英语专业八级写作专项训练

英语专业八级写作专项训练（2）Review1.中心思想的表达；2.主题句的表达(1)各主题句内容无重复(2)主题句必须凝练如何判断自己的主题句是否凝练?(陈述”结果”而非”行为”;陈述”本质”而非”现象”)(3)用词唯美Warming-upPractice…•Recentlyagroupofcollegegirlsarousedaheateddebateinthestatesbecausetheyworeflip-flapswhenvisitingthewhitehouse.whilethegirlsthinktheirchoicewasok,manycriticizedthemofbeingtoodisrespectful.HereinChina,aboystudentsuedafemaleclassmatewhositinfrontofhiminanimportantexaminationbecausesheworetoolittle,whichdistractedhimsomuchthathefailedintheexam.Doyouthinkuniversitystudentsnowhavesufficientawarenessofwhatispropertowear?Doyouthinkuniversityshouldmakeanexplicitdresscodeforstudents?Writeacompositionof400word.Youshouldsupplyatitleforyouressay.10minutesforyou…•Tick,tick…•AnodetoDressCode\Dressupourmoralawareness•Afterthoroughreflection,wewilltracethebenefitsofdresscodefromvariousaspects.•Firstofall,strictdresscodecanavoiddistractionssothatstudentscanfocusbetterontheirstudy.•Secondly,strictdresscodecanshowrespectforteachersandclassmates.•Moreimportantly,strictdresscodecanteachstudentstheimportanceofproperdressinginthefuture.•Therefore,theuniversityadministratorshavethedutytomakeandenforcedresscodeoncampus.•Ontheonehand,astostudentsthemselves,dresscodecanfostertheirawarenessofacceptabledressingbehavior.•Ontheotherhand,astootherpeople,dresscodecanforestalltragicconsequencesanddeliverreverence.历年真题分类题目通常用一句话或若干句话引出写作话题,然后对写作任务进行限定,如说明写作目的,读者对象等.由于包含对写作任务的各种限制条件,如果误读就可能会导致整个任务失败.写作文体专八作文主要有两种写作文体:1.说明文OneMajorProblemintheProcessofUrbanization(1998)TheImpactoftheInterneton…(2001)TheMostImportantPesonalQualityofaUniversityStudent(2002)说明文就是用语言把事物的性质,特征,成因,关系,功能,用途等解释清楚的过程.说明文一般用于解释事物,事件或思想.说明文写作方法•目的:使人明白写作意图,解释说明某一对象.因此,最重要是让读者明白作者的立意.因此,要在第一部分阐述清楚•写作对策:•组织结构要合乎逻辑•多举例说明•下定义阐释•对比与对照说明•原因和结果说明•引说说明OneMajorProblemintheProcessofUrbanization(1998)•Nowadayswiththedevelopmentofeconomy,existingcitiesaregrowingbiggerandnewcitiesareappearing.WhatdoyouthinkisONEofthemajorproblemsthatmayresultfromthisprocessofurbanization?Writeanessayofabout300wordsonthetopicgivenbelow.•ONEMAJORPROBLEMINTHEPROCESSOFURBANIZATION•Inthefirstpartofyourwritingyoushouldpresentyourthesisstatement.andinthesecondpartyoushouldsupportthethesisstatementwithappropriatedetails.Inthelastpartyoushouldbringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionorasummary.•Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriacy.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.•WriteyourresponseonANSWERSHEETFOUR.如何确立主题?•只要写一个问题•看到题目,要用发散思维,在纸上多列出一些城市化的问题再一个个划去别人都能想到的,最后得出一个最具新意的问题.•最有新意的想法就是和自己最息息相关的想法.•主题只能有一个,而且要用陈述句表达.singleissimple,doubleistrouble!•环境问题\经济问题\城市病\农村与城市的差距越来越大\留守儿童\农二代•确定文章中心后再从几方面进行说明,用总说-分说-总说的结构,列出文章的提纲.Thesisstatement:Amongnumerousproblemsbroughtforthbyurbanization,Ithink,thepoorsecondgenerationissuchaproblemofourmajorconcern.Outline:Foronething,theeducationofthepoorsecondgenerationhasbeenseverelydisturbedbyurbanization.What’smore,thementalhealthofthepoorsecondgenerationhasbeendeterioratedalongwithurbanization.•当提出一个新的名词时，一定要进行解释。•“穷二代”是什么？•我的定义：父母都是农民，无稳定工作，靠在城市打工维持家用。•“thepoorsecondgeneration”inmyeyesreferstothosewhoseparentsdon’thavestableincomeandhavetotoilincitiestomakeendsmeet.与“人”相关的推理。。。•Foronething,thephysicalconditionof…shouldbyallmeansarouseourmajorconcern.•Moreover,thementalhealthof…shouldbegiventhetopprioritybyallwalksoflife.Moreabout“people”…•Tobeginwith,…shouldequipthemselveswithprofoundprofessionalskills.•Secondly,communicationskillsareinprinciplecriticaltotheultimatesuccessof….•Finally,…’spersonalqualitiesareultimatelyvitaltofutureorientation.Let’stry…•It’ssaidthathavingonlyoneadvantageisnotenoughtocomeofffirstinthishighlycompetitivetimes;therefore,moreappropriatedescriptionofatalentisonecharacterizedbyhisorhermasteryofatleasttwokindsofskills,besideshavingacomprehensivegraspofexpertise.Whatisyouropinionofthisissue?Writeanessayofabout400wordsonthefollowingtopic:•ModernconceptsofTalentTheImpactoftheInterneton…(2001)•TheInternetisabouttotakeoffinChina.Asmanyas9millionpeopleareonline,anumberthatisestimatedtohit20millionbytheendof2000.Itispredictedthatthisphenomenalgrowthwillhavegreatimpactonoursocietyandeconomy.Chooseoneaspectofoursocietyoreconomywhereyouthinktheimpactwillbemoststronglyfelt.Writeanessayabout300wordsentitled.Theimpactoftheinterneton...•Inthefirstpartofyourwritingyoushouldpresentyourthesisstatement.andinthesecondpartyoushouldsupportthethesisstatementwithappropriatedetails.Inthelastpartyoushouldbringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionorasummary.•Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriacy.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.•WriteyourresponseonANSWERSHEETFOUR.审题与构思范例标题：TheimpactoftheInternetonourinterpersonalcommunication中心思想：Tomymind,itsimpactupontheinterpersonalcommunicationinoursociallife,amongothers,willbemostkeenlyfelt.结构：Tobeginwith,theInternetcanremarkablyfacilitateourinterpersonalcommunication.Secondly,theInternetcangreatlyspeedupourinterpersonalcommunication.Thirdly,theInternetcanlargelyeconomizeourinterpersonalcommunication.这套推理还可以用于。。。•E