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[题目要求](2011·湖南高考)假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛，请按如下要求完成一篇短文：1．简要描述下图内容，并点明主题；2．联系实际，表达该图带给你的启示。注意：1．词数不少于120个；2．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[技法指导]图画作文所提供的材料是一幅或几幅图，所写内容要求有日记、故事、简介等，有的还提供一定的参考词汇，因此有一定的发挥空间，但它并不是允许考生随意发挥，这是图画作文的特点，图画作文的一般写作步骤如下：，1．审题。主要是看清楚题目要求，读懂画面内容和所表达的含义，抓住要点，注意文体是什么，准备写作的人称和时态。如果是日记和故事，宜采用过去时态；如是简介之类的，宜采用现在时态。2．逐图列纲。主要是就每幅图的内容列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句时，就用同(近)义词或同义句代替，不要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑所涉及的情景、场合，语言要地道。3．连句成文。主要是把第二步所写的句子，在规定的范围内稍加发挥，运用适当的连词把它们串联起来组成一篇短文。但要注意句式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句、复合句要搭配运用，不要“I”到底，句号完文。4．修改润色。主要是看全文符不符合题目要求和图画含义，行文是否流畅，有没有遗漏要点；语法是不是正确，包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。第一步构建框架，清晰行文[谋篇布局][黄金模板]Fromthepicture/Inthepicture/Lookingatthepicture,wecanseeit'saboutapersonwho________(人物).It's________(时间或地点).He/Sheis/Theyaredoing________(事件)．Somethingoccurstome.________(漫画中人物)should________andshouldn't________(个人观点).Asweallknow,atpresent/inthesocietymostpeople________(联系生活实际).Besides/Worsestill,somepeople________(继续议论)．Inmyopinion,thegovernment/theschool/weshouldtakemeasuresto/somethingmustbedoneto________(采取措施)．Onlyinthiswaycantheproblembereallysolved./Onlywheneverybodycandosowillourworldbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.第二步打造亮句，增色文章1．这幅图引起我们的深刻思考：我们的社会是由许多拥有不同个性和性格的人组成的。►Wecan'thelpthinkingdeeplywhenseeingthepicture:oursocietyismadeupofmanypeoplewhohavedifferentpersonalityandcharacters.►Thepicturesetsusthinkingdeeply:oursocietyismadeupofmanypeoplewhohavedifferentpersonalityandcharacters.2．既然我们每个人都与其他人相联系，我们就应该为我们所说所做的事情负责任。►Nowthateveryoneisrelatedtoothers,weshouldtakeresponsibilityforwhatwesayandwhatwedo.►Sinceeverybodyisrelatedtoothers,weshouldberesponsibleforwhatwesayandwhatwedo.第三步串句成文，保证流畅Thepictureshowsusasimpletruth:Iftoomanydropsofwaterareputtogether,theywillbecomeasea.Manytreesstandingtogetherformaforestandmanypeoplemakeupasociety.Itconveysamessagetous:Awholeismadeupofmanysmallpartsthatarecloselyrelated.Nothingornoonecouldexistalone.Thepicturesetsusthinkingdeeply:oursocietyismadeupofmanypeoplewhohavedifferentpersonalityandcharacters.Ifwewanttocreateaharmonioussociety,wemustliveinharmonywithothers.Ontheotherhand,sinceeverybodyisrelatedtoothers,weshouldberesponsibleforwhatwesayandwhatwedosothatwecandevelopapleasantrelationshipwithothers,whichmakesitpossibleforustoenjoyourlifetothefullest.，(2012·南京模拟)请你根据所给漫画用英语写一篇短文。短文内容应该包括以下三个方面：1．描述这幅漫画的内容；2．是否同意他们的教育方式，并陈述理由；3．对家庭教育提出建议。注意：1．词数150左右；2．作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。参考词汇：溺爱spoilv.Ascanbeseeninthecartoon,theyoungcoupleeducatetheirchildindifferentways.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：Ascanbeseeninthecartoon,theyoungcoupleeducatetheirchildindifferentways.FathereducatestheirchildwitharulerbutMotherwithabarofchocolate.WhatisillustratedinthepictureisthatFatheristoohardontheirchildwhileMotherspoilshim.Theyadoptstrikinglyinconsistentmethods,whichmakestheirchildconfused.Isubscribetoneitheroftheireducationmethods.Ifwealwaysgivechildrenseverepunishment,theywillbecomenervousandlackselfconfidenceorbecomeviolentandaggressive,followinginthefather'sfootsteps.Ifwealwayslovechildrentoomuch,theywillturnouttobeself-centeredanddependent,tendingtodowhatevertheywantto.SofarasIamconcerned,itisbettertouseappropriatemethodsbasedonchildren'sindividualpersonalities.Sincepraiseandcriticismbothplayvitalrolesinchildren'seducation,itisessentialthatparentsshouldtrytomaintainthebalancebetweenloveandstrictness.Onlyinthiswaycanchildrenbenefitfromproperfamilyeducationandachieveallrounddevelopment.