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YawenWeiJanuary26,2014ALS162CriticalAnalysisInthearticle“Extremedo-gooders–whatmakesthemtick?”JinaMoore(2009)writesaboutthereasonsofpeoplebecomingextremedo-goodersandusesmanyquotationstoinformtheaudienceofthechartersofextremedo-gooders.Theauthor’stoneisveryconversationalandhaspositiveeffectforherwritingpurpose.What’smore,sheusesalotofethostomakesthearticlemoreconclusive.Mooreraisesquestionsofwhyextremedo–goodersmakethechoicetodogoodthingstoheraudiencesinthirdparagraph,whichmadeherarticleseemveryinformalandconversational.Thesehelpheraudiencetorelatetohimonapersonallevel.Moorealsousesalotofexamplestoenhanceherstatement.Inherarticle,manywordsandthoughtsarefromothersconclusionandopinion.Forexample,sheusesAshoka’scalculationinfourthparagraphwhichsupportsheropinionofonlyafewnumbersofpeoplebecomingsocialentrepreneur.What’smore,thefifthandseventhparagraphsarefilledwithquotesfromMr.Drayton’stoshowthatit’snoteasytobecomeasocialentrepreneur,alotofconditionsareneededtoachievethis.SinceMr.Draytonisafamoussocialentrepreneurandthefounderofanonprofitorganization,hisremarksaboutthisareaisverycogentandreliable.Lastbutnottheleast,sherecommendsDr.Etzioni’swordsasethosthatalthoughnoteveryonecouldbeasocialentrepreneur,westillhavehundredsofwaystodogoodthings.Inconclusion,Mooreeffectivelyinformsthattherequisitesofbecomingasocialentrepreneurareveryrigorousthatonlyafewofuscanachieveit.