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英语漫画作文示例１文字材料类示例２漫画类1.观察漫画Howtowriteagoodessay?2.解析意图3.布局谋篇3parts:1)describethepicture2)interpretitsmeaning(purposes/reasons)3)giveyouropinionsaboutthephenomenon布局谋篇漫画的画面细节漫画的夸张寓意(与现实的矛盾之处）细节夸张寓意Don’tcopyother’swayofsolvingtheproblem.Doeverythingintherightway.读图与立意细节夸张寓意Thestudentsaswellastheirparentsonlyfocusontheiracademicachievements,neglectingpsychologicalqualityandmoralstandards.1.Don’tbetooconfidentinreallife.2.Behonestandmodest.3.Don’tjudgeabookbyitscover.Part1DescribethepictureThepictureistalkingabout/shows…Thepictureshowsacommonphenomenonthat....Thepicturedescribesaninterestingphenomenonthat...Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,Ascanbeseeninthepicture,Part2InterpretthepictureItseemsveryridiculousthat…However,thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere.Thepictureshowsthat…Itistheexactreflectionof…Thepictureindicatesthatwe…Nowadays,itisacommonphenomenonthat…Thisisasatirical(讽刺的)cartoonwhichdescribesvividlyakindofcommonphenomenonamong…Part3Giveyouropinions•Ithink/believethat•AsfarasI’mconcerned,•Inmyopinion,•Frommypointofview,•should•Itisbetter/advisableto…•Iconsideritnecessary…Onlyinthiswaycan….Somethingtoadd：保证三要素－体裁、人称、时态正确体裁：人称：时态：注意“三写”：拼写，书写，大小写Groupwork（2）:2.PolishupanessayInyourspokenEnglishclass,yourteachershowsyouthispicture.Youareaskedtodescribethepictureandexplainhowyouunderstandit.Description:1.Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,2.Ascanbeseeninthepicture3.Inthepicture,thereare…/…is(are)doing…Transitionsentences:1.Thepictureshowsthat…Itistheexactreflectionof…2.Itseemsveryridiculousthat…However,thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere.Opinion/suggestion/solution:AsfarasI’mconcerned,/Frommypointofview,•Itisbetter/advisableto…•Iconsideritnecessary…Inthepictureaboywithaheavybagistypingquicklyonacomputerwhichhangsoverhischest.Thoughitseemsconvenientsincehecanusethecomputerwhereverhewants,thereisnodoubtthathecan’tgetridoftheattractionofthecomputer.Thefunnypictureistheexactreflectionofthekidsinmodernsociety,thatistheaddictiontotheelectronicproducts.Somekidsrelyonthemsomuchthattheycanhardlykeeptheirhandsoffthem.Benefitsastheadvancedproductshavebrought,beingaddictedtothemdoesnogoodtothekids.Actuallyawasteoftimeinplayingthemwillhaveabadeffectonkidshealthandstudy,worsestillleadtocommittingcrimes.Possibleversion:(negative)AsfarasI’mconcerned,itisacceptabletospendpropertimeinplayingtheelectronicproducts.However,overdoingistospoilthefuture.Instead,thekidsshouldjoininsomeothermeaningfulactivitiestoenrichtheirlife.Inthepicturewecanseeclearlyaboyplayinghappilywithacomputer,whichhangsoverhischest.Iguessheiswalkingonthewayhomeafterschool,withaschoolbagonhisback.ItisobviousthatheisenjoyingsomethinginterestinglikewatchingaTVprogramthroughthepowerfulInternet.Asisknowntoall,withtherapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,advancedelectricproductslikecomputersarebecomingsmallerandlighter.Thusitismoreconvenientforthestudentstocarrywherevertheygo.Youmaytakeitforgrantedthattheboyistooaddictedtocomputergames.ButIadoptapositiveattitude.Foronereason,youngpeopleincludingstudentsarealwaysthefirsttotrynewproducts.Possibleversion:(positive)Anotherreasonisthatthestudents’burdenissoheavythattheyhavelittletimetorelaxthemselves.Personally,intheirsparetime,aslongastheyusecomputersproperlywithoutinterferingwithlearning,theycanhavefunwithcomputers,liketheboyinthepicture.•仔细审题•准确立义•规范行文•整洁书写一篇好的英语漫画作文