第11周四六级写作

提问子类模板一...issuchacommonmatterthateveryoneofusmaymeetitfromtimetotime.Peopleholddifferentviewstowards….Somepeople….Otherpeopleview…as…Personally,Iagreewiththesecondgroupofpeople.Justas…oncesaid,…Fewpersonscan…FromnowonIwillnot…Onthecontrary,Iwill….经典范文IsFailureaBadThing?失败是常有的事人们对失败有各种不同的态度我对失败的态度Failureissuchacommonmatterthateveryoneofusmaymeetitfromtimetotime.Peopleholddifferentviewstowardsfailureintheirlife.Somepeoplearesosadandfrustratedattheirunsuccessfulattemptsthattheywillneveraccumulatethecouragetohaveanothertry.Otherpeopleviewrepeatedfailureasmostnaturalonthewaytowardsaachievement－theywillkeepontryinguntiltheysucceedintheend.Personally,Iagreewiththesecondgroupofpeople.JustasJohnVanceCheneyoncesaid,“Thesoulwoundhavenorainbowhadtheeyesnotears.”Ifyouhaveonlyhadwonderfulthingshappentoyou,howcanyoubecomebrave?Ifyoucanonlyembracesuccessandwillneveracceptfailure,howcanyoubecomemature?Fewpersonscanbesuccessfulatthefirsttime,andfailurecanteachusmuchmorethansuccess.FromnowonIwillnotbetoomuchdiscouragedatfailure.Onthecontrary,Iwillbraceupandstanduptothenextchallenge,becausethemostgloriousmomentsarethosedayswhenIovercomethefeelingofdespairandrejuvenatemyselfwithhopeandaspiration.段落拓展方法过程分析法过程分析法（processanalysis）用作支配方法时，其目的是告诉读者怎样做某事，说明某事物的工作原理或某事物的制造方法。在我们日常从事的活动中就包括各种过程，如：如一顿饭、如何植树、如何做衣服、如何开机器等。过程分就是用于描述或者说明做某一事情时应遵循的程序或爿这种方法使用广泛。值得注意的是：1．整个过程的每一步骤必须尽可能简单明了，要记是要告诉读者怎样做一件事，而不是要把他们弄糊涂。2．每一必要步骤都要讲清楚，遗漏任何一个重要步会使事情做得不好，或者根本无法完成。3．每一步骤都必须按照时问的先后顺序排好。4．告诉读者，做某一事情时，必须准备哪些工乒器等。在进行过程分析法扩展段落时，经常使用祈使句及现在时。示范段落分析Coffeeisagooddrinktotreatyourguestsbecauseitisveryeasytomake．Youonlyneedapot，abottleofmadecoffee。aboxofsugarandsomehotwater．First,warmthepotwiththehotwater，letitstandforamomentbeforeyouemptyit．Then，putthecoffeeandthesugarthepot．Afterthat，fillthepotwithboilingwaterandforalittlewhile．Finally，letitstandfor3to5minuteyoucanserveyourguests．这一例是说明一件事情(冲咖啡)的过程。主题句“咖啡是招待客人的好饮料，且容易冲。”然后，作者使用了“first．then，afterthat，finally”这几个表示顺序的过渡词语来描述步骤的先后顺序，冲咖啡应遵循的步骤便一目了然了.HowtoStudyforaTestI’mgoingtowriteabouthowIpreparedmyselfforthetestIjusttook—theteston“Articles”．ThefirstthingIdidwastofindoutwhatthetestwasreallyabout．Althoughitseemsridiculous，itisn’t．Iknowmanystudentswhopreparedthemselvesforthewrongtest．Afterknowingwhatthetestwason．Igotsomebooksandcopieddownalltheinformationgivenonapieceofpaper．Thenextthingwasgettingthematerialsorganized．Iputallwehadtoknowaboutindefinitearticlesononepageandthesecondpagewasforthearticle．Thenlsatdownandmemorizedalltheexceptions．Practicingandusingthemcamenext．Ididsomeoftheexercisesgiveninthebookandsomearticlesinthenewspaperandexplainedtomyselfthereasonsforusingthearticlesineachcase．Ithinkitisthemostimportantthingtositforanexamwitharelaxedbodyandaneasymind．怎样准备测试?作者讲述了自己的准备过程。首先该做什么，然后做什么，最后做什么?都讲得清清楚楚，条理非常清晰，使读者一目了然。常用表示过程的过渡词语有：first，tostartwith，tobeginwith，then，next，later，afterthat，duringtheprocessof，finallyetc．示范段落1Evenifyoudon'tknowhowtocook，you'llneverstarvetodeathifyouknowhowtopreparescrambledeggs．Youbeginbymeltingonetablespoonofbutterinafryingpanoverlowheat．Whilethebutterismelting，breakthreeeggsintoabowl．Add1／4teaspoonofsalt，1／4teaspoonofpaprika，andthreetablespoonsofmilktotheeggsinthebowlandmixthemforaboutaminute．Pourthemixtureintothefryingpan，breakthemintoshredswithafork，orstirthemwithaspoonuntiltheybecomesolid．Whentheyarecooked，servethemwithlightlybutteredtoast．示范段落分析主题句：Evenifyoudon'tknowhowtocook，you'llneverstarvetodeathifyouknowhowtopreparescrambledeggs．步骤1：meltbutter步骤2：breakeggs步骤3：addsalt，paprikaandmilktotheeggs步骤4：mixthem步骤5：pourintothefryingpanandstirthem步骤6：servewithbutteredtoast关于如何写过程分析段落的建议1）按照事物发展过程的顺序解释过程过程分析通常使用时间顺序法组织段落，因为告诉别人怎样做某件事的最容易的方法是一步一步地分析。2）提及必要的用具、成分的分量和时机，在适当的地方提醒读者注意容易做错的地方。3）使用列举符号表示步骤。下面的列举符号（listingsignals）常用于过程描述：first，second，third，etc．tobeginwith，then，finally，etc．HowtoMakeaComplaintHaveyoueverexperiencedtheunpleasantsituationsofbeingavictimizedconsumer？Ithinkmostofyouhave．Inself-defense，Ihavedevelopedthefollowingconsumer'sguidetocomplainingeffectively．Thefirststepisgettingorganized．IsaveallsalesslipsandoriginalboxessothatwheneverIcomplain，Iwouldknowthedateofthepurchase，thecorrectprice，andtheplacewheretheitemwaspurchased．ThenIcomposemyletterofcomplaint．Thenextstepistosendthecomplainttothepersonwhowillgetresultsquickly．Usually，IwritedirectlytothepresidentofacompanyandIalwaysgetpromptaction．Finally，ifIgetnoresponsetoawrittencomplaintwithintendays，Ifollowthroughwithapersonaltelephonecall．Therefore，myadvicetoyouistokeepaccuraterecords，andwhenyouhavetocomplain，gorighttothetop．Ithasalwaysworkedforme．Exercise1Directions：Readthefollowingparagraph，thenfindoutthetopicsentence，thelistingsignalsandanalyzethestepsoftheprocess．Inhiswill，AlfredNobelleftspecificinstructionsastohowthewinnersofthescienceawardsheendowedaretobeselected．First，eachyeartheSwedishAcademyofSciences（physicsandchemistry）andtheCarolineMedicalInstitute（physiologyandmedicine）solicitnearlytwothousandrecommendationsfrompastlaureates，universityprofessorsandother