高考英语建议信-学生版-(1)

1第8课时高考作文类型————建议信（1）一、简介(1)建议信——写作目的是提出建议或忠告。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。(2)写作方法①首段：说明目的，注意语气。②主体：提出具体建议；首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则变成投诉信；经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文，因为内容与议论文相似。尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，易于接受。(3)写作流程图二，思考高考英语作文在紧张的高三备考阶段，英语老师为了提高复习效率，广泛征求学生意见。假如你叫张华，请根据以下提示，给英语老师写封信，表达你们的需求和建议。●适当放慢进度，留出思考时间●反复训练重要、易错知识点●指导方法●减少作业量以保证质量●给予更多鼓励注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;3.词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计词数。DearMr.Wang,We’resopleasedthatyouarewillingtoshareourviews.Inthecourseofthegeneralrevision,whatweneedissolidfoundation.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________说明写信的目的介绍详情、说明原因提出建议提出希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复2【参考例文】DearMr.Wang,We’resopleasedthatyouarewillingtoshareourviews.Inthecourseofthegeneralrevision,whatweneedissolidfoundation.Therefore,oursuggestionsarepresentedasfollows.Asyouknow,wedidn’tlearnwellenoughinthefirsttwoyears,sopleaseslowdownandmakesurewehavereallymasteredsomething.Besides,weneedalittlemoretimetothinkforourselves.Asforthoseimportantpointswhichalsomakeusconfused,wouldyoupleasegiveusmorepracticeincaseweforget?Meanwhile,weneedyourinstruction,forexample,inhowtowriteinnaturalEnglish.Istillhaveanotherrequest:assignuslesshomeworkinorderthatwecandoitmoreefficiently.Bytheway,weoftenfeelfrustrated,whichhasaverybadeffectonourstudy.Wewouldappreciateitifyouwouldgiveussomeencouragementfromtimetotime.Yours，Zhanghua三．归纳总结作文题材：_________时态：_________人称：___________2.主题（主旨大意）：___________________________________________3.提纲（段落大意）第一段：_____________________________________________________________第二段：_____________________________________________________________第三段：_____________________________________________________________4.加分点归纳（好词好句，从句等）_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________四．建议信常用句式第一段：1.I’mwritingtoexpressmyviewson/concerning…2.Youhaveaskedforsomeadviceconcerning…andIwilltrytogiveyoumysuggestions.3.Iwouldliketosuggestthat…4.Iamwritinginreplyto…5.Inmyopinion,Iwouldsay第二段：1.Ithink/believeitwouldbebetter/veryhelpful/beneficialifyou……2.Itisdesirablethat…是可取的….3.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat……Whynot……4.Itwouldhelpto…….Thiswould35.Perhapstherecouldbe…..6.Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat…7.IfIwereyou,Iwould……8.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould……9.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif…第三段：1.Iwouldbemorethanhappyifmysuggestionscouldbeconsidered.2.IdohopeyouwillconsidermysuggestionsandIwouldbereadytofurtherdiscussthisdecision.3.Itrust/believeyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoaccount.4.Ihopethatmysuggestionsarehelpfulforyourdecision-makinganyway.5.Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementinthisregard.6.Ibelievethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoseriousaccount.7.Iwouldbereadytodiscussaboutthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.8.Whateveryoudecidetodo，goodluckwithyourstudies/work！9.Thanksforreadingmyletter.Ihopeyouwillconsidermysuggestions.10.Intheend,Iwillbeverygladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.五．实战演练假如你是李华，你刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件，她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何学好英语。请你根据下列的内容给她写封回信。1.上课认真听讲，做好笔记，课后及时复习；2.词汇是基础，每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词，朗读课文；3.课外多与同学用英语交流，提高听力和口语能力；4.每天坚持写日记。注意：1.词数120—150词左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总数；2.内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。【列提纲】DearWangMei,I’mverygladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【上交的文章】4_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________