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新东方在线[www.koolearn.com]网络课堂电子教材系列PETS3系列1PETS3写作电子教材主讲：黄培辰欢迎使用新东方在线电子教材讲义制作说明：本讲义是根据老师的声音按课时制作的，跟老师上课时的顺序一样，跟教材的顺序不一样。第一课时课程安排：1.命题化作文2.图表作文3.信件作文任考两种，进行组合，必然有信件题。一、三个避免错误：1.语法不能出现重大错误2.不能有太多拼写错误3.内容要切题评分标准：语言第一位；结构第二位；内容第三位高分作文要有三个C1.contact紧凑2.concise简洁的3.concrete具体好作文一定是结构紧凑、用词简洁、内容具体的文章。好作文有“三多”：1.关联词多新东方在线[www.koolearn.com]网络课堂电子教材系列PETS3系列22.动词短语多、形容词多3.熟练运用复杂语法较多，多出现第三人称写法.二、选题1、两个无关：1）与现有的专业学习无关2）与居住地域和文化品味无关2.怎样选题和表述1）永恒话题例如：friendshipandlove，environmentalprotection，culturalexchange，health，education.2）热点话题例如：indulgenceofcomputernetwork，honestyandmutualtrust，teamwork，traffic，housing..3）表述：（1）要对观点进行阐述；（2）观点对比；（3）原因解释；（4）举例说明；（5）建议措施；（6）趋势；（7）对图画图表进行描述。三、写作流程：1.三分钟判断写作段落种类；2.套写各段首句；3.25分钟写作，长短结合，难易结合。写作策略：长句靠语法串接，短句靠关联词串接。4.检查，三一致，两不能。人称一致、时态一致、主谓一致。四、观点陈述文章写作方法1.时间、地点、人称具体化；2.正反对比法Itisgenerallybelievedthat_______.1）关联词短语化tobeginwithatthefirstplaceinadditionwhatismorethird2）动词短语化3）名词修饰化Itiscommonlyacceptedthat新东方在线[www.koolearn.com]网络课堂电子教材系列PETS3系列3五、英语句型：1.therebe2.名词is/are形容词/名词betodobe+表语从句be+形容词+forsb+todosthusetobelovemarrymurderfallinlovewithgetalongwith背单词：第一步背动词；第二步背形容词；第三步背介词短语；最后背名词。3.主谓宾表达名词+谓语动词+名词谓语动词：动词+介词名词：前加形容词；名词+doing/done名词+that+从句第二课时4.引用Whenitcomestothetopicofsmoking(When_____isdiscussed,)itispresumablyproper(reasonable,appropriate,suitable,justified)tociteanoldsaying(aproverb):____________.在google中搜索quotation读一些演讲词1）借文章的话发挥；2）借结构换名词；3）加强查找。六、第二段写作1.举例2.原因他们怎么想、怎么做、政府他们开始意识到Theycometorealizethat______isimportant/harmfulTheyseldomcometorealizethat______isimportant/harmful新东方在线[www.koolearn.com]网络课堂电子教材系列PETS3系列4第三课时1.举例2.原因两方面表述观点：1）正反对比2）引用1）人们思想意识payattentiontodueattentiontobeawearofconsequenceTheyseldompaydueattentiontosmoking.Theyarenotfullyawearofconsequenceofsmoking.attachimportanttodoone'sbesttodosthtryone'sbesttodosthtakeactionsactiveconcreteswiftaction2）政府行为makeplanstailortoexpensivetimeconsuming读文章要满足KMTS:keywords,关键词mainideatopicsentencestructure3）科学技术effectivemedicinehasnotbeeninventedyet.Effectivedrugsanddozeshavenotbeenfoundyet.Tobeginwith,somesmorkersdon't(paydueattentiontoseldomcometorealizethat)notfullyawareoftheconsequenceofsmoking,asaresult,theyseldomdotheirbesttogetridofsmoking.Second,governmentmakeplansthattailortosmoker'sneed.Third,effectivedrugsanddozeshavenotbeenfoundyet.例如：1）美国人口增加2）动物数量减少3）分析动物减少原因criticalreading评判式阅读1）掌握名词具体问题2）动词逻辑问题广泛的阅读可以模仿字、结构、创意、框架。新东方在线[www.koolearn.com]网络课堂电子教材系列PETS3系列5七、第三段写作建议段Inordertoprotectnon-smokersfrombecomingsmokers,measuresshouldbetakentoreducetheappealofsmoking.1）是否有立法的必要makelawsinitiatelawspriseforlegislation2）投资investsetasidesufficientfoundallocateannualbudget3）增强意识cultivateawarenessenhanceawareness4）采取行动第四课时八、提纲作文整体思路P182经典例文3WhatIsSuccess?[提纲]1.不同的人对成功有不同的看法。（观点对应）2.然而，我的观点是……3.为了获得成功，我们应该……（建议措施）1.showyourunderstanding（1）Itisgenerallybelievedthat_______.Whenpeoplehave_______,theyoffer_______toothers.Onthecontrary,whenpeoplearedeprivedof________,theyfeel_________.Therefore,itisnotdifficulttoimaginewhatlifewillbeifinaworlddevoidof______.（2）Whenitcomestothetopicof_______(When_____isdiscussed,)itispresumablyproper(reasonable,appropriate,suitable,justified)tociteanoldsaying(aproverb):____________.Thisremark(statement,comment,observation)isnaturallylinkedwith(beassociatedwith,)agoldenrule(auniversaltruth,afundamentalprinciple,aglitteringrule)inanever-changingsociety,thatis,________2.不同人有不同观点（观点对比）（1）Whenaskedaboutanidealplacetolive,thevast(overwhelmingmajorityof/quiteafew)peoplebelievethatacitymaybeawisechoicebutotherpeopledon’tthinkso,insistingthatcountrysidebeacomfortableandpeacefulplacetolivein.（2）Whenitcomestoprivatecars,people‘sviews/notionsvaryfromonetoanother.Somepeoplemaintainthat____.Althoughitdoescontainanelementoftruth,theoppositeisprobablytrue.新东方在线[www.koolearn.com]网络课堂电子教材系列PETS3系列6（3）Wheneverthedebateof_____israisedamongthegeneralpublic,somepeopletendtoexaggerateanybenefitthatmayarise.However,throughyearsofpractice,itturnsoutthatthisstatementhasmanyrestrictions.3.reason（原因）（1）因果兼顾Whathasbroughtaboutthisdebate?Personally,Ibelievethatthreeprimaryreasonsmayaccountforthis.Tobeginwith,asaresultof___,_____.So___.Inaddition,___inorderto___,Then___.Finally,coupledwith___is___thatcontributesto___（3）因果取舍Whenitcomestotheissueof_________,somepeoplearemorelikelytoascribeitsemergenceto_______.However,itisnottheprimaryreasonatall.Rather,_______.4.应该怎么做（advisesuggest）（1）建议列举Itisimperativeforustotakeseveremeasurestoputitonhold.Foronething,wemustappealtoauthoritiestomake(initiate,launch)strict(severe)lawstocontrol_____.Foranotherthing,weshouldenhancepeople’sawarenessthat____isvitalforus.Still,weareobligedtotakebroadactionstostartananti-____campaign.Onlyinthiswaycanwehaveabrightfuture.（2）设问Whatmeasuresshouldbetakentoarrestandreversethisgravesituation?Allnationsroundtheworldareexpectedtolaunchcomprehensiveprojectsthattailortolocalsituation.Althoughtheseplansaregeographicallyandculturallyspecific,theymustcontaintwokeyelements:protectionandeducation.ByprotectionImeanup-to-datemeasurestokeeptrackofanydestructiveactivitiesthatm