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ChinglishhorsehorsetigertigeropenwaterupstreetbuythingsgiveyousomecolourseeseeheartflowerangryopenIthismorningeatbreakfast.Haveyoueatmeal?I'malargerschoolstudent.I'mverylikeplaybasketball.Weshouldhardstudy.ButIbetterlikelistenmusic.Livetoold,studytoold.Ihadbreakfastthismorning.Goodmorning/afternoon/evening!I’macollegestudent.Wemustwork/studyhard.It’snevertoooldtolearn.ButIlikelisteningtomusicbetter.Ilikeplayingbasketballverymuch.高考复习---书面表达评析及指导ByJasmine假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你的英语学习情况并希望你简单介绍自己家乡，请你根据下列要点写回信。要点:1.我学英语已经六年了，在老师和同学们的帮助下取得了一些进步；2.但是总觉得英语难学，尤其是英语中的一些习惯用法；3.今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语，争取能用流利的英语和你写信；4.我的家乡发生很大的变化，盖起了许多高楼，拓宽了道路，变得越来越漂亮和现代化；5.如果有时间可以到中国来，我会带领你参观我的家乡。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。June8,2008DearPeter,I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.IwilltellyousomethingaboutmyEnglishstudyandhometown.………….readandwritefindithardfluentEnglishtowriteGreatchangesroadshavetakenplaceinmyhometownbuildingswidenedItwillbewonderfulwhenyoucometoChinaifyouarefreeshowyouaroundIwillbegladto语言不地道;中文式思维;语言错误较多，得分13分havehave影响书面表达得分的因素：“大错误”包括时态错误、句子结构错误、中式英语等，如：1.Myhometownhadbigchange,buildmanyhouses,……◆语言表达出现“大错误”及“小错误”→Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometownthere.Forexample,manynewhouseshavebeenbuiltandroadshavebeenwidened.2.Iwillwelcometoyou.◆“小错误”主要是反应在个别单词拼写错误、冠词介词使用不准确等方面,如：Undermyteacherandclassmatesallhelptome,…….→WelcometoChina.→Withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,……◆没有使用高级词汇和复杂句1.Iwillvisitmyhometownwithyou.2.Ifyouhavetime,Iwilltakeyoutotravelaroundmyhometown.→Iwillshowyouaroundmyhometownifyouarefree.◆书写是否工整清晰也会影响答卷得分。卷面不整洁，涂改多；大小写;标点符号;书写不清，得分会很低！Badsample卷面不整洁;涂改较多;语言错误多;层次不清;得11分字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。Onepossibleversion:June8,2008DearPeter,I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.IwilltellyousomethingaboutmyEnglishstudyandhometown.ItissixyearssinceIbegantolearnEnglish.Withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,IhavemadesomeprogressinEnglish.HoweverIstillfindEnglishhardtolearn,suchassomedifficultidiomswhichmademeconfused.Nomatterhowharditis,Ihavemadeupmymindtomasterthisusefullanguagebymyhardwork.NotlongagoIreturnedtomyhometownandfoundgreatchangeshadtakenplacethere.Manynewhouseshadbeenbuiltandroadshadbeenwidened.Myhometownisgettingmodernandmoreandmorebeautiful.IhopeifyouhaveachancetocometoChinaandI’llshowyouaroundmyhometownwhenyouareonleave.Bestwishes,LiHuaFivestepsforwriting(写作五步骤）1.Cross-question(审题)※Mainidea※Style※Verbtense※Person2.Seizethemajorpoints/keywords(抓要点)figureouttheoutline(提纲)3.Sentencesconnection(连句成文)Words/phrasesSentences5.Errorcorrecting(查错改错)4.Ensurethefluency(添加过渡，确保连贯）Conjunctions/conjunctiveadverbspassagepassageWriting词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。增强书面表达效果的技巧技巧1.使用较高级的词汇增强书面表达效果的技巧技巧1.使用较高级的词汇2.使用较丰富的句式词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。技巧1.使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式1.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.2.Weallthinkheisagreatman.3.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.Thankstothegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.I.怎样使用较高级的词汇Weallthinkhighlyofhim./weregardhimasagreatman.Agoodideaoccurredtome./Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.4.Thestudentsthereneedn’tpayfortheirbooks.5.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.Booksarefreeforthestudentsthere.Thereisnoneedforthestudentstopayfortheirbooks.II.丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。1.感叹句HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter!2.强调句Itwasthisyoungboywhohelpedtheoldgranny.3.倒装句Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.4.省略句Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.5、with短语Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.6、定语从句Let’scometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.7、各种名词性从句That’swhatIshoulddo.8、各种状语从句Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.常用的连接词•1表示递进•2表示转折•3表示因果•4表示条件•5表示时间•6表示特定的顺序•7换一种方法表述进行举例说明•8总而言之，总的来说•9其他III.常用的连接词1.表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容另外，还有：what’smore;what’sworse;besides;moreover;inaddition,furthermore;also;aswell2.表示转折关系但是，然而，相反：but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;onthecontrary.3.表示因果关系因为，因此，所以:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;thanksto;owingto;resultIn;resultfrom4.表示条件关系如果，只要:if;oncondition(that);aslongas除非:unless否则:orelse,otherwise5.表示时间关系当…的时候:when;while;after;beforeuntil;not……until……;assoonaslater;afterwards;lately;recently;sincefromthenon6.表示特定的顺序关系首先:firstly;firstofall最主要的:aboveall其次:secondly然后:then;next最后:finally;intheend7.换一种方法表述或进行举例说明换句话说:inotherwords;thatistosayforinstance;forexample;suchas;actually；andsoon；believeitornot；totellyouthetruth；asfarasI’mconcerned8.对一个话题进行总结总而言之，总的来说:onthewhole;inshort;allinall;ingeneral;inaword,finally,inconclusion,generallyspeaking,asyouknow9.其他：aboveall,afterall,atleast,atmost,undoubtedly,luckily;personally;Practice请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。1.XiaoMingwaswalkinginthestreet___________heheardsomeonecryforhelp.2.Itwasnotlong_______thepolicecame.3.___________heheardthecryforhelp,hejumpedintothewatertosavethegirl.whenbeforeAssoonas4.Wecangodowntownanddosomeshopping.__________,wecanpayavisittosomeplacesofinter