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TheAffiliatedHighSchooltoJilinUniversity吉大附中吴轶佳Ifyouwanttobeskilledinwriting,firstofall,youneedtobeanefficient,thoughtfulandwiselearner.写作是综合能力的体现，要想成中考中的写作达人，应该在总复习的过程中成为一个高效，善思，智慧的学习者。Initially(=Firstly),beasharpobserver（观察者）.---Theremustbethoughtbehindphenomenon.（看透现象后的问题）Whattopicscanyoufindoutfromthesepictures?TopicsthatareconcernedwiththepicturesA.Studentsareundertoomuchpressure.B.Studentshavenofreetimetodowhattheylike.C.Parentsfitasmuchastheywantintotheirchildren'slives.D.Parentsarealwaystryingtoplantheirchildren'slives.初三的学生即将面临(bearoundthecorner)中考，学习的压力很大，最近取消初三学生晚自习(eveningself-study)的消息在学生和家长当中引发了很大反响。请根据此内容，按照如下提示写一篇不少于80词的小短文。1.谈谈你对此话题的个人观点。2.为什么你觉得应该保留或者取消晚自习。3.你觉得应该如何更有效地合理地计划安排自己的时间。长春市第45中学英语模拟考试书面表达（B）Whatismore,beanopen-mindedlearner.---Icanmakefulluseofanyleanringresources(学习资源)，especiallyourtextbooks.RelatedunitsinourtextbooksGrade8IIUnit2ReadingMaybeyoushouldlearntorelax.Topic:causesofproblemsGrade9Unit1ReadingHowdoyoudealwithproblems?Topic:howtodothingsUnit3ReadingShouldIbeallowedtomakemyowndecisions?Topic:agreeanddisagreeUsefulwords&expressionsabouttargettopicscomplainv.complaintn.busyadj.pushyadj.comparev.crazyadj.freedomn.solutionn.realizev.opportunityn.syn.=chancen.volunteerv.achievev.importancen.succeedv.Usefulwords&expressionsabouttargettopicstrytofitasmuchaspossibleinto...undertoomuchpressuretiredkidsjoinafter-schoolclubspush...alotsend...tokindsofclassesagree(with...)findithardtothinkforoneselfplan...forsb.ontheonehandontheotherhandneedtimeandfreedomtorelaxneedtimetodothingsbythemselvesSohowdowedealwith...?withthehelpof...worryabout...practiceone'shobbiesasmuchassb.wantspendtimeon...beallowedtomakedecisionsforoneselfachieveone'sdreamSincetheentranceexamisaroundthecorner,westudentsaresupposedtomakefulluseofeverypossible_________,ofwhichself-studyisa_________one.Therefore,I_________theideathateveningself-studyshouldbekept.Totellthetruth,it'snoteasyto_________studyathome,nomatterhowmuchI'minterestedingettingknowledge.However,studyingisefficientwhenthewholeclassarelearningquietly.Suchgoodlearningenvironment_________metodomybesttokeepupwiththosehard-workingguys.Besides,wheneverImeetaproblem,Ihavemyteachersto_________.Thiscan'thappenwhenI'maloneinmystudyandprobablyIwill_________moretries.Asformyafterschooltime,I_________keepagoodbalanceofworkandplay.Ontheonehand,I'llfinishallmyschooltasksassoonaspossible.Ontheotherhand,relaxingactivitieslikepracticinghobbiesorhangingoutwithfriendsalsohelpmetobe_________instudies.crucialchanceagreewithconcentrateonencourageshelpmeoutgiveupprefertoactivebeusefulto,crucial,chance,concentrateon,encourage,help...out,giveup,prefertodo,agreewith,activeLastbutnotleast,beacriticalandflexible(有主见的和善于变通的)learner.---I'vebeenacrash(速成的)writingexpert.初三的学生即将面临(beinthecorner)中考，学习的压力很大，最近取消初三学生晚自习(eveningself-study)的消息在学生和家长当中引发了很大反响。请根据此内容，按照如下提示写一篇不少于80词的小短文。1.从你的角度你非常赞成取消晚自习。2.为什么你觉得取消晚自习对你有利。3.你会如何合理地计划安排自己的时间。长春市第45中学英语模拟考试书面表达（B）Imitate(模仿)andrewrite(改写)Sincetheentranceexamisaroundthecorner,westudentsaresupposedtomakefulluseofeverypossiblechance,_________________________.Therefore,Iagreewiththeideathateveningself-studyshouldbe_________.---beginningofwhichself-studyisacrucialonekeptButitdoesn'tmeanwedon'tneedtimeandfreedomtodothingsbyourselves.canceled.Asforhowtoplanmyafter-schooltime,Iprefertokeepagoodbalanceofworkandplay.Ontheonehand,I'llfinishallmyschooltasksassoonaspossible.Ontheotherhand,relaxingactivitieslikepracticinghobbiesorhangingoutwithfriendsalsohelpmetobeactiveinstudy.---endingTakefulladvantage(充分利用）ofourtextbooks聪明的你一定发现了，我们把可以利用的那篇小文章中开头部分的观点倒置，最后一段保留或做简单修改，完成了开头和结尾部分。一篇高端大气上档次的作文就新鲜出炉了。中考作文怎能难倒我们。Thesecondparagraphaboutwhyyouthinkitshouldbecanceledisactuallyapieceofcake.如果再利用从教材中总结归纳的单词，短语，句型结构完成对于观点的说明和支持，(Don'tforgettheusefulwordsandexpressionscollectedfromthetextbooks.)Initially,AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.Awholedayofclassesandexerciseshasbeentiringenough.Ifparentsandteacherstrytofitasmuchaspossibleintoourafter-schooltime,lifeisnofunatall.Wedothinkweshouldbeallowedtodowhatwearereallyinterestedin,especiallywhenwehaveaplanorto-dolist.Fromanotherperspective,wedon'twanttofindithardtothinkforourselveswhenwearegettingolder.Thereductionoftimeatschoolwillhelpuslearntobemoreindependentbothingrowingandinstudyandalsoit'scertainthatwewillbenefitalotfromplanningthingsforourselves.DIYTime---thesecondparagraphUsefulwords&expressionswecanusetrytofitasmuchaspossibleinto...undertoomuchpressuretiredkidsjoinafter-schoolclubspush...alotsend...tokindsofclassesagree(with...)findithardtothinkforoneselfplan...forsb.ontheonehandontheotherhandneedtimeandfreedomtorelaxneedtimetodothingsbythemselvesSohowdowedealwith...?withthehelpof...worryabout...practiceone'shobbiesasmuchassb.wantspendtimeon...beallowedtomakedecisionsforoneselfachieveone'sdreamHowcanwefinishourcompositionintheentranceexaminationpaperperfectly?Withthehelpofthetopicsandrelatedwordsandexpressionsthatwearesofamiliarwithinourtextbooks,wecanjustdoit.Let'ssumup.1.审题，确定相关话题2.联系教材，搜索可以利用的单词，短语，句式和结构3.按