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1英语作文的华丽变身BeautifyyourComposition2一：语言第一位（语言高级）二：内容第二位（要点齐全）三：结构第三位（文章分段）三原则书面表达在评阅时遵循三原则高级词汇和句式修辞手法有效的连词名人名言或谚语弃旧取新:Ｗeallhavethesamechance.Therearemoreproblems.1.较高级词汇possessopportunityexist4应用了较多的词汇It’sveryhelpful.Itisofgreathelp.Youreffortswillbeveryimportant.Youreffortswillmakeagreatdifference.实战（1）Shecan’tcorrectlypronouncetheword.Shehastroubleinpronouncingtheword.SuddenlyIthoughtofagoodidea.Agoodideaoccurredtome.Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.9较高级词汇1.Weallthinkheisagreatman.2.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.3.Inourclass,therearetwenty-sixstudents.Weallofhim.Theplantobeafailure.Ourclasstwenty–sixstudents.thinkhighlyturnedoutismadeupof较高级词汇5.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.6.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.You’llfindingmyhouse.thegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.havenotroubleThanksto例1:过去的20年上海有了很大的变化.ThereweregreatchangesinShanghaiinthepast20years.Back返回GreatchangestookplaceinShanghaiinthepast20years.Shanghaiwitnessed/sawgreatchangesinthepast20years.选词时适当选用别人使用较少的词，可以使自己与众不同，从而取得出奇制胜的效果。非谓语各种从句with复合宾语倒装独立主格虚拟等等强调句型运用多种语法结构，句式灵活多变，可以使文章增色不少。2.丰富的语法结构强调句名词性从句常用谚语…定语从句倒装句with复合结构非谓语动词被动句高级句型8Anoldmanwassittinginanarmchairathome,readinghisnewspaper.Besidehimlayadog,sleepingsoundly.Suddenlytheoldmandecidedtoleavehomeforawhile,buthecouldn’tgooutwithhisslipperson.Sohewokeupthedogtogettheshoesforhim.Outofhisexpectation,thedogjustbarkedwithtwoeyesclosedagain.Theoldmanwascompletelypuzzled.Ashewaswonderingwhatwashappening,hesawthecatcomingtowardshimwiththepairofshoesinitsmouth.Seeingthis,hewastotallydumbfounded.Comparethefollowingsentences:我们学校位于长征路，它就像一座花园，满园皆是美丽的花朵、青草绿树，鸟儿吟唱、蝴蝶飞舞于其间。1.OurschoolliesatChangzhengRoad.Itisreallylikeagarden.Therearebeautifulflowers,greengrassandtrees.Birdsaresingingandbutterfliesareflyingamongthem.2.LyingatChangzhengRoad,ourschoolisreallylikeagardenwhichiscoveredwithbeautifulflowers,greengrassandtreeswithbirdssingingandbutterfliesflyingamongthem.Lyingwhichwithbirdssingingandbutterfliesflying14一：肯定不如双否好二：陈述不如倒装妙三：主动不如被动巧四：分词结构不能少四不如誊写规范不要少肯定不如双否好ImadegreatprogressinEnglishwithhishelp.Icouldn’thavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithouthishelp.15陈述不如倒装妙Travellingcannotonlyrelaxus,butalsobroadenourhorizons.Notonlycantravellingrelaxus,butalsobroadenourhorizons.16主动不如被动巧Wecanborrowfivebooks,andwecankeepthemforamonth.Themainproblemnowishowwecanpreventthisfromhappeningagain.Themainproblemnowishowthiscanbepreventedfromhappeningagain.Fivebookscanbeborrowedandtheycanbekeptforamonth.17Ifweatherpermits,wewillgohiking.Weatherpermitting,wewillgohiking.Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab..分词结构不能少18分词结构Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher..句型多样化：1Chinaisabigcountry.Ithasalargepopulation.(with)2)Weshouldmakeeffortstoreduceairpollution.Chinaisabigcountrywithalargepopulation.Greateffortsshouldbemadetoreduceairpollution.实战（2）他昨天下午来的Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.Hedidn’tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.Itwasnotuntilyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.10Wecanachievesuccessinthisway.Itissoeasythatevenachildcandoit.Soeasyisitthatevenachildcandoit.Onlyinthiswaycanweachievesuccess.21LiuXiangisanexcellentathlete.Hewonthefirstprizeinthe2004OlympicGames.Thewordistrue.Theactorwillgiveusaspeech.LiuXiang,anexcellentathlete,wonthefirstprizeinthe2004OlympicGames.Thewordthattheactorwillgiveusaspeechistrue.22The2008OlympicGameswasheldinBeijing,anditssloganwasOneWorldOneDream.YesterdaywewenttotheEastGate,andweboughtalotofclothes.The2008OlympicGames,whosesloganwasOneWorldOneDream,washeldinBeijing.YesterdaywewenttotheEastGate,whereweboughtalotofclothes.23大冶实验高中陈莉娟VI.将两个简单句合并为一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句1.Recentlymanystudentsspendtheirmoneyonunnecessarythings.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutit.Recentlymanystudentsspendtheirmoneyonunnecessarythings,aboutdifferentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.2.Manyboyslearntosmoke.Itdoesharmtotheirhealth.Manyboyslearntosmoke,_______________________________whichwhichdoesharmtotheirhealth.1.出国留学是一个普遍的现象•It’sacommonphenomenonthatmoreandmorestudentschosetogoabroadforfurtherstudy.•Thereexistsacommonphenomenonthat…•Thereisagrowingtrendthatanincreasingnumberofstudentsprefertogoabroad.•一些人认为国外留学令我们受益匪浅Somepeopleholdtheviewthatstudyingabroadmaybenefitusalot.•而另一些人认为对我们有很多负面影响Whileothersarguethatithasnegativeeffectonourlife.•就我而言，我同意前者（后者），我的理由如下：AsfarasI’mconcerned/Inmyopinion,I’minfavoroftheformer/latter.Myreasonsarelistedasfollows.English1.生活在说英语的国家里有助于快速提高口语WewillmakerapidprogressinoralEnglishwhenlivinginanEnglish–speakingcountry.1.频繁的接触英语使得我们能更好的掌握语言BeingexposedtoEnglishfrequentlyenablesustohaveagoodcommandofthislanguage.Independence1.遇到困难，独立解决棘手问题，这令我们更加独立和成熟。Whenintrouble,wehavetodealwiththeproblemsonourown,whichwillmakeusmoreindependentandmature.2.给我们提供了一个独立于父母自力更生的机会，这有助于为我们的将来事业打下坚实的基础。Besides,italsoprovidesuswithanopportunitytobeindependentofourparentsandearnourownliving,whichcontributestolayingasolidfoundationforourfuturecareer.Communication1.与文化背景各不相同的人在一起生活学习，我们学会更好地与人相处，并结交更多新的朋友。Livingandstudyingwithpeopledifferentinculturalbackgroun