteredby.（场景、比喻）天空一碧如洗，阳光像烙铁般灼痛后颈。整个春天我和哈桑在溪流打水漂，到了夏天它们也干涸了。黄包车嗒嗒走过，扬起阵阵灰尘。5.Somewhere,abranchsnapped,anowlhooted.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.Andfrombelow,thefaintsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.在某个地方传来树枝劈啪作响的声音，还有猫头鹰的叫声。寒风微微拂动树枝，吹过山坡上的灌木丛。而下面，水流在山谷淌动，传来阵阵微弱的声音。6.Bythreeo'clock,therainhadstoppedandtheskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.Acoolbreezeblewthroughthepark.（天气）到三点时，雨停了，铅灰色的天空阴云密布，一阵寒风吹过公园。37.Thesunwasbeginningtoset,glitteringredthroughthecracksbetweentheramshacklebuildings.（景象）太阳开始下山，那些摇摇欲坠的房子的裂缝中，渗出闪闪的红色斜晖。三、描写时间，动作，心理和情感一)、情感好词：1.喜乐①Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。②Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。③Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一阵激动声穿过他们。④Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑声在房间里萦绕。⑤Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。⑥Awildgaiety（快乐）tookholdofher.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。⑦Unforgettablewerehereyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteadysmile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。⑧Iwaswildwithjoy.我欣喜若狂。⑨Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.我高兴得难以形容。⑩Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。⑪Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。⑫Sheshedtearsofjoy.她高兴得流下了眼泪。⑬Hereyesweresparklinglikediamonds.她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。⑭Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness.她洋溢着幸福。⑮Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她激动得满脸通红。⑯Joywelledupinsideher.她心中涌起喜悦。⑰Iwasfloatingonair.我漂浮在空中。⑱Amusementgleamedinhiseyes.他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。2.愤怒：①Iwasseizedbyanger.我充满了愤怒。②Hewasfumingwithrage.他气得大发雷霆。③Hisangerboiledover.他的愤怒爆发了。④Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.他几乎控制不住怒火。⑤Hewasbreathingfireandfury.他充满着怒火。⑥Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。⑦Hegavemealookofburninganger.他愤怒地看了我一眼。⑧Heglaredatmewithburningeyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。⑨Heflaredupattheword.他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。⑩Hisfacecloudedwithanger.他气得脸色阴沉。3.悲伤烦恼①Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。②IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。③Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears.她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。④Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine.听到这个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。4⑤Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。⑥Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands.她掩面哭泣。⑦Itriedtofightbacktears./Myeyeswerefilledwithtears.我努力忍住眼泪。/我的眼里充满了泪水。⑧Afrown（皱眉）nowstoodonhisface.他皱起了眉头。⑨Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。⑩Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。⑪Hebrimmedoverwithsorrowwhen...他满是悲伤……⑫Theywereimmersedinsorrow.他们沉浸在悲痛之