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短文改错专练（一）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。AMymomandIwereoutdrivingwhenwesawacaraheadofusslowdownsuddenandthencametostopasitreachedthesideoftheroad.Wepulledoverandaskingthewomaninsidethecarifsheneededanyhelps.Shesaid“Yes,please!”Sincewewererightnextbyaparkinglot,wetriedtopushhercarintoit.Weweren’tverysuccessful,asitisaheavycar.Thenamanandhiskidscameoverandofferedhishelpaswellas!Togetherwegotthewoman’scarintotheparkinglot,whichshewassafeandcouldgetthehelpsheneeded.Webothsmiledateachotherandthenwentonourway.BOnemorningwhenItookthebustomeetafriendintown.WhenIboarded,ayoungforeignerrushedcatchthebusandjustmadeitrightbehindme.Ipaymyfare,andstartedlookingfortheseat,whenIheardtheyoungmanaskthebusdriverwhetherhecouldchangea50-yuanbillforhisticket.Ialreadyknewitwaspossible,asitwaswritingonthefarebox.Beingtoldthedriverdidn’thaveenoughchanges,theyoungmanseemedverydisappointing.ItoldhimIwasgoingtopayhisfare.Hewasrelievedandthankedme.Diginhispocket,hefoundoneeuroandinsistedongivingittomyself.Webothmadeitintotown.CIwasinthesupermarketqueueyesterdaywhenthememberofstaffcametomeanddirectedmetoacheckoutwherehadjustopened.WhenIarrived,thecashierwasallowingalittlegirltoscanthroughtheshopping.MyfirstthoughtswerethatI’dhavegotservedmuchquickifI’djuststayedwhereIwas.Eventualitwasofmyturn.Thecashierwassweetandapologizedforthedelay.Wechattedasshepackedupmyitems.Thensheexplainedmethatthelittlegirl,acustomerfromafewdaysago,hadlostherpurse.She,likeacashier,paidforhisshopping.Andthegirljustcametoreturnthemoneybutvolunteeredtohelp.DTherewasoneclassthatIthinkIwillneverforget.Itwasthepianoclass.Inthelastclassofthatterm,eachstudentwasrequiredplaytwotunesonthepiano,accordingtothattheteacher,aprettylady,wasgoingtogiveusmarks.Soonitwasmyturn.InspiteofalltheprepareIhaddone,Iwasstillverynervous.Isayatthebeginning,“AlthoughasanewlearnerIdon’tplaywell,butIwanttoexpressmylovetomyparentsthroughthetwotunes.”Lucky,everythingwentallright.Buttheteachercommented,“Actually,Julie,youdidgreat!Therefore,Iwilljustgiveyou9.5,hopesthatyouwillalwaysremembertobelieveinyourself.”Hiswordsarestillremindingmetobeself-confident.ETimeandtidewaitnoman.ThisiseverythingIlearnedlastyear.Ihavespentsomuchtimefoolaroundthatmygradesbegantosuffer.Ifinallyrealizedthatsomethinghadtobedone.Itwastimetochanging.NowIhaveanewplanforusingmytimewise.Ihavesetmyalarmclockhalfahourahead.Thiswillgivemeaheadstarteveryday.IhavealsobeendecidedtokeeparecordofwhatIdoandwhenIdoit.LookbackonwhichI’vedonewillgivemesomeideasonhowtomanagemytime.FIloveEnglishandIdohopethatsomedayIcanwatchEnglishmovieswithoutanydifficult.However,it’snevereasiertolearnaboutaforeignlanguage.AndEnglishisexception.RecentlyIfinditverydifficulttoremembernewwords.Therefore,Iturnedtomyteacherforhelpyesterday.Shesaidthebestwaytolearnnewwordsaretoreadanduseitasoftenaspossible.Ithinkshewasright,becausewecansurelyrememberapersonifseeingeveryday.Therefore,IhaddecidedtoreadatleastoneEnglisharticleandwriteadiarywithEnglisheverydayfromnowon.Hopefully,Iwillmakegreatprogressbytheendofayear.GLastSunday,IwentshoppingwithMominthetown.IwaskindofexcitedbecauseithavebeenyearsthelasttimeIwentshoppingwithher.IfollowedMomintoasmallstoresellsfarmchemicalsandseeds.AssoonasIsteppedintothestore,Iwassurprisingbysomuchsingingbirdsflyingfreely.ThenInoticedtherehadatleast30nestsintotalonthewallsandundertheceiling!Iturnedtotheowner,anoldman,andtoldhimwhatamazingitwas.Hesaiddelightedthatthebirdswerelikehisbabiesandhealwaysleftthedoorsopenforit.Andatnight,whenhewasaway,thebirdscouldcomeinoroutthroughthebrokenwindowsatanytimetheywanted.HIhavealittlecousinwhichnameisAngela.Intwomonthssheisgoingtobetwoyearold.Hernameisgivenbyhermotherwholovesherverymuchandthinkssheishisangel.Angelahasbeautifuleyesandhaslearnedtocountto20recently!Readchildren’sbooksregularly,sheknowsmanyanimalsandplants.Sheisalsoatypicallittlegirl,wholovesdollsandeverynightputsthemtosleepingbeforegoingtothebed!Sheisalsoveryimpatientandcanplayafishinggameforoverhalfanhouratatime!Nowshecanwalkwellandevenrun,andsheisfondplayingwithme.Ifeelluckytohavesoalovelycousin.答案：A1....slowdownsudden...sudden→suddenly2....cametostop...stop前加a3....askingthewoman...asking→asked4....neededanyhelps.helps→help5....rightnextby...by→to6....itisaheavy...is→was7....offeredhishelp...his→their8....aswellas!去掉第二个as9....whichshewas...which→where或which前加in10.Webothsmiled...both→allB1.Onemorningwhen...去掉when2....rushedcatchthe...catch前加to3.Ipaymyfare...pay→paid4....lookingforthe...the→a5....itwaspossible...possible→impossible6....asitwaswriting...writing→written7....enoughchanges...changes→change8....verydisappointing.disappointing→disappointed9.Diginhis...Dig→Digging10....givingittomyself.myself→meC1....thememberofstaff...the→a2....wherehadjust...where→which/that3....servedmuchquick...quick→quicker4.Eventualitwas...Eventual→Eventually5....ofmyturn.去掉of6....sheexp