1/8高一英语短文改错1.Havingadreamisofgreatimportance.Yourdreamsareordinaryandrealistic.IhopeIwilladmittedintoatopuniversityandbecomeagooddoctorafterIwillgraduatefromuniversity.IhopedonedayIcanfindacureforcancer.IhopethosewhomlovemeandthosewhomIlovewillbehealthyandlivehappyeveryday.Torealizemydreams,Iwilltakemoreexercisestobuildupmybody.Iwilltrymybesttofocustimeandenergytomystudy.Imustworkhardatmylessonsorbefullypreparingfortheentranceexam.【小题1】通篇都在讲我的梦想,因此代词Your--My。【小题2】will加动词原形,“被录取”beadmittedinto,will后面加be.2.Onenight,IwasonmywayhomeformyChristmasholidaywhenmycarbrokedown.Itwascompletedead,andIwasafewmilesawayfrommyhomeinthatcold,wetnight.IdecidedtowalkaroundalittleafteracceptingthatI’dhavetospendthenightinthecar.MaybeIcanfindatelephone.Actually,Ididn’thavetowalkfarbeforeIfoundthesmallhousestandinginafieldwithalightshonefromthesittingroom.Iknockedthedoorwasdelightedwhenapleasantoldmanopenedthedoorandlistenedtomystorycarefully.Hesaidhehadnotelephoneandthatitwasn’tanywithinwalkingdistance,buttheoldmanwhoofferedtogotorepairmycar.【答案】1.complete改为completely2.in改为on3.after改为before4.can改为could5.the改为a6.shone改为shining7.knocked后加at/on2/88.was前加and9.it改为there10.who删掉3.MynameisLiHua.IwasborninQingdao,ShandongprovinceonFebruary1995.Istartedtheschoolin2001whenIwassix.IstudiedhappyinGuangmingPrimarySchoolfrom2001to2007.AfterthatIwenttoNo.39MiddleSchoolofQingdaoandgraduatelastsummer.ThemainsubjectsIstudyatschoo1includedChinese,maths,English,physics,chemistryandcomputer.IlikeEnglishandcomputerbestandIamverygoodatit.LastyearIwinnedfirstprizeintheschoolcomputercompetition.InmysparetimeIenjoylisteningpopularmusicandcollectingstamp.Myfavouritesportsisswimminginsummerandskatinginwinter.【答案】【小题1】on-in【小题2】去掉the【小题3】happy-happily【小题4】graduate-graduated【小题5】study-studied【小题6】it-them【小题7】winned-won【小题8】listening-listeningto【小题9】stamp-stamps【小题10】is-are【解析】4.Maryisahighschoolstudent,whodevotedherselftoherlessonseveryday.LastSaturday,asusual,shewenttoseveralclass.Intheevening,shecontinuedtostudyuntildeeplyintonight.Shewastoosleepyandtiredthatshecouldn’tworkeffectively.OntheSundaymorning,shewasabouttodoherlessonswhileherfathercameupandadvisedhertotakeabreak.Soontheycameupagoodidea.Wedecidedtogocyclinginthecountryside.Maryenjoyedherself,competingandchattingwithherfather,andfeltrelaxingintheopenair.OnMonday,Marywasenergeticbutactiveinclass.【答案】【小题1】devoted改为devotes【小题2】class改为classes3/8【小题3】deeply改为deep【小题4】too改为so【小题5】去掉the【小题6】while改为when【小题7】加上with【小题8】We改为They【小题9】relaxing改为relaxed【小题10】but改为and5.Lastweekendwewentmountain-climbing.Eventheheavyraincannotstopus.Wesetoffearlyandwentalonganextremenarrowroad,allinhighspirit.Oneithersideoftheroadwasgreenfields.Wecouldhearthesoundoftherainmixingwithourlaughter.Atnoonwereachedtothetopofthemountain,therewewereamazedbythebeautyofthescenes.Aftershortrest,westartedgoingdownItrainedmoreharder.Wewerewetallover,andwestillfelthappy.【答案】【小题1】can改为could【小题2】extreme改为extremely【小题3】spirit改为spirits【小题4】was改为were【小题5】mixing改为mixed【小题6】去掉top【小题7】theres改为where【小题8】加上a【小题9】more改为much【小题10】and改为but6.Eventoday,amanwithgoodmannerwillpolitelyopenthedoorforalady,helpherputonhercoatwhennecessaryandseehersafelytothedoorofherhomebeforeadate.Whenamantakesawomanoutforadinner,itisconsideredimpolitetohelpherwithherchairwhenshegetsuporsitsdown.Onacrowdingtrainorbus,itisproperforamanofferawomanhisseat,particularifsheisoldorcarriesababy.Evenwhenitcomestoshakehands,ladiescomefirst.Itisimpoliteforamantoextendhishandforahandshakeuponfirstgreeting.Unlessawomandoesnotextendherhandtothemanfirst,themanshouldn’toffertheirs.4/87.DearMike,Howareyoudoing?ThankyouforyourhelpandgoodtreatwhileIwasstayedinSydneylastsummervacation.Youweresokindlyandfriendlytotreatmetothelocalfood,andtakeustodoalotofsightseeing.It’sreallynicetovisitSydney,whichbeautifulsceneryanddeliciousfoodgavemeabetterimpression.IhaveagreattimehereandlearnedalotaboutSydney.Mike,areyoufreethesedays?IwouldliketoinviteyouvisitChina.I’llactlikeaguidetoshowyouaroundtheplacesofinterestsinmyhometown.Yours,LiHua【答案】【小题1】was去掉【小题2】kindly-kind【小题3】us-me【小题4】which-whose【小题5】better-good【小题6】have-had【小题7】here-there【小题8】∧tovisit【小题9】like-as【小题10】interests-interest8.WhenIwasachild,Ispentmorethantenyearslearntheviolin.Therefore.Icouldn't5/8understand“realmusic”·AfterIgraduatedfromhighschool,thefriendofminesuggestedthatwestartedtolearntheguitarbecauseweallthoughtitwascool.Iwillneverforgetthedayonthatwewenttobuyguitarsintheguitarstore.HereIsawaguitarplayerplayingtheguitar,whichIreallyenjoyed.Hebecamemyfirstguitarteacher.ThereweretoomanywonderfulmodelstochoosethatittookmealongtimetobuyoneNowtheguitaristhemostimportantlypartofmylifeandIpracticeiteveryday.9.Thismorning,Igotothestorenearmyhometodosomeshopping.IwaswalkingdownthepassagewhileIgaveaviolentcough.Thewomanstandingnexttomewassoshockingthatsheconsequentlydroppedajarofoil.Forthatvery6/8moment,agirlwaswalkingby.Sheslippedontheoil,fellontothebrokeglassandhitherheadonthefloor.Afterawhile,therewerebloodpourdownherface.Ifeltreallyguiltyandsent