06高考英语写作专题：第六讲 非谓语动词的写作与训练

第六讲句子写作---非谓语动词OurSpringOutingNationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.Torelaxourselves,ourclasshadameetingtodiscusswheretogoforourspringouting.Havingabarbecueisourchoice.Thenextday,wesetoffearlyinthemorning.Weclimbedthemountain,talkingandlaughing.Whenwearrived,webegantobarbecue.Havinghadabigdinner,weenjoyedthewarmsunshineandthebeautifulview.Weweretiredbuthappy.【点津】2013年四川省高考考试说明(写作)考生应能(1)清楚、连贯地传递信息，表达意思；(2)有效应用所学语言知识。OurSpringOutingNationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.Torelaxourselves,ourclasshadameetingtodiscusswheretogoforourspringouting.Havingabarbecueisourchoice.Thenextday,wesetoffearlyinthemorning.Weclimbedthemountain,talkingandlaughing.Whenwearrived,webegantobarbecue.Havinghadabigdinner,weenjoyedthewarmsunshineandthebeautifulview.Weweretiredbuthappy.①Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivities.②Wewanttomakeourselvesmorehealthy.Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivitiestomakeourselvesmorehealthy.目的状语非谓语动词在英语写作中的作用①Wangqiclimbedsohardthatshelosthertemper.②Shecomplainedaboutthelongwalk.Wangqiclimbedsohardthatshelosthertemper,complainingaboutthelongwalk.伴随状语①Themonitorhassetagoodexampleforus.②Therefore,themonitordeservesthehonorandweshouldlearnfromher.原因状语Havingsetagoodexampleforus,themonitordeservesthehonorandweshouldlearnfromher.1.Makingourcitygreeneriseveryone’sduty.2.Thegovernmentisdeterminedtocontinuethegreenprogram.3.Ifindmyhometownchangedsomuch.4.Havingfreshair,treescanreduceairpollution.5.Everyefforttomaketheprogrammakesadifference.5.定语2.宾语4.状语3.宾补1.主语非谓语动词在句子中的成分写作中非谓语动词常见的错误1、状语动作行为者与主句主语不一致Lookingfromthetopofmountain,thecityisbeautiful.Lookedfromthetopofmountain,thecityisbeautiful.2、用动词短语充当主语、表语和宾语2.Inmyopinion,climbmountainisanenjoyablething.Inmyopinion,climbingmountainisanenjoyablething.3、主动、被动含义混淆Ateamcallingitselfthesuppercook.3.—Whichteamisgoodatcooking?—Ateamcalleditselfthesuppercook.Ateamcalledthesuppercook.非谓语动词写作示例：高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气。Step1：拆分成几个简单句(中文)①高考临近。②保持良好的心态很重要。③它有助于减轻焦虑（relax）和勇敢地克服困难。Step2：分别翻译这几个简单句①NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.②Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.③Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.Step3：合并句子WithNationalCollegeEntranceExaminationcoming,itisimportanttohavearightattitudetorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.①NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.②Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.③Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.Sentence1:Step3：合并句子WithCollegeEntranceExaminationcoming,itisimportanttohavearightattitudewhichhelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.①CollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.②Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.③Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.Sentence2:Tip:Trytousedifferentwaystoexpress.建议有足够的睡眠是必要的。原因1.它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。2.保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作的基础。（2011高考模拟）要求：1.用2-3句话表达表格内容2.2-3句话要有连贯性Havingatry建议有足够的睡眠是必要的。原因1.它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。2.保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作的基础。HavingatryItisnecessarytohaveenoughsleep.Havingenoughsleepisnecessary.Itwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.Keepinghealthy/fitisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.ToKeephealthy/fitisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.Passage：Havingenoughsleepisnecessary,becauseitwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.Moreover,tokeephealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.Tip:Neverignoretheconjunction.1.Toseeistobelieve.//Seeingisbelieving.2.Allthechildrenpresentatthemeetingwereveryexcited.3.Thebrokenvasewasstillontheground.4.Icanhardlyimaginegoingthroughsuchadensejunglealoneinsuchrainyweather.5.IhaveneverheardhimsingasinglesongthoughIhaveknownhimfor8years.6.Havingfinishedallmyhomework,IwassohappyandrelaxedthatIfeltlikeflying.【即时训练】判断非谓语动词在句子中所充当的成分。1.主语2.表语3.定语4.宾语5.宾补5.状语1.Dayandnightthegiantarmsofcranesmoveabout.Theyloadandunloadcargo.2.Shespentallherdaysstudying.Shedidn’teventaketimeoffonSundays.3.Islippedoutofthevillageinthedark.IheadedforthecityofXi’an.Dayandnightthegiantarmsofcranesmoveabout,loadingandunloadingcargo.Shespentallherdaysstudying,noteventakingtimeoffonSundays.Islippedoutofthevillageinthedark,headingforthecityofXi’an.//Slippingoutofthevillageinthedark,IheadedforXi’an.4.Heplacedtwotablestogether.Hespreadallthepapersoutonthem.5.Thepeasantsadoptedthismethod.Itraisedtheaverageyieldby40percent.6.Herhusbanddiedin1998.Heleftherwithnothingbut5children.Afterplacingtwotablestogether,hespreadallthepapersoutonthem.Adoptingthismethod,thepeasantsraisedtheaverageyieldby40percent.Herhusbanddiedin1998,leavingherwithnothingbut5children.我有他的书面承诺。有很多书是以这个主题来写的。山西产的棉花和湖北产的棉花质量一样好。那年冬天他扮作商人回到了广东。Ihavehiswrittenpromise.Therearequiteafewbookswrittenonthissubject.ThecottonproducedinShanxiisasgoodasthatproducedinHubei.HereturnedtoGuangdongthatwinter,disguisedasamerchant.和你们的作文比起来，他的作文写得更好。他专心致志底工作，忘记了他最好的朋友的生日。这座桥建于1192年，已经有700多年的历史了。Comparedwithyourcompositions,hisisbetterwritten.Absorbedinthework,heforgothisbestfriend’sbirthday.Builtin1192,thebridgeisover700yearsold.