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IELTSWRITING(lessonfour)Morningmap大家来找茬大家来找茬map•ThemapbelowshowsthedevelopmentofthevillageofRyemouthbetween1995andpresent.读题目，划题眼•ThemapbelowshowsthedevelopmentofthevillageofRyemouthbetween1995andpresent.•---ThetwomapsillustratethevariousdevelopmentalchangesofthevillageofRyemouthbetween1995andpresent.找区别，作对比•fishmarketandfishingport---apartments,removed•shops–restaurants•hotel–builtacarpark•housingarea–increasedandmoreroads•farmlandandforestpark–golfandtenniscourt•地图题描写原则：•由整体到局部•由中心到周围•沿着明显线索或核心主题向周围辐射定框架，写文章•整体：•Inthefirstpicture,thevillagewasdividedintothreepartsbytwomajorroads.•局部：•Inthesouthernpart,therewasafishingportonthesea.•Andafishmarket,whichwasneartheport,wasjustlocatedatthesouthsideofthemajorroad.第一幅图描写•超市对面，路的另一边是一条购物区。•Oppositetothemarket,therewasablockofshopssittingontheothersideoftheroad.•购物区东边，两条道路交汇处是一个酒店和咖啡馆。•Eastoftheshops,ahotelandacaféwerebuiltatthejointofthetwomajorroads.第一幅图描写第一幅图描写•西北边基本是住宅区，一些房子被方形的路包围着。•Thenorthwestpartwasbasicallyaresidentialarea,andsomeofthehousesweresurroundedbyarectangularroad.•此外，东北角拥有大面积的农场地，农场地南边也建有相同面积的森林公园。•Inaddition,afarmlandofgreatacreageoccupiedthenortheastcorner,whileaforestparkofsimilarsizewasestablishedonthesouthofthefarmland.第二幅图描写•总体描述：•Inthesecondpicture,thevillagehaschangedalot.•具体描写：•Thefishingporthasgoneandthefishmarketisreplacedbyablockofapartments.•Severalrestaurantsalsotakeuptheplaceoftheshopsontheroadside.第二幅图描写•Moreover,acarparkisnewlybuiltontheeastofthehotel.•Inaddition,thehousingareabecomeslargerandabranchisbuiltfromtherectangularroadtothewest.•Finally,asportsfieldfortennisandgolfoccupiestheplaceofpreviousfarmlandandtheforestpark.•Themasbelowshowthesiteofaschoolin2013andtheplannedonein2016.•Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.Map补充（必背材料）2013SchoolSite:600studentsBuilding1Building2Carparkplayground2016SchoolSite:1000studentsCarParkoneCarParktwoBuilding1Building2Building3playgroundNWSE•改写题目：•Themapsdemonstratetheschoolsitein2013andtheplannedonein2016.•总体描述:(infrastructure增多，学生数量增多）•Itcanbeseenthattheschoolin2016isprojectedto（注意表未来时间的用法）havemoreinfrastructuresthanin2013,becausethenumberofitsstudentsisexpectedtoincreasefromarecent600toaheightof1000.Introduction•2013年学校描述：•Fromthefirstmap,wecanseethattherearetwobuildingsonthelayout（布局）oftheschoolsitein2013,oneinthenorthandtheotherinthesouth.Inthewestoftheschool（链接词最易忘）isasmallcarpark,whileaplaygroundislocatedintheeastpark,nexttoStudyBuilding2.2013SchoolSite:600studentsBuilding1Building2CarparkplaygroundNWSE•未来变化：（新增教学楼，停车场，增加两条道路，操场变大）•In2016,asthesecondmapshows,morefacilitiesareplannedtobeconstructedto（表未来）accommodate400morestudentstobeenrolled.Anewbuilding(Building3)willbebuiltintheproximityoftheoldones,whichwillthenbeconnectedbyanewroad.Amoredramaticchangecanbenotedasforthecarparkandplayground.Theschoolwillhaveanothermuchlargerparkingarea(CarPark2)whichisplannedtosubstitutetheoldplaygroundandaconnectionroadbetweenthetwoparksforeasieraccess（后置定语，可以去掉）willbebuilt.Meanwhile,anewplaygroundthatalmostdoublestheformersizewillbebuilttothesouthoftheoldlocation.2016SchoolSite:1000studentsCarParkoneCarParktwoBuilding1Building2Building3playgroundmap要点小结重点掌握方位词读图时按主要道路划分区间使用被动语态FlowchartFlowchart单向流程图循环流程图循环流程图•Thepictureblowshowshowbricksareproduced.流程图审题•Thepicturesbelowshowtherecyclingprocessofwastedglassbottles.流程图审题•Thediagrambelowshowthelifecycleofthesilkwormandthestagesintheproductionofsilkcloth.流程图审题•事物生产工艺或加工流程•动植物的生命循环•自然界某种现象的发展流程FlowchartThreeobjectsFlowchart4stepsofwriting读题目，划题眼圈信息，寻步骤读文章，作检查定框架，写文章读题目，划题眼•Thediagramsbelowdescribehowtorecycleorganicwastetoproducefertilizer(compost).圈信息，寻步骤•所有事物或原材料的名称注解•所有步骤的注解•所有表示变化的图示•所有的时间、大小、距离等数字信息定框架，写文章introductionconclusionprocess——————————————————————————————purpose————————————————————materialpreparationprocessresult开头段改写•改变句子顺序•词形替换（动词、名词、形容词）•加入/替换修饰语introduction主体段•Materialandpreparation:•Tobeginwith,weshouldprepare___________.•Thematerialsof_______include________.流程图要点•1.顺序表达法•2.被动语态•3.句子扩充Sequenceexpression•首要阶段：•Atthefirst/initialstage,...•Thebeginningofthewholecycleismarkedby…•次阶段：•Thesecondstageis…•Thenextstepintheprocessis…•最后阶段：•Thefinalphaseoftheprocedureisabout…•Inthefinalphase,…•Enteringthefinalphase,…顺序表达法顺序表达法•Tobeginwith,weshouldpreparea2cubicmetresplasticcontainerwithsomeairholesonitsbody.Step1一开始，我们需要准备2M的塑料瓶，甁身有一些气孔。顺序表达法•Secondly,putsomeorganicwasteintotheplasticcontainer.•Theorganicwasteincludesnewspaper,grassandfood.•Therightorderofaddingthemisputtingfoodinthebottom15cmofthecontainerandgrassinthemiddle15cmuponfood.Newspaperinontheverytop.Step2其次，放一些有机废料到塑料瓶中，有机废料包括报纸，草和食物。他们放的正确顺序是食物在最底层15CM,草在食物上面的15CM,报纸在最上面。•Thenaddnitrogenandwaterintothecontainer.Whatshouldbenoticedisthatwatercanonlybehotwater.Step3顺序表达法之后加些氮和水到容器中，需要注意的是水必须是热水。•Thenextstepistosealupandheatthecontainer.顺序表达法Step4下一步是封口并加热容器。•After6months,compostisproduced.Wecanusethemtofertilizethegarden.Step5顺序表达法6个月后，堆肥就生产好了，我们可以用来给花园施肥。被动语态•机械转化法：grinder,mixer,heater,crusher•Eg.Thepowdersaredeliveredtothegr