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环球国际英语学校 GLOBAL IELTS SCHOOL 全真版本写作训练班专用教材 1 LastupdatedonJanuary12,2006GlobalIELTSSchool(BJ)Allrightsreserved.Alwaysshootforthesky,becauseifyoufail,youwillbeamongthestars.第一讲雅思写作考试对中国考生的四个难点（Chapter1:TheFourHurdlesinIELTSWritingTest）难点一：AcademicWriting学术类写作问题的特殊要求（改错练习）1.Sinceprivatecompaniesdon’tcaremuchaboutthepublicinterests,sothegovernmenthasasignificantroletoplayinscientificresearch.(不能缩写)2.Whythesetravellersdamagetheenvironmentshouldbeanalyzed.（英式美式拼法不能混用）3.Wemustdoourbest（utmost）toprotect(preserve)animals.(词汇用法太嫩)4.Itisclear(manifest)thatpornographicshowsdoharmto(undermine,endanger,jeopard)thelivesoflotsofyoungster(adolescent).词汇，专有特定的修饰5.Nowadays(Inpresent-daysociety),humanbeingsfacebigchallengesinmanyareas.6.Inthesedayandage,manycompanieshavereplacedtelephonewithinternet.7.Weareconfrontedwithmanyenvironmentalproblems.Theyarebecomingmoreandmoreserious.(句式，语法)8.Thetrafficproblemisbecomingworse.Wemustworktogethertosolveit.(句子结构)9.Soindividuals,communitiesandthegovernmentallmustworkhardtofightcrime!(不应该带感情色彩)10.WemustbefriendlytootherbecausetheBiblesaid,“Treatyourneighborsasyouwouldliketobetreated.”(文化背景，圣经不可用)难点二：Nospecifictopicpool.题库大，没有公开，而且题目变化多。对策：雅思话题不会超出十大类别：文明类：TourismEducationGovernmentWomenandfamiliesLanguageandcultureTechnologyandtheMediaDevelopmentandglobalization野蛮类：CrimeAnimalsEnvironmentalproblem难点三：中国大陆考生对很多话题不熟悉，考场上思考素材花费时间太长对策：掌握思考素材的四种方法a分类法Somehigh-schoolgraduatesgototravelorworkforaperiodoftimebeforetheygotostudyinuniversities.Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofthispracticetotheirstudies.Somepeoplethinkoldbuildingshouldbedestroyedandreplacedtomakeroomfornew环球国际英语学校 GLOBAL IELTS SCHOOL 全真版本写作训练班专用教材 2 constructions.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?B替代法Somepeoplethinkmotorizedflightwasthegreatestinventioninthetwentiethcentury.Doyouagreeordisagree?Somepeoplethinkstricterpunishmentfordrivingoffendersistheonlyeffectivewaytoimprovesafetyontheroad.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Somepeoplethinkanimalexperimentationshouldbebannedbecausetheyarecruel.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?C综合法Somepeoplethinkstudentsshouldbeallowedtoevaluatetheteachers’jobperformance.Othersthinkthiswillleadtolossofdisciplineandrespect.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.Somepeoplethinkthegovernmentshouldpayforeducationandhealthcare.Othersthinkthisisnottheresponsibilityofthegovernment.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.D裸奔法（无想法时的救命稻草）Peopletodaycanperformtheeverydaytaskssuchasshopping,bankingorevenbusinesstransactions,withoutmeetingothersface-to-face.Whateffectswillthisphenomenonhaveonindividualsandsocietyasawhole?Unlikemanyothercountries,policeofficersintheUKdonotcarryguns.Somepeoplethinkthisisawisepolicy.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?往以下这些方面考虑论点取第一个字母缩写:TMSTREEC$Technology&EfficiencyEnvironment&HealthMind&SoulEmployment&CompetitionSociety&CrimeCulture&PopulationTime&SpaceMoney&FunRights&ResponsibilitiesTMSTREEC$Tech&EfEnvi&HealMind&soulEmpl&CompSoci&CrimCul&PlpTimes&SpaMo&FunRi&Resp难点四：中国考生掌握语法的深度和广度让人惊叹，但是使用时准确度不够对策：雅思写作“语法的七宗罪”改错练习1．Employeecanbenefitmorefromtelecommutingthanemployee.（n.可数不可数）2.1Workathomeusingmoderntechnologycangreatlyenhanceourefficiency.(v.原型不可做主语)环球国际英语学校 GLOBAL IELTS SCHOOL 全真版本写作训练班专用教材 3 2.2Childrenwhoareraiseinimpoverishedfamiliescangenerallydealwithproblemsmoreeffectivelyintheiradultyears.(被动语态)2.3Theproblemsthatarecreatedbyenvironmentalcontaminationisveryhardtoresolve.(主谓一致)2.4Inpresent-daysociety,cultureswerebecomingverysimilar.(时态)3.Intelligentstudentsshouldnotbetreateddifferentbytheirteachers.副词4.1Countriesshouldpayattentiononthedisadvantagesglobalizationmaycreate.介词4.2TheInternethasinsteadofteachersinmanyclassrooms.5.Someparentsdonotobeytrafficruleshimself.6.Theseoldbuildingsshouldbedestroyed,newbuildingsmustbeconstructed.逗号7.Theseareagreatmanychildrenthinkthemainpurposeofeducationshouldbetoaffordthempleasureandenjoyment.补充材料IELTS作文复杂句的七种内部关系（SevenpossiblerelationshipsUnderlyingacomplexsentence）Causeandeffect因果关系标志词1）表示原因的because,as,since,dueto,owingto(画横线的连接词请重点掌握)2）表示结果的hence(因此)，thus（因此），therefore(因此)，Asaconsequence,…（作为结果）Accordingly…(相应的)，Asaresult…(作为结果)Consequently…(作为结果)so…that…(如此…以致…)E.g.Theecologicalproblemsarebeingaggravated.Hence,itisimperativethatwetakemeasurestocurbthepollutionoftheenvironment.生态系统正在急剧的恶化，因此，我们必须采取严厉的措施遏制对环境的污染。Exemplification举例关系标志词…isacaseinpoint.(某人或某事是一个恰当的例子。)Take…forexample.(以…为例)forinstance.(比如…)ToIllustrate…(例如…)Asanillustration…(作为例证…)e.g.TheAsiancountriesaregettingwesternizedatastaggeringrate.TakeChinaforexample,whenyoungstersgotothemovies,itisstandardpracticeforthemtochooseHollywoodblockbusteroverdomesticfilms.亚洲国家正以一种惊人的速度变得西方化，以中国为例，当年轻人去电影院的时候，通常都会选择好莱坞大片而不是中国电影。Comparisonandcontrast对比关系标志词While…,whereas…,whilst…,incontraste.g.Whereas/whilemodernmanissorushedandsostressed,ourancestorscouldoftenperformtheirbusinessinarelaxedmanner.(对比)现代人的生活是如此的奔忙与紧张，而我们的祖先却可以不慌不忙的从事他们的事务。e.g.Theeducat