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写一完整的句子句子的完整句子的连贯句子的简洁句子的多样化写一个完整的句子这几句是正确的句子吗?如果你认为有误,该怎么改?1.Themeetingwilluntil3:00.2.Workhard,youwillsucceed.3.Ihaveabrother,whoisadoctor.4.Thereareonly4studentstakepartintheclass.lastand^^^whotaking/totake句子的分类简单句:只包含一个主谓结构的句子.并列句:主谓结构+连词(and,but,so,or……)+主谓结构(或更多的主谓结构)复合句:引导词+主谓结构,主谓结构(从句)(主句)五种基本的简单句1.主语+不及物动词2.主语+及物动词+宾语Birdsfly.Busesrunfromdawntillmidnight.Wearestudyinghard.Wehavereadmanybooks.Theydoshoppingattheweekend.WearelearningEnglish.3.主语+系动词+表语4.主语+及物动词+间接宾语+直接宾语5.主语+及物动词+宾语+宾语补足语Wearestudents.Hebecameascientist.Thatsoundsgood.HegaveTomapresent.Heofferedmeajob.Wemadehimourmonitor.Themanagerthinkstheplanpractical.Hewillhavehisbikerepaired.Iwon’thaveyouspeakingtoyourmotherlikethat.并列句1.用连词/副词(and,but,so,for,or,notonly…butalso,either…or,neither…nor,while,both…and,however,therefore…)1)LiMingis18yearsoldandheisastudentinNo.1MiddleSchool.2)Hurryuporyou’llbelateforschool.3)Imustgonow,formysisteriswaitingforme.2.用“;”3.用“;+adv”1)Wefishedallday;wedidn’tcatchanything.1)Wefishedallday;however,wedidn’tcatchanything.2)Thecarwasalmostnew;besides,itwasinexcellentcondition.,butwe,soall…2)Lilydoeswellinstudy;alltheteachersthinkhighlyofher.复合句复合句里包含两个或更多的主谓结构,其中有一个主谓结构为句子的主体称为主句，另一个／些主谓结构为从句，他（们）只能充当句子的某一（些）成分，,如:主语,宾语,表语,同位语,定语,状语等.根据他们在句子中的功能分别称为主语从句,宾语从句,表语从句,同位语从句,定语从句,状语从句等.判断下面句子属于哪种复合句1)Whenweshallhaveoursportsmeetingisstillaquestion.2)ThelettersaysthattheyareleavingonFriday.3)That’swhattheyshoulddo.4)WeexpressedthehopethattheywouldcomeandvisitChinaagain.5)ThisistheverydictionarythatIamlookingfor.6)Astimewenton,Einstein’stheoryprovedtobecorrect.主语从句宾语从句表语从句同位语从句定语从句状语从句句子的连贯•Faulty:Amanisjudgednotonlybywhathesaysbutalsobyhisdeeds.•Faulty:Theideahementionedatfirstsoundedgood.1.Amanisjudgednotonlybywhathesaysbutalsobywhathedoes.2.Amanisjudgednotonlybyhiswordsbutalsobyhisdeeds.1.Theideahefirstmentionedsoundedgood.2.Theideahementionedsoundedgoodatfirst.前后的一致、对等、平衡•连贯性的要求是：句子前后之间要有照应，有衔接，思想的表达应该有序，清楚．句子与句子之间的过渡要符合逻辑，不能造成歧义或矛盾．句子的简洁１．文字简洁.如下面这些短语均可用括号中的词代替:fromtimetotime(often),drawaconclusion(conclude),withanger(angrily),Itisclearthat…(clearly)试比较下列改写的句子.Doyouknowthemanwhoisspeakingatthemeeting?Lookoutforcarswhileyouarecrossingthestreet?Doyouknowthemanspeakingatthemeeting?Lookoutforcarswhilecrossingthestreet?2.避免使用同义词重复.(如下面的这些句子,划线部分重复,应删掉).1).Heisblindinbotheyes.Heisblindinthelefteye.2).Inmyopinion,Ithinkyourplanisfeasible.3).Thedeskisroundinshapeandredincolor.4).Ishallaccompanymymotherbygoingwithhertothemarket.练习:改写下列句子,使其更简洁1.Hegavemanyreasonsforthefailure,butthereasonshegavewerenotconvincing.2.TheGreatWall,whichhasahistoryofmorethan2000years,isoneoftheworldheritages.Hegavemanyreasonsforthefailure,butnoneofthemwasconvincing.TheGreatWallwithahistoryofmorethan2000yearsisoneoftheworldheritages.练习:改写下列句子,使其更简洁3.Heattendedthepartythoughhewasbadlyill.4.NieEr,whoisthecomposeroftheNationalAnthemforthePeople’sRepublicofChina,wasborninYunnaninFebruary1912.Heattendedthepartyinspiteofhisillness.NieEr,thecomposeroftheNationalAnthemforthePeople’sRepublicofChina,wasborninYunnaninFebruary1912.练习:改写下列句子,使其更简洁8.Doyouknowthegirlwhoisdressedinred?Doyouknowthegirl_____________.9.Theprofessorwalkedintotheclassroomandhecarriedabagofbookswithhim.Theprofessorwalkedintotheclassroom,_______________________________.10.Themanwhoisstandingbythewindowisourteacher.Theman__________________＿isourteacher.（dressed）inredcarryingabagofbookswithhimstandingbythewindow练习:改写下列句子,使其更简洁11.Wedidn’tknowhertelephonenumber,sowecouldn’tgetintouchwithher.__________________________________,wecouldn’tgetintouchwithher.12.JohnsonlookedlikeamanwhowaswantedinLosAngelesforrobbery.Johnsonlookedlikeaman_______________________.13.Wefinallyreachedhomeat10pm,andweweretiredandhungry.Wefinallyreachedhomeat10pm,________________.NotknowinghertelephonenumberwantedinLosAngelesforrobberytiredandhungry基础写作的评分标准:•准确性:句子的表达要符合语法规范.•完整性:题目所列举的信息要表达完整•连贯性:整段话是一个篇章,句子之间要衔接自然,能恰当地使用连词,不是单纯的翻译句子•复杂性:无基础写作四重奏:•1.信息划分:确定哪些相关的信息可用一句话表达,确保5个句子表达完所有的信息.建议可在题目上用铅笔做①,②,③,④,⑤的标志(完整性)•2.列出关键词组和句型(准确性)•3.串联句子:用正确的语法结构写出准确的句子,并形成篇章(连贯性)•4.检查(准确性)步骤四:检查1.时态2.主谓一致3.名词单复数4.单词拼写5.动词的过去式,过去分词6.句子是否完整1.地理位置:在广东省深圳的南面2.人口约600万,面积1000余平方公里3.交通:有现代化的港口及著名的国际机场,新修建的京九铁路把香港和祖国首都北京连接起来4.历史:香港自古以来是中国领土.150多年前英国入侵香港,占领香港5.回归:1997年7月1日[写作要求]1题目：HongKong2必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容3将5个句子组织成连贯的短文步骤二：句子所需的词汇，短语和句型步骤一:信息划分(本题提示清晰,这步可省略)1.地理位置:在广东省深圳的南面belocated/situated---tothesouthof2.人口约600万,面积1000余平方公里hasapopulationof/Thepopulationof…is---coveranareaof…3.交通:有现代化的港口及著名的国际机场,新修建的京九铁路把香港和祖国首都北京连接起来4.历史:香港自古以来是中国领土.150多年前英国入侵香港,占领香港5.回归:1997年7月1日modernseaport---internationalairport---newly-builtrailway---connect…withbelongto---invade---occupyreturntoChina---onJuly1st,1997：HongKong①HongKongliestothesouthofShenzhen,GuangdongProvinceofChina.②Ithasapopulationofabout6,000,000andcoversanareaofmorethan1,000squarekilometers.③IthasnotonlythemodernseaportbutalsothefamousNewInternationalAirport;Thenewly-builtrailwayfromBeijingtoJiulongconnectsHongKongwiththecapitalofourcountry.范文:步骤三：连词成句，连句成篇：HongKong④Sincelongago,HongKonghasbel