高中英语写作技巧之连贯性

Coherenceinwriting写作之连贯性1.覆盖了所有的要点；2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。高考考纲要求Achievingcoherence表达连贯性的要求是：段落与段落，句与句之间有一定的衔接。代词Thereisnothingimportantintoday’snewspaper.Youdon’thavetoreadtoday’snewspaper.Ifyouarefamous,peoplewillwatchyouallthetimeandfollowyoueverywhere._______couldmakeyourlifedifficult.Thisit同义词Ilikesports.Ialsolikemusic.Thentheywentonwithoftheascent.Theclimbwasanextremelydifficultone.然后他们继续向上攀登，这是一次极难的攀登。carefor同位语I’mTom.I’maboyof16.I’mTom,aboyof16.MrLiisournewteacher.Heiskindtous.MrLi,ournewteacher,iskindtous.MynextstopwouldbeJiuzhaigou.It’saplaceinSichuanProvince.MynextstopwouldbeJiuzhaigou,aplaceinSichunProvince.定语从句Hefailedintheexam.Thismadehisfatherveryangry.Hefailedintheexam,whichmadehisfatherveryangry.I’dliketovisitBeijing.Beijingappealstopeoplefromallovertheworld.I’dliketovisitBeijing,whichappealstopeoplefromallovertheworld.状语从句Themealwasverynice.Weallenjoyeditverymuch.Themealwassonicethatweallenjoyeditverymuch.Youdon’tstartearly.Youcan’tgetthereintime.Ifyoudon’tstartearly,youcan’tgetthereintime.过渡词：1）表示并列的关联词both…and…,either…or…,neither…nor…notonly…butalso…,not…but…,2)表示转折的关联词but,however,while,onthecontrary,3)表示递进的关联词besides,inaddition,what’smore,what’sworse,worsestill4)表示结果的关联词astheresult,asaconsequence,thus,therefore5)表示目的的关联词inorderthat/tosothat/soasto6)表示先后顺序的关联词first,firstly,firstofall,aboveall,tobeginwith,secondly,next,then,besides，inaddition,what’smore,finally,lastbutnotleast,mostimportantlyontheonehand,ontheotherhand;foronething,foranother7).发表见解inmyopinion,asfarasIknow,asfarasIamconcerned,personally,8).表示总结inaword,inshort,tosumup,allinallinconclusion9).其他muchtoone’ssurprise/joy/satisfactioninfact,inreality,asamatteroffact,tobefrank,totellyouthetruthasIhavesaid，asweknow,asisknowntoall,inotherwords,inparticular,generallyspeaking,151.(因为)_____hishelp,Ifinishedtheworkatlast.ThankstoAsaresultof因为Becauseof162.Moreroadswillhavetobebuiltwithmorecars,__________（所以）we’llhavelessfieldtogrowrice.thereforesoasaresult/consequence,thus结果173.Therentisreasonable,__________,thelocationisperfect.房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。what’smoremoreover/furthermoreinadditionbesides另外184.______________(我认为),studentshadbetternotbuyacellphone.AsfarasI’mconcernedInmyopinion个人观点Personally,195.__________(总之),weshouldmakegooduseofcomputer.IngeneralInaword/allinall总结Inshort/briefGenerallyspeaking20简单句：Takingexercisedoesgoodtoourhealth.高级句式：__________________________________,takingexercisedoesgoodtoourhealth.众所周知，锻炼对健康有好处。Asweallknow／Asisknowntoall21简单句：Itrainedheavily.Wehadtostayatthehotel.高级句式：Itrainedheavily;_____________,wehadtostayatthehotel.asaresult22简单句：Iboughtsomefashionableclothes.Iwenttoseeawonderfulperformance.高级句式：Iboughtsomefashionableclothes;___________________,Iwenttoseeawonderfulperformance.besides／what’smore23简单句：Iwaslostatthestation.Itwasgettingdark.高级句式：Iwaslostatthestation;________________,itwasgettingdark.what’sworse1.Onecankeepfitinthefollowingways.________,oneshouldkeepabalanceddiet._______,oneistoexerciseregularly._______,oneistogetridofbadhabits,suchasdrinkingandsmoking.___________________,makesuretobealwaysinagoodmood.AndlastbutnotleastFirstlySecondlyThirdly2.Nowadays,withthelivingstandardsimprovingrapidly,massesofpeoplehavecarsoftheirown,whichcertainlybenefitthemalot.(请列出两条益处)2.______________,peoplecangetaroundfreely.__________,itisconvenientforthemtotravelincars.ForonethingForanotherWritingskillsYoucanbecome…,whichis…Thismeans…Sowhen……sometimeseveninpainAsyouknow…Lastly……so…But…Howdoesthewriterlistthe3waysnaturallytoreachUsefultips结构联系使用关系代词which,as(定语从句)使用指示代词this,that,和it避免重复使用表示时间、次序的副词逻辑联系在内容上制造递进、对比、因果、转折等联系