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高考书面表达专练人物介绍（IntroducingSomebody）美文欣赏（EnjoyReading）AlthoughPrinceton,NewJersey,hasaworld-famousuniversity,itisstillasmallquiettown.Itisnotaplacewhereanyonewouldexpecttoseestrangecharactersonthestreet.Thatiswhyonewomanwillneverforgetthedayin1940when,asachild,shesuddenlysawafunny-lookingmancomingtowardsher.“Iremember,”shetellsherchildrennow,“howwildhiswhitehairlooked---asifithadbeenelectrified.Hewasshort.Hisclothesseemedtobejustpulledontokeephimcovered,likeablankettokeeponewarm.Hehadabignose,ashort,thickmoustache,anddeep-seteyes.Hewasstaring,thinking.幻灯片4这一段的确写得很精彩，以至于每每看到爱因斯坦的画像时总想起这段描写，而背读起这段文字时眼前又总是浮现出爱因斯坦的形象。Healmostknockedmedownbeforehesawme.Hegavemeafriendlysmile,thenhewalkedonandwentonthinking.Inoticedhehadonbedroomslippers.Hehadforgottentoputonhisshoes.Helookedasifhehadjuststeppedoutofmybookoffairytalesandhadpassedmelikeaspirit.幻灯片5这或许就是我们常常说到的“形象生动”、“栩栩如生”吧。文段边忆边叙，为我们刻画了一位大鼻深眼、短须乱发、衣着随意、不修边幅的人物形象，而他竟然是大名鼎鼎的爱因斯坦，也难怪Hewasstaring,thinking。ThatnightatdinnerwhenItoldmyfamilyaboutthestrange,funnymanIhadseen,myfatherputdownhisknifeandfork,lookedatmeandsaid,‘Mychild,rememberthis.Todayyousawthegreatestmanintheworld!’”ThatmanwasElbertEinstein.HowandwhyhehadcometoPrinceton,NewJerseyisastoryofstruggle,success,andsadness.幻灯片2推荐背诵文段常用表达法1.性别与婚姻（Sex&Marriage）I’mamanoffortyandhavea9-year-olddaughter.Shegotmarriedin1980andnowshehasbeenmarriedformorethan20years.I’m35,maleandunmarried.IgotmarriedfiveyearsagobutnowI’msingle.2.年龄（Age）Hewasbornin1995andiseightyearsoldnow.Bornin1985,heisnowan18-year-oldstudent,studyinginauniversity.Hebegantomakealivingattheageof14/atanearlyage.Inhisfifties,hebegantofeelhisage.Bytheageof14,hehadsetupachemistrylabofhisown.3.外貌特征（Appearance）Sheisalovelygirl,witharoundface,bigeyes,whiteteethandlongwavinghair.Heisthin,tallandwearingapairofthickglasses.Heisagood-looking/funny-lookingman,withathickmoustachebutnohairleft.Heisatallman,withblueeyesandblondhair.deep-seteyes,bigbrighteyes,longstraightnose,browncurlinghair,broadshoulders4.身高（Height）Heis1.76meterstall.Heis176centimeterstall.Heis176centimetersinheight.Theboyisnottallenoughtoreachtheappleoverhead.Heisreallyatallman,about1.98metersinheight.Myheightis1.76metres.(不合英语习惯)I’m1.76metershigh.（身高不宜用high）5.健康状况（Health）Welllookedafter,thechildrenlookhealthy.I’mnotsostrong,but(I’m)ingoodhealth.Havingbeeninhospitalforsixmonths,nowshelooksveryweak.6.教育状况（Education）Istartedschoolin1984andleftschool12yearslater.IwenttostudyinBeijingUniversityin1984and4yearslaterIgraduated(fromthatuniversity).Welearnedmanycourses,including…I’vebeenstudyinginTianshanPrimarySchool(No.1HighSchool,FudanUniversity)formorethantwoyearsandwillgraduatenextyear.Igotmybachelor’s(master’s,doctor’s)degreeinmathematicsinApril1998...7.特长爱好（Specialty&Hobbies）I’mgoodatspokenEnglishandevenbetteratusingcomputers.IwonthefirstprizeintheEnglishspeechcontestatschoollastyear.Hegotthefirstplaceinthehomepagedesigningcontest.Myfavoritesportisswimmingandplayingtable-tennis.Inmysparetime,Ilikereadingandenjoyingtraveling.8.详细特色（Somethingindetail）举例法（Givingexamples）:–Hewasstrictwitheverybodyandineverythinghedid.Oneday,wewerehavingclasseswhen…–Hewasveryforgetful.Oncehecameacrossanoldfriendofhisinthestreetand...–Hehadastrangewayofmakinghisclasseslivelyandinteresting.Istillremembermyfirstdayasachemistrystudent.写作练习李涛是我校年轻的老教师。他被看作是老教师，是因为他教化学课已经有20年了。说他年轻，因为他今年还不过38岁。他长得较瘦。头上头发不多，灰白了。他戴着深度眼镜，牙齿又缺了2颗。所以他看上去比他实际年龄要大。他说，在公共汽车上常常有人给他让座。事实上。我曾看见他不止一次地给怀抱婴儿的妇女让过座。只要听一听他的化学课——那课又生动又有趣，你就会发现他真正的年龄。习作点评LiTaoisayoungbut“old”teacherinourschool.Heisoftenregardedasanoldteacherbecausehehastaughtchemistryforover20years.Heisathinmanwiththickglasses.Thelittlegreyhairandlackingoftwoteethmakehimlookolderthanhisrealage.Heoftensaysthattherearemanypeoplegivingtheirseatstohiminbuses.Butinfact,Isawhimgivinghisseattothewomanwhotakesherbabyinherarmsmorethanonce.Ifyouhavehislivelyandinterestingchemistrylessons,youwillfindthatheisnomorethan38yearsold.本文叙议结合，对原材料调控有度，取舍得当，是一篇很好的习作。修改建议：1.第二段第一句有chinglish之嫌，可改为:…saysthatmanypeoplegivetheirseatstohim.2.whotakes改为whotook。3.最后一句应改为Ifyouhaveeverhad…参考范文AteacherLiTaoisayoungandoldteacherinourschool.Heisregardedasbeingoldforhehasbeenteachingherefor20years.Heisseen,atthesametime,asbeingyoungasheisnowbut38yearsold.Hedoesn’thavemuchhaironthehead.Anditisnearlyallwhite.Missingtwoteethandwearingthickglasses,helooksolderthanhereallyis.Hesayspeopleoftenoffertheirseatstohimforhisoldlooks.Onthecontrary,Imyselfsawhimgiveuphisseattoawomanwithababyinherarms.Atleasttwicehedidso.Whenyouattendhisinterestingandlivelyclasses,youwillbesureofhisrealage---stillyoung.