7.English Paragraph Writing 英语段落写作

EnglishParagraphWritingWhatisaparagraph?Itisapartofalargerpieceofwritingcomposition.Aparagraphisaunitofthought.Itmustbeaboutonesingletopic.Eachsentenceshouldbelogicallyandstructurallyjoinedtotheonebeforeit.Aparagraphmustbeadequately充分地developed.ParagraphStructure段落结构TopicSentence(Beginning)主题句Supportingideas/sentences支撑句[Concludingsentence]结论句Findoutthetopicsentence,supportingsentencesandtheconcludingsentenceofthefollowingparagraph.Musicaffectsusinmanyways.Itcanaffectusphysiologically.Excitingmusiccanincreaseourheartrate,ourbreathing,andourbloodpressure.Calmingmusiccanrelaxourmusclesandevenlowerourskintemperature.Musiccanaffectusphysicallytoo.Everyonehasfoundthemselvestappingtheirfeetorwantingtogetupanddancetotheirfavoritesong.Musiccandefinitelyaffectourmoodandemotions.Musicisslowandquietmakesusfeelrelaxedandlessstressed,andstimulatingmusiccanenergizeusandmakeusfeelplayfulandalive.Findoutthetopicsentence,supportingsentencesandtheconcludingsentenceofthefollowingparagraph.Musicaffectsusinmanyways.Itcanaffectusphysiologically.Excitingmusiccanincreaseourheartrate,ourbreathing,andourbloodpressure.Calmingmusiccanrelaxourmusclesandevenlowerourskintemperature.Musiccanaffectusphysicallytoo.Everyonehasfoundthemselvestappingtheirfeetorwantingtogetupanddancetotheirfavoritesong.Musiccandefinitelyaffectourmoodandemotions.Musicisslowandquietmakesusfeelrelaxedandlessstressed,andstimulatingmusiccanenergizeusandmakeusfeelplayfulandalive.Topicsentence主题句atthebeginning:mostlyattheend:sometimesinthemiddle：rarelyPleasewriteatopicsentenceforthefollowingparagraph.Somesportsmenusemusictohelpthemtrainandperformbetter.Peoplelistentomusictopassthetimewhiledrivingthroughtraffic.Couplesmightusemusictocreatearomanticevening.Somebusinessesevenusemusictoincreaseproductivityandefficiency.Pleasewriteatopicsentenceforthefollowingparagraph.We/Peopleoftenusemusictodocertainthings.Somesportsmenusemusictohelpthemtrainandperformbetter.Peoplelistentomusictopassthetimewhiledrivingthroughtraffic.Couplesmightusemusictocreatearomanticevening.Somebusinessesevenusemusictoincreaseproductivityandefficiency.Atopicsentenceshouldbeacompletesentence.(subject+Verb)controlallthesupportingideas.beclearandconcise.nottoogeneral,andnottoospecific.Musicaffectsusinmanyways.Itcanaffectusphysiologically.Excitingmusiccanincreaseourheartrate,ourbreathing,andourbloodpressure.Calmingmusiccanrelaxourmusclesandevenlowerourskintemperature.Musiccanaffectusphysicallytoo.Everyonehasfoundthemselvestappingtheirfeetorwantingtogetupanddancetotheirfavoritesong.Musiccandefinitelyaffectourmoodandemotions.Musicisslowandquietmakesusfeelrelaxedandlessstressed,andstimulatingmusiccanenergizeusandmakeusfeelplayfulandalive.TooGeneralMusicisgoodforus.Itcanaffectusphysiologically.Excitingmusiccanincreaseourheartrate,ourbreathing,andourbloodpressure.Calmingmusiccanrelaxourmusclesandevenlowerourskintemperature.Musiccanaffectusphysicallytoo.Everyonehasfoundthemselvestappingtheirfeetorwantingtogetupanddancetotheirfavoritesong.Musiccandefinitelyaffectourmoodandemotions.Musicisslowandquietmakesusfeelrelaxedandlessstressed,andstimulatingmusiccanenergizeusandmakeusfeelplayfulandalive.TooSpecificMusicaffectsusphysiologically,physically,andemotionally.Excitingmusiccanincreaseourheartrate,ourbreathing,andourbloodpressure.Calmingmusiccanrelaxourmusclesandevenlowerourskintemperature.Everyonehasfoundthemselvestappingtheirfeetorwantingtogetupanddancetotheirfavoritesong.Musicisslowandquietmakesusfeelrelaxedandlessstressed,andstimulatingmusiccanenergizeusandmakeusfeelplayfulandalive.SupportingSentencesSupportingsentencesshoulddescribe,explain,andprovethetopicsentence.beclosetothetopicsentence.supportthetopicsentence.beclosetoeachother.belogical.Direction:decidewhichisthetopicsentenceoftheparagraphfirst.Then,arrangethesupportingsentencesinlogicalorder.a.Lateron,peoplebegantowriteonpiecesofleather,whichwererolledintoscrolls.b.Intheearliesttimes,peoplecarved(carve:雕刻)orpaintedmessagesonrocks.c.IntheMiddleAges,heavypapercalledparchment（羊皮纸）wasusedforwriting;bookswerelaboriously（艰苦地，费力地）copiedbyhand.d.Withtheinventionoftheprintingpress（印刷机）inthemiddleofthefifteenthcentury,themodernprintingindustrywasborn.e.Someformsofwrittencommunicationhavebeenusedthroughoutthecenturies.Someformsofwrittencommunicationhavebeenusedthroughoutthecenturies.Intheearliesttimes,peoplecarvedorpaintedmessagesonrocks.Lateron,peoplebegantowriteonpiecesofleather,whichwererolledintoscrolls.IntheMiddleAges,heavypapercalledparchmentwasusedforwriting;bookswerelaboriouslycopiedbyhand.Withtheinventionoftheprintingpressinthemiddleofthefifteenthcentury,themodernprintingindustrywasborn.Readthefollowingparagraphcarefully.Thenunderlinethecontrollingideaandcrossoutthesentencesthatdonothelptodevelopthecontrollingidea.Oncepeoplewereverymuchafraidofghosts鬼.Theirfearledthemtodevelopelaborate精细的rituals典礼towardoff避开encounters遭遇withthedead.Forexample,sinceprimitive原始的peoplebelievedthatghostscouldcapturetheirspiritatfunerals葬礼,theyc