高考英语书面表达讲解(示范课课件)

Tobetteryourwriting让你的作文起来YongchuanmiddleschoolDuGaoyan书面表达评讲之:建议性书信文体251252520-30minutes80-120wordsclear清楚accurate准确logical逻辑fluent流畅英语书面表达？语文作文？No!09年高考书面表达（重庆卷）国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括:自我介绍写信目的话题：我们应该感恩（thankful).推荐理由预祝活动成功注意：1.词数100左右;2.邮件格式已为你给出；3.邮件出不能出现本人信息；4.在答题卡上作答。Apieceofastudent’swork(学生作品）MynameisLiHua.IamastudentandIstudyinXinHuaMiddleSchool.Ioftenvisityourweb,andfromitIknowyouarefindingthemefromstudentsallovertheworld.Now,IwritethisletterbecauseIwanttorecommandatheme.Weshouldthankfulisagoodtheme.Ourfatherandmotherthrowthickandthinraiseus,weshouldbethankfultothem.Ourteacherteachesushowtostudy,leadingalotofknowledgeintoourhead.weshouldthanktothem.asaChinese,weshouldbethankful,becausewherethereisthankful,there’rehopestomaketheworldbetter,andonlywithathankfulheart,wecanrealizehowbeautifullifeis.Ireallyhopeyoucanchoosemytheme.Iwishtheactivitywillhaveansuccessfulend.15分Whatmakesagoodpieceofwriting?1.neatwriting书写2.content内容3.structure结构4.language语言GoodfirstimpressionWellorganizedandsmoothlydevelopedEverythingrequiredincludedNoChinglishNoGrammaticalmistakesexactlyusedwordsandrelativelychangedsentencepatterns应用文写作五部曲step1topicexploring审题step2wording构词step3sentencemaking成句step4essaywriting成篇step5improving修订Step1审题1审体裁2审人称3审时态4审要点定文章结构09年高考书面表达（重庆卷）国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括:自我介绍写信目的话题：我们应该感恩（thankful).推荐理由预祝活动成功注意：1.词数100左右;2.邮件格式已为你给出；3.邮件出不能出现本人信息；4.在答题卡上作答。三段式总分总自我介绍写信目的话题（我们应该感恩）列举理由预祝活动成功inbriefindetailinbriefStep2wording拼写词性近义词同音词单复数冠词大小写Simplemistakesleaveabadimpression!MynameisLiHua.IamastudentandIstudyinXinHuaMiddleSchool.Ioftenvisityourweb,andfromitIknowyouarefindingthemesfromstudentsallovertheworld.Now,IwritethisletterbecauseIwanttorecommandatheme.Weshouldthankfulisagoodtopic.Ourfatherandmotherthrowthickandthinraiseus,weshouldbethankfultothem.Ourteachersteachushowtostudy,leadingalotofknowledgeintoourhead.weshouldthanktothem.asaChinese,weshouldbethankful,becausewherethereisthankful,there’rehopestomaketheworldbetter,andwithathankfulheart,wecanrealizehowbeautifullifeis.Ireallyhopeyoucanchoosemytheme.Iwishtheactivitywillhaveansuccessfulend.beaAslookingfortopicsrecommendtopictopicthroughthickandthinthankfulness17分step3sentencing成句1简单句2并列句3复合句4非谓语形式5特殊结构时态，语态别忘了并列连词NoChinglish!!连词的选择主语一致避生就熟！强调句型；倒装；独立主格结构……1.MynameisLiHua.IamastudentandIstudyinXinHuaMiddleSchool.2.Ioftenvisityourweb,andfromitIknowyouarelookingfortopicsfromstudentsallovertheworld.IamLihua,astudentfromXinHuaMiddleschool.Improveyoursentences.Ioftenvisityourwebsite,whereIgotthenewsthatyou’relookingfortopicsfromstudentsallovertheworld.1.Weshouldthankfulisagoodtheme.2.Ourfatherandmotherthroughthickandthinraiseus,weshouldbethankfultothem.3.Ourteacherteachesushowtostudy,leadingalotofknowledgeintoourhead,weshouldthanktothem.4.Onlywithathankfulheart,wecanrealizehowbeautifullifeis.5.Ireallyhopeyoucanchoosemytheme.6.Iwishtheactivitywillhaveasuccessfulend..Haveatry!1.Weshouldbethankfulisagoodtopic.Thatweshouldbegratefulisagoodidea.2.Ourfatherandmotherthroughthickandthinraiseus,weshouldbethankfultothem.Itisourparentswhobroughtusupthroughthickandthin,soweshouldthankthem.3.Ourteachersteachushowtostudy,leadingalotofknowledgeintoourhead.weshouldthankthem.Weoweourteachersthanks,forwecouldn’tbewhowearenowwithouttheirhardwork.4.AsaChinese,weshouldbethankful,andonlywithathankfulheart,wecanrealizehowbeautifullifeis.ThankfulnessisalsoourtraditionalChinesevirtue.Onlywithathankfulheart,canwefullyrealizehowbeautifullifeis.5.Ireallyhopeyoucanchoosemytopic.Iwouldreallyappreciateit,ifmytopicischosen.Hopefully,mytopicwillbechosen.6.Iwishtheactivitywillhaveansuccessfulend.Wishtheactivityagreatsuccess.Mayyouractivitysucceed.Step4成篇Thatweshouldbethankfulisagoodidea.Itisourparentswhobroughtusupthroughthickandthin,soweshouldthankthem.Weoweourteachersthanks,forwecouldn’tbewhowearenowwithouttheirhardwork.ThankfulnessisalsoourtraditionalChinesevirtue.Wherethereisthankfulness,therearehopestomaketheworldbetter.Onlywithathankfulheart,canwefullyrealizehowbeautifullifeis.InmyopinionfirstlybesidesWhat’smoreNecessaryconjunctionsmakeapiecesawritingmoresmoothlydeveloped.应用文写作五部曲step1topicexploring审题step2wording构词step3sentencemaking成句step4essaywriting成篇step5improving修订draft(草稿）Now,Let’scheckwhetherourwritinghasbeenimprovedincontent,structureandlanguage?我们的文章亮起来了么？I’mLihua,astudentfromXinHuaMiddleSchool.Ioftenvisityourwebsite,whereIgotthewonderfulnewsthatyou’relookingfortopicsfromstudentsallovertheworld.Here,I’mwritingtorecommendone.Inmyopinion,thatweshouldbethankfulisagoodidea.Firstly,itisourparentswhobroughtusupthroughthickandthin,soweshouldthankthem.Besides,weoweourteachersthanks,forwecouldn’tbewhowearenowwithouttheirhardwork.What’smore,thankfulnessisalsoourtraditionalChinesevirtue.Wherethereisthankfulness,therearehopestomaketheworldbetter.Onlywithathankfulheart,canwefullyrealizehowbeautifullifeis.Hopefully,mytopicwillbechosen.Wishtheactivityagreatsuccess.23分建议