第二节:写作中的词汇运用原则一基本正确简单安全二准确得体通顺多样一基本正确简单安全简单词怎么打造完美作文?词汇量多少才够?三种应急措施:1.试用笼统词:take,have我经历了一个极其艰苦的时代。Iexperiencedaterriblehardtime.Ihadaterriblehardtime.take百用搭配:Doyouunderstandmymeaning,sir?=Doyoutakemymeaning,sir?Iwillpresideoverthemeeting.=Iwilltakethemeeting.Iwillsubscribetothelocalnewspaper.=Iwilltakethelocalnewspaper.Theyoccupiedthecity.=Theytookthecity.Eg:四级作文中难词00.01HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation银行贷款:borrowmoneyfromthebankbankloan2.联想有关词汇—同义词和反义词1)同义词Ihadanightmarelastnight.=Ihadabaddreamlastnight.Idon‘tunderstandthisword.=Idon’tknowthisword.Practice:Theydiscontinuedtheworkatfive.Histemperisnasty.stopterrible2)反义词。Heisstubborn.=Heisnottame.Theknifeisblunt.=Theknifeisnotsharp.Thisisexpensive.=Thisisnotcheap.Sheistalkative.=Sheisneverquiet.3扬长避短--试用解释性语句Heisadumb.=Heisapersonwhocannotspeak.I‘veneverseensuchastubbornperson.=I’veneverseensuchapersonwhoneverlistenstoother‘sadvice.例文分析—简单词汇的运用Examinationisacommonheadachetostudentsallovertheworld.Theyalldetestit,butallbeingdominatedbyit.Itrepresentsatrial.dislike/hatecontrolledis/meansNowadays,examinationhasbecomeapopularformoftesting.Italmostcandominate(control)one‘sfuture.Iamnotexaggerating(tellingthetruth);foryouallknowitistrue.Ifwewanttoobtainadiploma(getagraduationpaper),wemustfirstpasstheexams.Ifwedonothaveadiploma,wemaynotfindajobeasily.Thatisthereasonwhyallstudentsarenervousandpalewhentheyaresittingforanimportantexaminationwhichmayconcern(havesomethingtodowith)theirfuture.Butaslongasexaminationisonitspeak(highestpoint)ofpower,wemustbephilosophicalof(haveacalmattitudeto)it.Ifwedonothaveexams,wemayindulgeourselves(spendourtimeon)inotherthingsinsteadofbooks.Examshavetoalwaysdriveuson.Whatiswrongforlearningmoreandthoroughly(deeply)?原则一基本正确简单安全二准确得体通顺多样2.1用词准确—5C2.2闪光词汇2.3语言通顺2.4词汇多样2.1用词准确—5C1“C”:connotation(内涵)1)避免中式英语TobeathreegoodstudentisalwaysasymbolofachievementfortheChinesestudents.all-roundstudent2)区别近义词problem:需要解决的现实问题Measureshavebeentakentosolvetrafficproblemsinbigcities.issue:常指国家政策或外交问题;争论;Theyhavepublishedalotofnewbooksoninternationalissues.question可获得解释或回答的疑问Sotherearisesthequestion:whatshouldwedotogetridofthewrongattitudestowardsthemigrantworkers?2“C”:collocation搭配applyfor:IamaChinesestudentwhowishestoapplyforadmissionintoyourprestigiousuniversity.applyto:applyatheorytopracticecome:cometothepartyparticipate/join:participate/joininextracurricularactivities3“C”:context(上下文)。书面语:论说文正式的书信06年608年12月口头语:04年6月,05年1月,07年6书面语:1)避免使用缩写形式,比如donot不要写成don’t,itis不要写成it’s。2)避免使用非标准化的表述方式,比如gonna,wanna之类的口语。1.ManycollegestudentsaregonnatakepartinCET-4.2.ManycollegestudentswouldliketotakepartinCET-4.SpokenEnglish书面语WrittenEnglishthinkmaintain/holdmoreandmorebooming/ingrowingnumbers/increasinglymostofthevastmajorityoflove/likeenthusiasmcompare…with…toweigh…and…seewitness1.Nowpeopleingrowingnumbersarecomingtorecognizeasimplebutpowerfultruth:weneedeachother.Andwemustcareforoneanother.现在越来越多的人开始认识到一个简单而又强有力的真理:我们互相需要。我们还必须互相关怀。1.现在越来越多的人开始认识到一个简单而又强有力的真理:我们互相需要。我们还必须互相关怀。Nowpeopleingrowingnumbersarecomingtorecognizeasimplebutpowerfultruth:weneedeachother.Andwemustcareforoneanother2.无热情成就不了伟业Nothinggreatwaseverachievedwithoutenthusiasm――EmersonFootballismygreatenthusiasmsayassumeshowreveal/disclose/unfold/expose/indicateexplainshedlighton/throwlightonneveronnoaccount/innocase/undernocircumstancesfaceconfrontknowrecognize/beawareof/beconsciousofentailmake…necessarymake…worseworsengooncontinuegetawayescapemanymultitudesofaboutconcerningbecauseofowingto/thankstodeepprofound4“C”:conviction(可信度)限定词:many,generally,typically等Typically,peopleprefertosay“yes”whentheyshouldsay“no”。人们在该拒绝的时候常常点头。4类限定词语1)可能性的:may,perhaps,probably,mainly,safely.Wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthatdoingpart-timejobsbenefitcollegestudents.Therearemainlytworeasons.我们可以得出这个结论,做兼职大学生可以受益。这主要有2个原因。2)概括性的:generally/ingeneral,commonly,personally.comparativelyIngeneral,youngpeopleseemmorepronetojob-hopping.3)频率的usually,sometimes,often,most,mostly,nearly,almost,atleast,atmost,mayaswellSometimes,realityisfarfromsatisfactory.4)表示客观观点的tosomeextent,tosomedegreeIdon’tagreewiththefirstargumenttosomeextent.5“C”:culture(文化)2.2闪光词汇1使用动态词汇:避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。1)把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如:Thetreesarebare.Thegrassisbrown.Thelandscapeseemsdrab.Thebrowngrassandbaretreesformadrablandscape.(转换为前置定语)2)将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如:Theteammembersaregoodplayers.Theteammembersplaywell.3)在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词或代词变成改写句的主语。Therearevarious/differentanswersamongdifferentgroupsofpeople.=Answersvary/differamongdifferentgroupsofpeople.Therewerealotofgreatchangesinthe2008s.=The2008ssaw/witnessedalotofgreatchanges.Thereisnoopportunityforpromotion.=Noopportunityforpromotionexists.2多用语意具体的动词Theworkforimprovingourenvironmentneedsmoreefforts.Theworkforimprovingourenvironmentcallsformoreefforts.Mysupervisorwentpastmydesk.Mysupervisorsauntered(=walkedslowly)pastmydesk.Sheisacarefulshopper.Shecomparespricesandquality.“动词连用”要不得eg:做兼职可以赚钱,也可以长经验。Takeapart-timejobcanprovidecolleges