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1高考英语短文改错精讲授课教师：王新•下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。•增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。•删除把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。•修改在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。•注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。•2、只允许修改10处，多者（丛第11处起）不计分Therules如何做短文改错题•从句子的角度分析：•（1）查时态是否一致•1、Theyofferedmecoffeeandotherdrinks,•wehaveagoodtimetalkingandlaughing•2、Myfavouritesportisfootball.Iwasamember•ofourfootballteam.•3、Irememberedherwordsandcalmdown.3（2）查指代是否一致•1、Andtheymustnotbreaktherulestoooftenifwewanttowinthegame.•2、Iusedtolovescienceclass---allofthem---•3、IlikedthoseclassesbecauseIfeltthatithelpedme.4（3）查主谓是否一致•1、Anyonemayborrowbooksand•itcostnothingto…•2、Playingfootballnotonly…but•alsogiveus…•3、…clearupmysteries.Butthen•thereisalwaysmoremysteriesto•lookinto…5（4）查行文逻辑是否一致•1、ItisaveryimportantexambutIcan’taffordtofailit.•2、Mostpeoplecanquicklygetforhelpfromadoctororgotoahospitalsincetheyareill.•3、Shewassmilingbutnoddingatme.Iremembered.6短文改错打油诗7动词形，名词数．冠词连词常光顾．还要注意形和副.非谓语，细辨别．习惯用法要记牢．句子成分多分析8此考点归纳的是除动词时态与非谓语动词之外的动词考点，它包括被动语态、情态动词、动词形式的变化、动词用法辨析、动词be的误加与漏用等。NMET2000：Nowmypictureandprizeishanginginthelibrary.＿＿＿＿NMET’2003：Shelikeditverymuchandreadsittotheclass.＿＿＿＿Ofcourse,whenmymotherwasasked,“Haveyou…”______are____————readwas(1)Helieddownbythesideofthepathtorest.•(lied改为lay，lie表示“躺”时，其过去时是lay)(全国卷)•(2)CharlesandLindawereseeingnearthetopofthebuilding.•(seeing改为seen，因为从含义上看，此处谓语应用被动语态)(全国卷)•(3)Booksmaybekeepforfourweeks.•(keep改为kept，因此处要用被动语态)(全国卷)9•(11)Itwasverycold.Thesnowliedthickontheground.•(12)TherewillhaveanEnglishfilmintheschoolhalltonight.•(13)Afterthat,theboydecidednottoasailor.•(14)Aftersupper,myfatherwouldgooutforawalkandthencomebacktoseenewspapers.•(15)Heartomecarefully.WhatI’msayingisveryimportant.10laybeberead11短文改错的名词考点主要涉及名词的单复数问题，即在该用复数的地方误用其单数，或在该用单数的地方误用其复数。NMET2001：…sothatI’llgetgoodmarksinallmysubject.＿＿＿＿NMET2003:Theirwordwereagreatencouragementtome._____subjectswords•(1)Westoppedtorestforawhileandtodrinksomewatersfromastream.(全国卷)•(2)Weclimbeverywhere,notonlyinAmerica.WehavebeentoEuropemanytime.•(3)Therearebranchlibraryinmanyvillages.•(4)Ihopethatyoutwocouldcomeandvisitussometimessoon.12watertimeslibrariestime13短文改错对冠词的考查主要涉及冠词的误加和漏用，有时也考查不定冠词与定冠词以及零冠词的用法区别(包括a与an的区别)。其中，涉及最多的是，当一个单数可数名词表示泛指时，其前漏用不定冠词；另外，冠词在一些习语中的用法也是一个重要考点(1)Afterahourorsowebegantofeelveryfrightened.(2)Idecidedtoclimbthetreetoseewherewewere.(3)Somepeoplereadthebooksorwatchtelevisionwhileothershavesports.(4)Goodhealthisperson’smostvaluablepossession.anaa连词常光顾(1)Wetriedtofixitandtherewasnothingwecoulddo.(2)ItoldMother,Father,Sister,allmyfriendsherewhatagreattimeIhad.(3)ItisaveryimportantexambutIcan’taffordtofailit.(4)Shewassmilingbutnoddingatme.14短文改错对并列连词的考查主要涉及and,but,or,so等几个表示并列、转折、选择、因果等关系的词语。严格说来，这类错误主要属于行文逻辑的错误。butandandand•短文改错对形容词与副词的考查主要涉及形容词和副词比较等级的误用(尤其是在本身已是比较级的词前误加more)、形容词与副词的混用(如修饰动词时误用形容词或修饰名词时误用副词)等，另外，用作表语时该用形容词的却误用了名词、简短副词(如in,down等)的误加与漏用、涉及形容词搭配的as…as结构、how与what的混用等也是常考的考点。1516NMET2004:Iwoulddescribemyselfasshyandquietly._______NMET2005:Heaskedangryifwehadfinishedthework.______quietangrily(1)Afteranhourorsowebegantofeelveryfrightening.(2)Charlessaid,“AssoonasIseearealytallbuilding,Iwanttoclimbit.(3)LastSunday,policecarshurrytothetallerbuildinginNewYork.(4)Asaresult,peopleinthemodernworldgenerallylivemuchmorelongerthanpeopleinthepast.(5)Forinstance,onenightheplayedstrongandloudlymusictillfouro’clockinthemorning.17frightenedreallytallestloud18这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现在分词、过去分词，动名词和不定式错误。例如：NMET2001：Myparentsloveme…andwilldoalltheycanmakesure…＿＿＿＿NMET2002:Wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories._______NMET2003:SoonIbegantoenjoytalktomyselfonpaperasIwaslearningtoexpressmyselfinsimpleEnglish.________tovisitedtalking19主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。例如：NMET2000:Suddenly,IcaughtasightofmyEnglishteacher._______NMET2003:Myteacheradvisedmetokeepmydiary.______aa20不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。例如：NMET2004:Idon’tknowthattheydon’tliketotalkwithme.________NMET1997：IliveinBeijing，whereisthecapitalofChina._________whywhich•(1)Inthelastfiveyearsthatthey’veclimbedchurches,highbuildingsandtelevisiontowers.•(2)Charlessaid,“AssoonIseeareallytallbuilding,Iwanttoclimbit.•(1)Heisthemanhiscarwasstolen.•(2)That’sthehotelwhichwewerestayinglastsummer.•(3)That’sthepalacewherewevisitedlastsummer.•(4)Isuddenlywokeupinmid-night.AnditwasalongtimeIgottosleepagain.•(5)Inthepastfewyearswhenwe’veplantedthousandsoftreesalongtherive21aswhosewhereWhich/thatbefore短文改错应注意的问题•四不改:•①标点符号不改。•②大小写不改。•③词序错误不改。•（不是不改，而是按错词或少词来改)。•④在纲外生词不改。文中出现带汉语注释的词，•在句中不可能用错。•2223AtChristmasEve,Jimwentwithhis1._____fathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychoose2._____abigone.Itwasalmostastallerastheroom!3._____Theyputtheminthecornerofthesitting4._________On_________chose_______tall_______it动词形还要注意形和副24room.Katewascovereditwithalotof5._____Christmaslight.Thesittingroomlooked6.____reallybeautifullyatthemoment.Therewas7.________afireburninginthefireplace,buttheChristmas8.____parentssinginganddancinghappily.9.___＼was＼_______lights_____________beautiful____and∧were动词形还要注意形和副动词形名词数冠词连词常光顾25Goahead！26Homework