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写作技巧(一)投诉信Aletterofcomplaint关键词：委婉性重要性紧迫性注意点：1.开门见山（写信目的）2.委婉又据理力争（词句要有力量）3.条理清晰写作思路:1.简单介绍自己，同时道出要抱和失望的总领句2.罗列具体存在的问题①②③体现重要性3.问题的紧迫性及表达自己希望解决问题的要求或方式Dear,Iam.HereIamwritingtoyoutocallyourattentiontosomeproblemsabout______.Foronething,.Foranother,.Besides,.(强调重要性或委婉的恭维).Soitisurgenttotakemeasuresto.HereIdodemand.Iamlookingforwardto.Thankyouverymuch.sincerelyyours,signature•Taskone:•假如你是李雷，请你就本校食堂（canteen）的状况，给校长(principal)写一封抱怨信,内容要求如下：•饭菜贵质量差•服务不好•环境嘈杂拥挤DearMr.Principal,IamLiLeifromClass10Grade3.HereIamwritingtoexpressmydisappointmentwiththecanteenproblemsoncampus.First,thedishesatourcanteenareratherexpensivewithbynomeansgoodqualityandtaste.Furthermore,farfrombeingkindandwarm-hearted,theworkersalwaysappeartobecoldandimpatienttousstudents.What’sworse,thecanteenisbecomingmoreandmorecrowedandnoisywhichdefinitelyisnotgoodforustoenjoyourmealsinsuchenvironment.Nutritiousanddeliciousmealsdoplayabasicallyimportantroleinourstudyinglife,soitisurgenttotakemeasurestoimprovethecurrentsituations.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyouwithasatisfactoryanswer.Thankyouverymuch.SincerelyLiLei（二）建议信Aletterofsuggestion关键词：合理性写作思路：1.表明个人身份，表达写作目的2.表明建议的原因及对应切实可行的建议内容3.希望对方认真考虑注意：1.词汇要避免重复suggest/propose/recommend/advise2.句型要转化多样如；Asto……...,Isuggest……..Inviewsof…….,itisnecessaryto…….………bringsbirthtomyadvicethat…………….3.要语气委婉如：Ithinkitwouldbebetterif……IfIwereyou,Imightaswell…..写作模板：Dear,I’m.Asa,I’mwritingwithmysuggestionsconcerning.Inthefirstplace,itisnecessarytointermsof.Secondly,asto,Isuggest.Inaddition,considering,itwouldbebetterif.Ihopethatyou’lltakemysuggestionsintoconsiderationandIwouldbemorethanhappytosee.SincerelyyoursXXXX范文示例：假如你是李雷，你要就图书馆存在的问题校长写封建议信。内容要求如下存在问题①藏书陈旧且少②阅览室灯光黑暗③电脑键盘失修针对各个问题提出切实可行的建议校长Principal阅览室theStudyRoomDearPrincipal,I’mLiLei,fromGradeThree.Asastudentlongingforknowledge,Ifeelobligedtowritemysuggestionsconcerningtheproblemsofourlibrary.First,itisnecessarytoimprovetheefficiencyofpurchasingnewbooksandvariousacademicjournalsintermsoftheoutdatedandinsufficientresourcesinourlibrary.Secondly,astotherelativelydimlightbringingtoomuchinconveniencetous,Isuggestthestudyroomshouldbeequippedwithabetterlightningsystem.Inaddition,giventhepoorperformanceofthekeyboardsofcomputers,Iwouldliketoputforwardmyproposalthattheyshouldberepairedassoonaspossibleorourschoolshouldchangethemintobrand-newones.Ihopethatyou’lltakemysuggestionsintoseriousconsiderationandIwouldbemorethanhappytoseereforms.SincerelyyoursLiLei•（三）对比类•观点对比：•针对同一个观点有相对立的看法，此类对比常常出现在议论文或个别书信中•写作思路：1.通过主题句引出要讨论的主题•2.陈述正方的观点或做法及理由•3.陈述反方的观点或做法及理由•4.表明自己的观点或结论及阐述理由并总结全文结构模板（一、正反对比）：Thetopicabout___isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.Somepeopleprefertoconsiderdoingsth(somestudentssay___istheirfavorite.)theythinkthat_________(理由一).What’smore__________(理二).Moreover______(理由三)However,othersbelieve_______isabetterchoiceforthreereasons.Tobeginwith,_____(理由一).Next,__________(理由二).Inaddition,_____________(理由三).Frommypointofview,theformerissurelyawisechoice.Thereasonisthat……(AsfarasIamconcerned,IfirmlysupportTheviewthat依我看来我坚决支持这种观点…)结构模板（二、有利有弊）：Nowadays,thereisawidespreadconcernover(theissuethat)___作文题目______.Infact,therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesin__题目议题_____.Generallyspeaking,itiswidelybelievedthereareseveralpositiveaspectsasfollows.Firstly,___优点一______.Andsecondly___优点二_____.JustAsapopularsayinggoes,everycoinhastwosides,讨论议题______isnoexception,andinanotherword,itstillhasnegativeaspects.Tobeginwith,___缺点一______.Inaddition,____缺点二______.Tosumup,weshouldtrytobringtheadvantagesof__讨论题____intofullplay,andreducethedisadvantagestotheminimumatthesametime.Inthatcase,wewilldefinitelymakeabetteruseofthe____讨论议题___.范文1：目前,越来越多的中学生利用周末上各种各样的培训或请家教.对于这一现象,存在两种不同观点:有些人认为有必要另一些人认为没有必要1、跟老师学比自己学好1、容易养成依赖习惯2、可以巩固课堂所学内容2、学生需要时间休息3、可以学到更多的东西3、许多培训班和家长以赚钱为目的请你根据以上提示,以IsaTrainingClassorPrivateTeacherNecessary为题,写一篇120词左右的短文,映表中内容,并简要阐述自己的观点.文章开头已给出,计入总词数.要求:层次清晰,连贯流畅;表达灵活,不要逐字逐句翻译.IsaTrainingClassorPrivateTeacherNecessaryMoreandmoremiddleschoolstudentsaregoingtoallkindsoftrainingclassesorhavingprivateteachersattheweekend.Therearetwodifferentviewpointsaboutit.Somethinkitnecessary.Firstly,theythinkthatit'smoreeffectivetostudywithateacherthanbyoneself.Secondly,itcanstrengthenwhatislearntinclass.Besides,theycanlearnalotmore.WhileOthersthinkitawasteoftime.Foronething,studentscaneasilyformthehabitofdependence.Foranother,studentsneedtorelaxfromtimetotime.What'smore,thepurposeofmanytrainingclassesorprivateteachersistomakemoney.Frommypointofview,whetheratrainingclassoraprivateteacherisneededalldepends.Ifyouarereallyveryweakincertainsubject,maybeit'sOKforyou.Butbesuretochooseagoodandsuitableclassorteacher,otherwiseitwouldbeawasteoftimeandmoney.英语书面表达技巧·便条假定你叫李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住一户英国人家。今天你的房东MrsMilson不在家，你要外出，给MrsWilson写一张留言条，容包括：•1.外出购物2.提房东还书•3.Tracy来电留言：1）咖啡屋（BohonCoffee)见面取消2）此事已告知Susan3）尽快回电•要求：1，字数：100字左右2.可适当添加细节，使情节连贯•MrsWilson,I’mgoingoutshopping,andwon’tbebackuntilabout5:00pm.IhavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary.Atabout1o’clockthisafterno