高三英语议论文写作复习课

ArgumentativeWritingGuideinNMET高考英语议论文写作复习课河师大附中---何海威horsehorsetigertigeropenwaterupstreetbuythingsJustsosoboiledwatergoshoppingGoodgoodstudy,daydayupIthismorningeatbreakfast.I'mverylikeplaybasketball.Ihadbreakfastthismorning.Ilikeplayingbasketballverymuch.Studyhardandmakeprogresseveryday•WhichofthefollowingisNOTnecessaryforagoodEnglishcomposition?•A.correctgrammars•B.acleanandbeautifulhandwriting•C.aclearstructure•D.completekeypointsandenoughwords•E.longsentencesWhatmakesagoodEnglishcomposition?Badsample议论文整体三部分1.Leadingin(导入)点题；一两个句子；概括性；2.Body（主体）中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending（结尾）小结；呼应主题议论文的写作特点FivestepstowriteagoodcompositionStepone:analyzingthetask(分析任务);Steptwo:findingoutthemainpointsinChinese（用汉语列出提纲）;Stepthree:thinkingofkeypoints/phrasesandformingsentences（提纲汉译英，然后连词成句）;Stepfour:combiningthesentencesintoapassage（组句成篇）；Stepfive:checkingupthegrammarmistakes.（检查错误）不知不觉高考一天天逼近。为了在学习上不落后于同学，很多学生搬出学校的集体寝室，在学校附近租了房子。就这一现象请你写一篇英语短文来发表自己的看法。内容包括：1.在校外租房子的利与弊。（至少各写两点）2.你同意还是反对这种做法?并陈述你的理由(至少写两点）注意：1．词数为120个左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头语已为你写好（不计入总字数）。参考词汇：宿舍dormitory（dorm）租房(rent)Thecollegeentranceexaminationisapproachingdaybyday．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________高考模拟演练2.时态应以为主；A.一般过去时B.一般现在时C.一般将来时3.人称应以__________________为主。A.第一人称B.第二人称C.第三人称SteponeAnalyzingthetask1.本文是一篇议论文；SteptwoFindingoutthekeypoints•第一段简要概括这个现象；•第二段分别陈述校外租房的利与弊；•第三段表明自己的观点并简述理由。Howtowritetheleadingin?Thecollegeentranceexaminationisapproachingdaybyday.第一部分：简要概述话题随着高考的临近，为了在学习上不落后于同学，很多学生搬出学校的集体寝室，在学校附近租了房子。Inordernottofallbehindothers,quiteafewstudentsmoveoutofthedormitoryandrentaroomoutsidetheschool.第二部分：ThekeypointsofthebodyAdvantagesDisadvantages1有更多自由的时间1减少了和同学交流的机会2和父母在一起，饮食可以得到改善2需要花额外的费用3避免了宿舍其他人吵闹的影响3可能会禁不住跟别人出去玩游戏......StepthreeThinkingofthekeypointsandformingsentencesGroupworkNowworkintwogroupstotranslatethekeypointsoftheadvantagesanddisadvantagesintoEnglish.Iwillasksomeofyoutotranslatethesesentences.ThekeypointsofthebodyAdvantagesDisadvantages1havemorefreetimetostudy1havefewerchancestocommunicatewithclassmates2havebettermealslivingwithparents2spendmoremoney3avoidthenoisefromotherpeopleinthedormitory3maybecan’thelpgoingtoplaygameswithothersHowtowriteanending第三部分：表明自己的观点并简述理由。Personallyspeaking,Iagreethat______________,because__________________________________.StepfourCombiningthesentencesintoapassageNowworkingroupsoffourtocombineyourwrittensentencesintoapassage.Inthisprocess,rememberteamworkisveryimportant.Youcanrefertothismodelstructurewhilecompletingyourcomposition.ModelstructureThecollegeentranceexaminationisapproachingdaybyday．Quiteafewstudentshavemovedout___________________________.Ononehand,______________________．Firstofall，withtheirparentstakingcareofthem,______________________．Ontheotherhand，_______________________．Forexample，_____________________．What’smore，___________________.Personallyspeaking,Iagreethatlivinginarentedroom____________________________,because___________________.Sampleanswerpresentation(范文展示)Thecollegeentranceexaminationisapproachingdaybyday.Quiteafewstudentshavemovedoutfromtheirdormitoriestoliveinarentedroomneartheschooltomakeeveryminutecount．Ononehand,theyhavemorefreetimetouseontheirownafterclassesandcaneasilyconcentrateonthehomeworkaloneintheirsmallroom．What’simportant，iflivingwiththeirparents,withtheirparentstakingcareofthem，theycansparemoretimeandhavebettermeals．Ontheotherhand，therearesomedisadvantages．Forexample，sometimestheymayfeellonelywithoutfriends．What’smore，astudentwhoisleftalonetostudymaycan’thelpgoingouttoplay.Personallyspeaking,Iagreethatlivinginarentedroomisbetterforusalthoughitmayhavesomedisadvantages,becauseIbelieveitcandogoodtomystudyaslongasIcontrolmyselfproperly.StepfiveCheckingupthemistakesandcorrectingthemwitheachotherProofreading（短文改错）Workingroupstocheckupeachother’scompositionandtrytofindoutasmanymistakesasyoucanandcorrectthem.ThreekeystoimprovingyourcompositionFirst,trytousesuperior(高级)wordsandphrasesifpossible;Second,learntouseabundant(丰富的)sentences;1、倒装句Onlyinthiswaycantheydeveloptheircreativeability.2、with短语Withtheirparentstakingcareofthem，theycansparemoretimeforstudies．3、定语从句Astudentwhoisleftalonetostudytendstogetdistractedeasily.4、各种名词性从句Inspiteofthefactthat….5、强调句ItisthisopinionthatIcan'tagreewith.ThreekeystoimprovingyourcompositionThird,learntousesuitabletransitionalwords(过渡词).notonly,butalso,aswellas;besides,moreover,inaddition,what’smore;however,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary;…在英语课堂上，你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语，还是英语、汉语兼用？某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请你围绕“HowdoyoupreferyourEnglishclassestobetaught?InEnglishonly,orinbothEnglishandChinese?”这个问题，参考所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文。注意：1.词数100～120，短文开头已给出（不计词数）2.参考词汇：atmosphere氛围IprefermyEnglishclassestobetaughtin…HomeworkExample1：第1段：Recentlywe’vehadadiscussionaboutwhetherweshould...（导入话题）Ouropinionsaredividedonthistopic.（观点有分歧）议论文常见的导入(Leadingin)形式Example2：第1段：SomepeopleholdtheopinionthatAissuperiortoBinmanyways.Other