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第三编要想作文得高分，首先要让作文的亮点飞。如果作文没有一点萤萤亮点，那作文只能在基础等级徘徊。如何营造些许亮点，本部分从两大方面词汇、句式、18个角度给予细化讲解。第一讲词汇营造亮点4角度扮亮词汇(一)特别的爱给特别的你——名词名词属于实词，名词表示人、事物、地点或抽象概念的名称，名词同时也分为专有名词和普通名词。名词用得好更能出众脱俗，让阅卷老师眼前一亮。名词的种类：普通名词专有名词可数名词不可数名词专门指代某一人、物、地点等的名词个体名词集体名词物质名词抽象名词[典题1](一般词)Nowwehaveachancetodevelopagreaterunderstandingofeachother.(高级词)Nowwehaveanopportunitytodevelopagreaterunderstandingofeachother.现在我们有一个好机会，可以大大增进对彼此的了解。[典题2](一般词)Therearefourbasicchoices;theyaredescribedbrieflybelow.(高级词)Therearefourbasicalternatives;theyaredescribedbrieflybelow.有四个基本的选择，简述如下。高中阶段常见的名词及名词短语类写作高级词汇①机会chance→opportunity②选择choice→alternative③课程course→curriculum④影响effect→influence/impact⑤后果result→consequence⑥缺点shortcoming→drawback⑦方法way→approach⑧职业career→profession⑨建议advice→guidance⑩老人oldpeople→theold/theelderly/theaged/seniorcitizens⑪青少年youngpeople→youngsters/youths/adolescents⑫几天前afewdaysago→theotherday⑬一个表现好的孩子achildwhobehavesinaproperway→awellbehavedchild[专题过关训练]先用所给的词补全句子，然后对该词进行升级1．因此，我没有足够的时间去锻炼。As_a_result,_Idon'thaveenoughtimetotakeexercise.(result)→As_a_consequence,_Idon'thaveenoughtimetotakeexercise.2．所有学校都设有音乐和舞蹈课。Alltheschoolshavemusicanddancingclassesas_parts_of_the_course.(course)→Alltheschoolshavemusicanddancingclassesas_parts_of_the_curriculum.3．他们称他们期望这次会议会对国家的未来产生显著影响。Theysaytheyexpectthemeetingtohave_a_marked_effect_on_the_futureof_the_country.(effect)→Theysaytheyexpectthemeetingtohave_a_marked_impact/influence_on_the_future_of_the_country.4．(2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)最重要的是，老人通常是最先品尝桌上食物的人，因为他们在中国受到很好的尊重。Mostimportantly,old_people_are_usually_the_first_to_tastethefoodservedonthetablebecausetheyarewellrespectedinChina.(oldpeople)→Mostimportantly,the_old/the_elderly/the_aged/senior_citizens_are_usually_the_first_to_tastethefoodservedonthetablebecausetheyarewellrespectedinChina.5．(2018·天津高考书面表达)因此，我认为这不仅是你展示自己才华的黄金机会，同时也可以为我们提供建议。Therefore,Ithinknot_only_will_it_be_a_golden_chance_for_you_to_show_yourgreat_talent,_but_also_you_can_offer_us_advice.(chance,advice)→Therefore,Ithinknot_only_will_it_be_a_golden_opportunity_for_you_to_show_yourgreat_talent,_but_also_you_can_offer_us_guidance.6．在这类职业中，只有20%的岗位是由女性担任的。Only_20_percent_of_jobs_in_the_careersareheldbywomen.(career)→Only_20_percent_of_jobs_in_the_professionsareheldbywomen.7．激励这些年轻人的不是对成就的渴望，而是对失败的恐惧。These_young_people_are_motivatednotbyadesiretoachieve,butbyfearoffailure.(youngpeople)→These_youngsters/youths/adolescents_are_motivatednotbyadesiretoachieve,butbyfearoffailure.8．我们将探索收集信息的不同方法。Wewillbeexploringdifferent_ways_to_gather_information.(way)→Wewillbeexploringdifferent_approaches_to_gathering_information.扮亮词汇(二)炫酷亮闪你的眼——动词(短语)动词根据其后是否能跟宾语，可分为两类，分别是：及物动词(TransitiveVerb)、不及物动词(IntransitiveVerb)，缩写形式分别为vt.和vi.。[典题1](一般词)Helikesplayingfootball,whichishisfavourite.(高级词)Heisfondofplayingfootball,whichishisfavourite.他喜欢踢足球，这是他最喜欢的运动。[典题2](一般词)Asforme,Ibelievethatthenumberoftouristsshouldbelimitedforthefollowingreasons.(高级词)Asforme,I'mfirmlyconvincedthatthenumberoftouristsshouldbelimitedforthefollowingreasons.就我而言，我坚定地认为游客的数量应得到限制，理由如下。高中阶段常见的动词及动词短语类写作高级词汇①看见see→catchsightof②遇见meet→comeacross③引起cause→leadto/resultin/giveriseto④拥有have→possess⑤提高develop/improve→promote⑥替代replace→substitute⑦面对face→befacedwith⑧容忍bear→putupwith⑨处理dowith→dealwith/copewith⑩决定decide→determine/makeupone'smind⑪考虑consider→takeintoaccount/consideration⑫应该should→besupposedto⑬理解understand→makesenseof/figureout⑭使用use→employ/makeuseof/takeadvantageof⑮道歉apologize→makeanapology⑯记住remember→keepinmind⑰发生happen→occur/comeabout⑱想起thinkof→occurto/comeupwith⑲感谢thank→appreciate⑳帮助某人helpsb.→dosb.afavor○21节省save→setaside○22参观visit→tour/payavisitto○23分发handout→distribute○24站起来standup→gettoone'sfeet○25习惯于beusedto→beaccustomedto○26一定besureto→beboundto○27为……做准备preparefor→makepreparationsfor/bepreparedfor○28反对beagainst→objectto○29厌烦beboredwith→befedupwith/betiredof○30忙于bebusyin(with)→beoccupiedin(with)/beburiedin/beengagedin○31闻名befamousfor→haveareputationfor○32感到舒服feelcomfortable→feelatease○33美化学校maketheschoolbeautiful→beautifytheschool○34置若罔闻refusetolistento→turnadeafearto○35成功做某事succeedindoingsth.→makeit○36想做某事wanttodosth.→seek/intend/desiretodosth.○37照看lookafter→attendto○38尽力做某事tryone'sbesttodosth.→sparenoefforttodosth.○39向某人寻求帮助asksomeoneforhelp→turntosb.forhelp○40我认为Ithink→inmyopinion/asfarasI'mconcerned[专题过关训练]Ⅰ.选用方框中的短语替换下列句中加黑部分putupwith，consistof，bedevotedto，makeuseof，fixone'seyesupon1．Thelittleboylookedatthepictureonthewall.fixed_his_eyes_upon2．Thesmallgrouphassixpeople.consists_of3．Shewasafraidshecouldn'tbearthepain.put_up_with4．AllhislifewasgiventotheParty'seducationalcause.was_devoted_to5．Wewillusehervastexperience.make_use_ofⅡ.请用高级词汇替换下列句中加黑部分1．(2018·6月浙江高考写作)Iwillbegratefulifyoucouldoffermetheopportunity.give_me_a_kind_consideration2．(2016·北京高考书面表达)Ourclassthoughtoftheideatomakebetteruseofusedmaterials.came_up_with3．(2015·湖南高考书面表达)Atthesametime,Idecidedtostudyharderratherthanwasteprecioustimeonthoseuselessthings.made_up_my_mind4．We'lltryourbesttodevelopthetraditionalfriendshipbetweenus.promote5．Wouldyoupleasehelpmetoturndownth