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1/82020届高三赢在微点书面表达审题谋篇范例：(2016·课标全国Ⅲ)假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1．表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步认真审题，确定要点体裁人称时态结构要点道歉信第一/二人称一般现在时写信目的→具体内容→表达期望①表达歉意；②说明失约原因；③另约时间；④再次表示歉意。第二步遣词造句，构建亮点1．我不能守约，因为我要参加重要的班会。①高级词汇：Ifailtokeeptheappointment,becauseIhavetoattendanimportantclassmeeting.②高级句式(表语从句＋非谓语动词)：ThereasonwhyIfailtokeeptheappointmentisthatIhaveanimportantclassmeetingtoattend.2．如果不这样的话，告诉我什么时间最适合你。高级句式(省略句＋非谓语动词)：Ifnot,_pleasekeepmeinformedofwhattimesuitsyoubest.第三步美化成文，誊写清楚范文DearBob，I'msorrytotellyouthatIcannotgotothebookstoretogetherwithyouthisFridayafternoon.IhavejustfoundthatIhavetoattendanimportantconferencethatafternoon.Idon’thopethesuddenchangewillcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.WhataboutgoingonSaturdaymorning?Wecansetoutearlysothatwe'llhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks.Ifit'sconvenientforyou,let'smeetat8:30outsidetheschoolgate.Ifnot,pleaseletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimeafterschoolnextweek.Yours，LiHua2/8一、不可不记的书信类常用词汇1．常用单词①activityn.活动②volunteern.志愿者③informationn.信息④preparationn.准备⑤sincerelyadv.诚挚地⑥appreciatev.感激⑦gratefuladj.感激的⑧convenientadj.方便的⑨invitationn.邀请⑩introductionn.介绍2．常用短语①getalongwithsb.和某人相处②begrateful/thankfultosb.for(doing)sth感激某人③behelpful/beneficialto...对……有帮助/有益④atone'searliestconvenience在某人方便的时候⑤lookforwardto(doing)sth期待⑥give/lendsb.ahand帮某人忙⑦takesth.intoaccount/consideration考虑某事⑧promotethefriendship促进友谊⑨expresswarmwelcome/sinceregratitudetosb.对某人表达热烈欢迎/诚挚的感谢⑩developsb.'sinterest培养某人的兴趣⑪asplanned/scheduled/arranged按照计划/安排⑫bequalifiedfor有资格二、9组不可不记的书信类万用句式1．道歉信(1)吸引阅卷人开头句①I'mwritingtoapologizefor.../Iamwritingtosaysorryfor.../I’mwritingtomakeanapologytoyoufor…我写这封信是因……道歉。②Iamwritingtoexpress/conveymyheartfeltapologytoyou.我写信向你表达真切的歉意。(2)吸引阅卷人篇中句③Iamsorryformynotbeingabletoattendyourpartyduetothefactthat...我非常抱歉不能参加晚会是因为……④ThereasonwhyIfailtoshowupisthatIhavesomethingurgenttoattendto.我未能出现的原因是我有急事要处理。3/82．求助信(1)吸引阅卷人开头句①I'mwritingtoyoutoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavor.我写信是想问您能否帮助我。②I'msorrytobotheryou,butIhavesomedifficultieshereandIneedyourhelp.很抱歉打扰您，但我有些困难需要得到您的帮助。③Ihavesomedifficultyindoing...whichbothersmealot.SoIhavenochoicebuttoturntoyouforhelp.我在做……方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向您求助。(2)吸引阅卷人篇中句④Ican'tconcentrateonmylessonsthesedays,andIfailedinthelastexam,whichworriesmealot.这些日子我不能专心学习，上次考试我没有及格，这使我很着急。⑤Facedwith/Facingsomanydifficulties,Ihavetoturntoyouforhelp.面对如此多的问题，我不得不向您求助。3．感谢信(1)吸引阅卷人开头句①I'mextremelygrateful/thankfultoyouforyourunselfishassistanceduring...感谢你在……期间给予我无私的帮助。②I'mwritingtoconvey/expressmygratitudeforyourkind/generoushelpduring...我写信感谢您在……期间对我友好/慷慨的帮助。③Iwouldliketotakethisopportunitytoexpressmygreatappreciationforyourtimelyhelpandassistance.我想，借此机会表达对您给予我们及时的帮助和支持的感谢。(2)吸引阅卷人篇中句④Manythanksforallthethingsyouhavedoneinhelpingusto...非常感谢您为帮助我们……所做的一切。⑤Thanksto/Withyourgenerous/selfless/kindhelp,Ihavemadegreatprogress.多亏你慷慨的/无私的/友好的帮助，我取得了巨大的进步。Withoutyourgenerous/selfless/kindhelp,Iwouldn'thavemadesuchgreatprogress.如果没有你慷慨的/无私的/友好的帮助，我不会取得这么大的进步。Thankyouforyourgenerous/selfless/kindhelp,withoutwhichIwouldn'thavemadesuchgreatprogress.多谢你慷慨的/无私的/友好的帮助，如果没有你的帮助，我不会取得这么大的进步4/8(3)吸引阅卷人结尾句⑥Itwaskindandgenerousofyoutodothisforme,andIappreciateitmorethanIcansay.你对我如此慷慨，我真是感激不尽。⑦Iwishtherewereabetterwordthan“thanks”toexpressmyappreciationforyourgeneroushelp.任何语言都不能表达我的真挚谢意。⑧IwillbemorethanpleasedifIhavetheopportunitytorepayyourkindnessby...如果我有机会通过……报答你的好意，我会非常高兴。4．建议信(1)吸引阅卷人开头句①Ihavelearnedthatyouhavesometroublein....andIwouldliketogive/offeryouthefollowingsuggestions.我知道你在……方面有困难，因此我想给你提如下一些建议。②You'veaskedmeforadvicewithregardto/regarding/on...andI'lltrytomakesomeuseful/helpful/practicalsuggestionshere.关于……你向我征求建议，在此，我尽量提出一些有用的/有帮助的/实用的建议。③Whenitcomesto/Asfor...,thefollowingaremysuggestions./mysuggestionsareasfollows.当涉及/关于……，我的建议如下。④I'mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions/giveyouahand.我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。(2)吸引阅卷人篇中句⑤Inmyopinion/AsfarasI'mconcerned/Personally,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。⑥Whenitcomesto/Asfor...,Iwouldliketosuggest/advise/recommendyoushould...当涉及/关于……，我建议你应该……⑦Ithinkitwouldbeofbenefit/beneficialifyou...我认为如果……，将会受益。⑧Doing...isagood/great/betterchoice.做……是一个好的/棒的/更好的选择(3)吸引阅卷人结尾句⑨Iwillbegladifyouwilltakemyadvice/suggestionsintoconsideration.如果你能考虑我的建议我将非常高兴。⑩Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestions/advicehelpful/useful/practical/beneficial.我希望你认为我的建议有帮助/有用/实用/有益。5/85．邀请信(1)吸引阅卷人开头句①It'smypleasure//agreathonour/privilegeformetoinviteyoutojoinus.非常荣幸地邀请你加入我们。②IwonderifI/wehavethehonortoinviteyoutotheparty.我想知道我/我们是否能有幸邀请你参加派对。③I'dliketoinviteyoutojoinusforavisittothenearbynursinghomenextSaturdayfortheDoubleNinthFestival.我想邀请您一起去参观……Itwasaprivilegetoworkwithhim.和他在一起工作是一项殊荣。Ihopetohavetheprivilegeofworkingwithhimagain.但愿有幸与他再度合作(2)吸引阅卷人篇中句④Wearehaving/planning...on...(date)andwefeelitwouldbeagreatideaifyoucouldjoinus.我们定于……(日期)……(活动)，如果你能来参加就太好了。⑤Thefollowingaresomedetailsabout.../Herearesomedetailsabout.../Somedetailsabout...areasfollows.……的细节如下。⑥Tobeginwith,wewill...Besides,therewillbeanumberof/variousa