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HowtoUsetheAttributiveClauseinyourWriting写作中的定语从句Step1.Instruction1.写作中什么时候会想到用定语从句：LastSaturdayIwatchedaconcert.Theconcertwaswonderful.Peoplecanenjoythemoonwhileeatingmooncakes,1.可连接两个包含同一事物的句子，避免单词重复和句式单一2.补充细节，以丰富文章内容LastSaturdayIwatchedaconcertwhichwaswonderful.whicharethespecialfoodforthisfestival.2.如何写出定语从句:1)题干中出现两句涉及同一事物的简单句2)题干中只有一个孤立的简单句2.如何写出定语从句:1.题干中出现两句涉及同一事物的简单句Solution:1找出这两个简单句中都出现了的同一个事物Forexample:我们班是一个大家庭。这个大家庭包括28个女孩和27个男孩。Ourclassisabigfamily.Thefamilyismadeupof28girlsand27boys.Ourclassisabigfamily,whichismadeupof28girlsand27boys.familyThefamily2将其中一个简单句改成从句,去修饰另外一个句子中那个相同的事物（注意关系词的选用）whichPractice:1.我最好的朋友是Mr.Cai。他的外号叫屌丝。2.我不喜欢他的外号。原因是它深深地伤害了他。3.他居住在长沙。在这人们可以游览很多美丽的景点。4.我们过去常常一起上美术课。我不会忘记那段日子。Practice:我最好的朋友是Mr.Cai。他的外号叫屌丝。MybestfriendisMr.Cai.Hisnicknameis“loser”.MybestfriendisMr.Cai,whosenicknameis“loser”.我不喜欢他的外号。原因是它深深地伤害了他。Idon’tlikehisnickname.Thereasonisthatitdeeplyhurtshim.ThereasonwhyIdon’tlikehisnicknameisthatitdeeplyhurtshim.他居住在长沙。在这人们可以游览很多美丽的景点。HelivesinChangsha.Peoplecanvisitlotsofscenicspotshere.HelivesinChangsha,wherepeoplecanvisitlotsofscenicspots.(注意此处不再有here)我们过去常常一起上美术课。我不会忘记那段日子。Weusedtoattendpaintingclassestogether.Iwillneverforgetthedays.Iwillneverforgetthedayswhenweusedtoattendpaintingclassestogether.2.题干中只有一个孤立的简单句Forexample:Changshaisafamoushistoriccity.Changshaisafamoushistoriccity,whichhasalonghistoryofmorethan3000yearsandlargenumbersofhistoricspots,suchasYueluMountain,KaifuTempleandsoforth.Solution:找到这个简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富长沙是一个历史名城。有多久的历史？因何出名？……afamoushistoriccityPractice:Mr.Cai是一个热心肠的人。Mr.Caiisawarm-heartedman.具体化Mr.Caiisawarm-heartedman,whoalwayslendsahelpinghandtoothers.Ourclassisabigfamily,whichismadeupof28girlsand27boys.MybestfriendisMr.Cai,whosenicknameis“loser”.ThereasonwhyIdon’tlikehisnicknameisthatitdeeplyhurtshim.HelivesinChangsha,wherepeoplecanvisitlotsofscenicspots.Iwillneverforgetthedayswhenweusedtoattendpaintingclassestogether.Attributiveclausesshouldbeusedproperlyinthecomposition!Idon’tlikehisnicknameforitdeeplyhurtshim.(2013年高考山东卷)描述你的假期打算（包括兼职、旅游、志愿者等）Iwouldliketodoapart-timejob,_______________.3.Consolidation:用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因等Travelingisoneofmychoices,________________.Iwouldliketodovoluntarywork,_____________.(2013年高考山东卷)描述你的假期打算（包括兼职、旅游、志愿者等）whichwillhelpmeearnmoneyandaccumulateworkingexperience.用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因等Iwouldliketodoapart-timejob,(2013年高考山东卷)描述你的假期打算（包括兼职、旅游、志愿者等）用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因等whichwillenrichmylifeandbroadenmyhorizon.Travelingisoneofmychoices,(2013年高考山东卷)描述你的假期打算（包括兼职、旅游、志愿者等）用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因等Iwouldliketodovoluntarywork,whichwillmakeagreatcontributiontothesociety.学校学生会正准备换届，假定你是张阳，你决定写一封邮件向学生会举荐李华担任学生会主席。举荐理由如下：1.自身要求严格2.热爱写作3.个性开朗4.乐于助人5.意志坚定DearStudentUnion,Yours,ZhangYangParagraph1:thepurposeoftheemailParagraph2:thereasonswhyyourecommendhimParagraph3:yourhopeAtfirst,heisstrictwithhimself,___________________________________________________________________.Andthenhehasgreatinterestsinwriting.______________________________________________________________________________.Besides,heiseasy-going.________________________________________________________.Heisalsowarm-hearted,____________________________________________________________________________________.What’smore,heisdetermined.________________________________________________________________.Atfirst,heisstrictwithhimself,whichmadehimrememberallthattheteachers’saidintheclass.That’swhyheisgoodatstudy.Andthenhehasgreatinterestsinwriting.Hepublishedlotsofarticlesinthenewspaper,whereIcanfindsomethingvaluable.Besides,heiseasy-going.Hecangetalongwellwithalltheclassmates,whichmakesusfeelgood.Heisalsowarm-hearted,andoftenhelpsthoseinneed.Forexample,heoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish.Thanksforhisassistance,withoutwhichIcan’tmakegreatprogressinit.What’smore,heisdetermined.Hewon’tgiveupthethingsthathedecidestodo.学校学生会正准备换届，假定你是张阳，你决定写一封邮件向学生会举荐李华担任学生会主席。举荐理由如下：1.自身要求严格2.热爱写作3.个性开朗4.乐于助人5.意志坚定Thankyou!