读后续写课件

Legendofbutterflylovers梁祝Selflesslove第二节：读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面350字短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为180左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。4.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；若词数少于130，从总分中扣去2分。Who:What:acoupleoflovers,God,thewomandoctor____coupleofloversledan________(envy)lifeinatown.___________(fortunate),themanhadanaccidentandwasseverely_____(injure).Thewoman___________(attend)himdayandnight._________herloverwasstillsleeping,_________(hope),shemadeadeal______God:tobeabutterflyforthreeyearsinexchangefortheman’s________(recover),_____wasahardchoicebuteasytomaketoawillingheart.AenviableUnfortunatelyinjuredattendedtoButhopelesslywithrecoverywhichTheplot（情节）ofthestoryDevelopmentEndingBeginningClimax(高潮)A.Themanwasbadlyinjuredandshowednosignsofrecovery.B.ThewomandealtwithGodtosaveherloverbutanothergirlappearedbetweenthem.C.Themanandthewomanhadanenviablelove.EndingsofourstudentsEndingsofourstudentsEndingsofourstudentslogic（逻辑）白猫掉到河里，黑猫奋尽全力救它上岸，上岸后，白猫对黑猫说了什么？ContinuethestoryYoushouldfindthecluesinthestory.logicthetitlethegivenstorytheunderlinedwordsthetwogivensentencesTheyarethecluestohelpyoucreateyourwritinglogically.underlinedwordsenjoyingthesunrisethesunsetconsciousnessthechurchGodtearsloveregretbecamethebutterflyflysweetheart-strickenunderlinedwords（选5个以上）who(人物）：Godthebutterflywhere（地点）：thechurchwhat（事件）：enjoyingthesunrisethesunsetconsciousnesstearslovebutterflysweetheart-strickenclues（线索）“Icanhelpyou…forthreeyears…”“Yes,Ido!iwon’tregretdoingthat!”Godalsofeltsad…“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”logicthetitlethegivenstorytheunderlinedwordsthetwogivensentencesParagraph1:Thebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedtoher,butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman.Shecoulddonothingbutrestontheman’sshoulderoffandon.__________________________________________________Singleissimple,doubleistrouble,triangleisterrible.利用已给信息将情节推向高潮Howtodealwiththewomandoctor?Whentogetmarried?Paragraph2:Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly,“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”________________________________________________________利用已给信息得出一个完美结局e….b.Themanandthedoctormarried,andthewomanremainedtobeabutterfly.a.Themanandthedoctormarried,andthewomanleft.c.Themanproposedtothedoctor,butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanandgavetheseparatedloversahappyreunion.d.Themanproposedtothedoctor,butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanwhichinvolvedhiminadilemma.Finally,themanleft.thetwogivensentencestheunderlinedwordsThetwoleadyou,helpyou,andcontrolyoutogointherightdirection.•Therewasonceaplacid平静的；温和的；沉着的andbeautifultowninwhichtherewereacoupleofloverswhowouldoftenstaytogetheronthetopofthemountainenjoyingthesunriseandbytheseaappreciatingthesunset.Everyonewhoknewthemcouldnothelpenvyingthemandprayingfortheirhappylove.GroupA(paragraph1)1.目睹；见证(vt)2.他说过的最甜蜜的话（提示词sweet）3.蝴蝶难过得情不自禁地哭了。(tears)4.变深；使加深(v)5.第三年的最后一天6.他们的爱已成为回忆。GroupB(paragraph2)1.被打动的；受感动的(adj.)2.揭露真相3.对于我为他所做的事我从来没有后悔过。（提示词regret,用倒装句式）4.唤醒(vt.)5.遭受许多挫折6.男人震惊了，越发觉得后悔和内疚（提示词thefeelingofregrets/guilt）1.目睹；见证vt._________2.他说过的最甜蜜的话（提示词sweet）_________________________________3.蝴蝶难过得情不自禁地哭了。（提示词tears）__________________________________________________________________see/witnessThesweetestwordshehaseversaidThebutterflycouldn’thelpburstingintotearssadly./Thebutterflycouldnolongerholdbackthetears.5.在第三年的最后一天____________________________Onthelastdayofthethirdyear4.变深；使加深vt./vi._________deepen6.他们的爱已成为回忆。____________________________________________________________Theirlovehasbecomememories./Theirlovehasbecomeapast.Paragraphy1:Thebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedtoher,butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman.Shecoulddonothingbutrestontheman’sshoulderoffandon.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Itwasheartbrokentoseetheirlovedeependaybyday.Timewentbyquickly.OnthelastdayofthethirdyearwhenthedealbetweenGodandthebutterflywasalmostover,themanproposedtohisgirlfriend.Hetookoutabeautifulringandsworethesweetestwordshehaseversaid.Hearingthis,thebutterflycouldn’tbreathe.Herdarkeneyeswerefulloftears.sheflewawaysilently.Atthatmoment,sherealizedthathewouldn’tknowhersacrificesandtheirlovehasbecomeapast.2.揭露真相_____________________1.被打动的；受感动的adj.be_________bytoucheduncoverthetruth/expose/reveal/moved/impressed3.对于我为他所做的事我从来没有后悔过。（提示词regret,用倒装句式）________________________________________________________________NeverhaveIregrettedforwhatIhavedoneforhim.4.唤醒vt._________awaken/arouse5.遭受许多挫折_____________________gothroughmanyobstaclessuffermanystruggles6.男人震惊了，越发觉得后悔和内疚（提示词thefeelingofregrets/guilt）____________________________________________________________________________Themangotshocked,andthefeelingofregretsandguiltgrewstron