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17《作文常用关联词》审校：王伟表示时间关系：first,second,then,finally/atlast／intheend,soonimmediately,suddenly,atthesametime,meanwhile,recently表示对称顺序关系：foronething…..fortheotherthing,ononehand,…..ontheotherhand，aboveall,firstofall,firstly,secondly,next,finally，theformer….thelatter,表示递进关系：whatismore,aswell,moreover,besides,furthermore,inaddition，what’sworse表示换一种方式表达：inotherwords,thatistosay,表示举例说明：forexample,like,suchas,forinstance表示陈述事实：infact,actually,asamatteroffact,totellyouthetruth表示总结：onthewhole,inaword,tosumup,inshort,inconclusion,fromwhatIhavesaidabove表示因果关系：asaresult,thus,therefore,sothat,as,because,consequently,表示转折：but,however,while,instead,although,differentfrom,notonly..butalso表达自己的观点：inmyopinion,personally,asfarasIknow,Ibelieve,Ithink,asweallknow,Itisknowntousallthat….范例1：假如你事实李华，你班同学最近开长了一场讨论，主题是：高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼，请根据下面所提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况，并发表自己的观点．比例５５％４５％你的观点观点支持反对主要理由１．应该明天进行体育锻炼２．做早操，打乒乓球，打篮球，但时间不要过３．锻炼能增强质减少疾病４．锻炼能使大脑休息，使学习效果更好．１锻炼浪费时间２．锻炼使人疲劳３．锻炼以后很兴奋，较长时间不能学习４．锻炼中可能受伤．．．．．．1.关键词语体育锻炼做早操增强体质减少疾病休息学习有效果浪费时间投入学习受伤takeexercisesdomorningexercisesbuildupthebodyreducethediseasehaveareststudymoreeffectivelyawasteoftimepayattentiontostudybehurt2.作文结构1.….havehadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsofSenior3shouldtakephysicalexercises.Asweknow,everycoinhastwocoins./Differentstudentshavedifferentideas.2.55%ofthestudentsthink………….suchas(举例)……..（原因）…..3.Ontheotherhand,45%ofthestudentsbelieve…….(原因）……..4.Inmyopinion,Ipreferto3.范文：Recently,wehavehadadiscussionaboutwhetherhavehadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsofSenior3shouldtakephysicalexercises.Asweknow,everycoinhastwocoins.55%ofthestudentsthinktheyshouldtakeallkindsofexerciseseveryday,suchasdoingmorningexercises,playingtabletennisandplayingbasketball,butnotspendtoomuchtimeonthem.Asaproverbsays,”allworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.Exercisebuildsuptheirbodyandreducelotsofdiseases.Sportsletthemhaveagoodrestsothattheirstudywillbemoreeffective.•Ontheotherhand,45%ofthestudentsbelievetakingexerciseisawasteoftimeandtiring.Aftertakingexercise,theyaretooexcitedforalongtimetopayattentiontotheirlessons.Andit’spossibletobehurtinsports.•Inmyopinion,Iprefertotakeproperexercisesinmysparetime.练习１：“你们班会的讨论主题是“上大学是高中生唯一的出路吗？”请根据下面提供的信息．写一偏短文，客观的介绍下讨论的情况，并发表自己的观点．比例６０％３０％１０％观点上大学无所谓不上大学理由增长知识，提高素养，利于择业成功的路不只一条学费高，就业难我的看法关键词语：widenknowledge,improvequalities,hightuition,seniorstudents关键句子：６０％ofusconsideritnecessarytogotocollege10%ofstudentsthinkitnousegoingtocollege30%believe“AllroadsleadtoRome.”范例２：某中学生英语报社正开展一场题为“Youngteachersorelderlyteachers，whichdoyouprefer?”请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇短文，向该报社投稿。老年教师青年教师·教学耐心．讲解细致．经验丰富·精力充沛．教学活泼．勇于创新你的观点?注意：1．词数100左右，开头语已为你写好，不计入总数；2．短文必须包含表格的全部内容。要求观点明确，结构合理，紧凑连贯学生作品1：Comparewithyoungteachers,Ipreferelderlyteachers.Therearesomereasonsbelow.Foronething,mostofelderlyteachersarepatientinteaching.Theynotonlysparenoefforttoteachthestudents,butalsogiveclassescarefully.Theywilldoalltheycantomakethestudentsunderstandtheteachingcontent.Whatgoodteachers!Foranotherthing,elderlyteachersarefullofteachingexperience.Thisisalsothemostimportant,especiallyforusseniorstudents.Thisisonlymyopinion.Ithinkyoungteachersarealsogood.点评：亮点：1、观点鲜明，词汇句型的运用比较灵活2、过渡词及连词的使用使文章结构紧凑连贯、条理清楚。2、审题不全面，忽略了对青年教师这部分信息的处理。这一点是比较大的失误。∧1)2)3)1)Compared2)more3)trytomaketheclasseslivelyandinteresting不足之处：1、个别地方的表达需要改进。学生作品2:Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.Somestudentswholiketheelderlyteachersmorethantheyoungonesthinkthattheelderlyonesaremorepatientinteaching,morecarefulinexplainingandalsohavealotofexperience.However,theothershaveadifferentopinion.Theythinktheteacherswhoareyoungarefullofenergy.Besides,theirteachingislivelyandtheydaretobringinthenewideas.Well,inmyopinion,Ilikeboththeelderlyteachersandtheyoungonesbecausefromthemwebothcanlearnalot.点评：亮点：1、段落清楚，要点齐全，句式表达比较灵活，能适当运用复句。2、过渡词运用也比较熟练。需要改进的地方：1）2)3)＼4)1)prefertheelderlyteacherstotheyoungones2)withexplanations3)the去掉4)TheyoungteachersOnepossibleversion:Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.Somestudentsmaylikeelderlyteachers'teachingbecausetheythinkelderlyteachershavemoreteachingexperienceandthattheytendtobepatientandcarefulwithexplanations.However,Iprefertobetaughtbyyoungteachers.Firstly,westudentshavemuchincommonwiththem.Sotheyareourfriendsaswellasourteachers.Secondly,theyaremore.energeticandenthusiastic.Usuallytheycanmaketheirclasseslivelyandinteresting.Besides,theyaremorereadytoacceptorcreatenewideas,includingteaching.Thirdly,mostyoungteachersdevotethemselvestotheirwork,makingthemteachcreativelyandeffectively.Inaword,Ipreferyoungteacherstoelderlyteachers.范例２：人们对于网上交友持不同的意见．请用英语写一篇学生网上教友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的观点．赞成的理由反对的理由你的看法１．广交朋友２．可自由表达思想３．利于外语学习１．浪费时间２．影响学习３．可能上当受骗关键词：makefriends,expressfeelingfreely,foreignstudies,awasteoftime,getcheatedonline.关键句子：Studentsshouldplacetheirstudy,health,andsafetybeforeotherthings.