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Beautifyyourcomposition英语作文的华丽变身21、所选题材及体裁都非常贴近考生生活,具有时特点，紧扣与学生相关的社会热点及学生的生活与学习。2、词数要求从100提高到120，既要求表达事实信息，又要陈述个人观点，对考生思维和表达能力的要求提高了。3、开头或/和结尾都已经给出，无文体要求，主要考查考生的表达能力。命题特点31、词数都符合试题要求;覆盖了所有要点;基本上是3段2、所用句型以简单句为主，但是使用了一定量的高级词汇，大量的短语和句型，丰富的句式结构增强了表达的效果；3、都有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。参考答案特点4一：语言第一位（语言高级）二：内容第二位（要点齐全）三：结构第三位（文章分段）三原则书面表达在评阅时遵循三原则高级词汇和句式修辞手法有效的连词名人名言或谚语5词汇使用的四原则2、地道原则。3、避免重复原则4、后、高、长原则——后学到、较高级、较长词汇。6应用了较多的词汇It’sveryhelpful.Itbenefitsalot./Itisofgreathelp.SuddenlyIcameupwithagoodidea.anincreasingnumberofpeopleYoureffortswillbeveryimportant.Youreffortswillmakeagreatdifference.moreandmorepeopleSuddenlyIhadagoodidea.大冶实验高中陈莉娟强调句名词性从句常用谚语…定语从句倒装句with复合结构非谓语动词被动句高级句型8大冶实验高中陈莉娟实战（1）Shecan’tcorrectlypronouncetheword.Shehastroubleinpronouncingtheword.SuddenlyIthoughtofagoodidea.Agoodideaoccurredtome.Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.9大冶实验高中陈莉娟实战（2）他昨天下午来的Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.Hedidn’tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.Itwasnotuntilyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.1010将陈述句改为感叹句Topreventthepollutionisveryimportant．Sheisaclevergirl．Howimportantitistopreventthepollution!Whataclevergirlsheis!将陈述句改为倒装句Wecanachievesuccessinthisway.Itissoeasythatevenachildcandoit.Soeasyisitthatevenachildcandoit.Onlyinthiswaycanweachievesuccess.将简单句改为强调句Smokingdidgreatharmtohishealth.HowcanweimproveourEnglish?Itwassmokingthatdidgreatharmtohishealth.HowisitthatwecanimproveourEnglish?12合并为同位语从句LiuXiangisanexcellentathlete.Hewonthefirstprizeinthe2004OlympicGames.Thewordistrue.Theactorwillgiveusaspeech.LiuXiang,anexcellentathlete,wonthefirstprizeinthe2004OlympicGames.Thewordthattheactorwillgiveusaspeechistrue.13合并为定语从句The2008OlympicGameswasheldinBeijing,anditssloganwasOneWorldOneDream.YesterdaywewenttotheEastGate,andweboughtalotofclothes.The2008OlympicGames,whosesloganwasOneWorldOneDream,washeldinBeijing.YesterdaywewenttotheEastGate,whereweboughtalotofclothes.1415一：肯定不如双否好二：陈述不如倒装妙三：主动不如被动巧四：分词结构不能少四不如肯定不如双否好Thepostmancomesontimeeveryday.IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithhishelp.Thepostmanneverfailstocomeontime.Icouldn’thavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithouthishelp.16陈述不如倒装妙Hedidn’tcomehereuntil5pm.Travellingcannotonlyrelaxus,butalsobroadenourhorizons.Notuntil5pm.didhecomehere.Itwasnotuntil5pm.thathecamehere.Notonlycantravellingrelaxus,butalsobroadenourhorizons.17主动不如被动巧Wecanborrowfivebooks,andwecankeepthemforamonth.Themainproblemnowishowwecanpreventthisfromhappeningagain.Themainproblemnowishowthiscanbepreventedfromhappeningagain.Fivebookscanbeborrowedandtheycanbekeptforamonth.18Ifweatherpermits,wewillgohiking.Weatherpermitting,wewillgohiking.Beingastudent,I’dliketoknowthediscount.分词结构不能少19一去（去连词）二看（看主语）三改（改分词）分词结构BecauseIamastudent,I’dliketoknowthediscount.20写规范不要少逻辑混乱高考链接-2011年湖北卷请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。Workingingroupsatschoolisanopportunitytolearnmoreaboutteamwork.Teamworkshowsushowotherpeople’srolesfitthepurposeofthegroup,anditteachesustobepatientandhowtorespondtodifferentpeople.注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；②除诗歌外，文体不限；③内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；④文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；⑤词数为100左右23高考链接-2011年湖北卷Workingingroupsatschoolisanopportunitytolearnmoreaboutteamwork.Teamworkshowsushowotherpeople’srolesfitthepurposeofthegroup,anditteachesustobepatientandhowtorespondtodifferentpeople.24高考链接-2011年湖北卷Workingingroupsatschoolplaysanimportantroletousstudents.Notonlycanwebecomepatient,butalsowecanlearntheskillswhichweneedtodealwithdifferentpeopleandthings.…Itishightimethatweshouldworkinateam.Onlyinthiswaycanwebeanablemanwhenwestepintosociety.25高考链接-2011年湖北卷Workingingroupsatschoolplaysanimportantroletousstudents.Notonlycanwebecomepatient,butalsowecanlearntheskillswhichweneedtodealwithdifferentpeopleandthings.26高考链接-2011年湖北卷27Itishightimethatweshouldworkinateam.Onlyinthiswaycanwebeanablemanwhenwestepintosociety.高考链接-2010年湖北卷请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个实例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用。Thebestexampleofuniversallyunderstoodbodylanguagemaybethesmile.Asmilecanhelpusgetthroughdifficultsituationsandfindfriendsinaworldofstrangers.Asmilecanopendoorsandteardownwalls.注意：①无须写标题；②内容只需涉及一个方面；③词数为100左右。28高考链接-2010年湖北卷Thebestexampleofuniversallyunderstoodbodylanguagemaybethesmile.Asmilecanhelpusgetthroughdifficultsituationsandfindfriendsinaworldofstrangers.Asmilecanopendoorsandteardownwalls.29