2014・新课标高考总复习・英语写作专项攻略三遣词造句

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2014·新课标高考总复习·英语(WY)2014·新课标高考总复习·英语(WY)一、去粗存精,去伪存真词汇量能反映一个人知识贮存量的多少,也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标准。考生要想取得高分,就要强化使用复杂、高级的词汇。好句子对词汇的要求是:用词准确,得体;选词多样;短语优先;避免重复。1.用词准确,得体写作中每个词汇的选取都要符合语言环境的要求。其中,动词最为重要。(1)我把钥匙忘在车里了。A:Iforgotmykeysinthecar.(F)B:Ileftmykeysinthecar.(T)(2)我的梦想实现了。A:Mydreamhasbecometrue.(F)B:Mydreamhascometrue.(T)2014·新课标高考总复习·英语(WY)2.选词多样写作中要恰当得体地使用高中学习的较为高级一些的词汇,绝不能停滞在之前的状态下。(1)我几乎睁不开眼睛。A:Icannotopenmyeyes.(一般)B:Icanhardlykeepmyeyesopen.(优秀)(2)他是个新手。A:Heisanewone.(一般)B:Heisagreenhand.(优秀)2014·新课标高考总复习·英语(WY)3.短语优先多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。(1)我再也不能忍受他跟我说话的方式了。A:Icannolongerbearthewayhespeakstous.(一般)B:Icannolongerputupwiththewayhespeakstous.(优秀)(2)他对我在课堂上所说的置若罔闻。A:Hedidn'tlistentowhatIsaidintheclass.(一般)B:HeturnedadeafeartowhatIsaidintheclass.(优秀)2014·新课标高考总复习·英语(WY)4.避免重复尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词,必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。(1)我喜欢读书而我的兄弟则喜欢看足球比赛。A:Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingfootballmatches.(一般)B:Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingfootballmatches.(优秀)(2)杰克是我们学校的学生。他学习特别努力。A:Jakestudiesinourschool.Hestudiesveryhard.(一般)B:Jackstudiesinourschool.Heworkshardathislessons.(优秀)2014·新课标高考总复习·英语(WY)二、连词成句,组句成篇在一篇短文中,如果句子结构要么是“主谓宾”,要么是“主系表”,则显得很单调,读起来乏味。若对简单句进行一下转换,使其主语灵活,句子结构活泼,则给人的感觉就大不一样。1.改变句子开头的方式。可以适当地把一些成分(如状语)提前,放在句子的开头,这样使整个句子读起来跌宕起伏,增加书面表达的表现力。(1)我今天早晨收到了你十月十八日的来信。A:IreceivedyourletterwhichwaswrittenonOctober18ththismorning.(一般)B:YourletterofOctober18threachedmethismorning.(优秀)2014·新课标高考总复习·英语(WY)(2)那个房子既黑暗又空荡,跟我记得的形式不同。A:Thehousewasdarkandempty.SoitlookedverydifferentfromthewayIrememberedit.(一般)B:Darkandempty,thehouselookedverydifferentfromthewayIrememberedit.(优秀)2.使用一些表达感情的句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。(1)那是一部有趣的电影。A:Itisaninterestingfilm.(一般)B:Whataninterestingfilmitis!(优秀)C:Howinterestingafilmitis!(优秀)2014·新课标高考总复习·英语(WY)(2)只是当他回来时我们才查明了真相。A:Wefoundoutthetruthwhenhereturned.(一般)B:Wedidn'tfindoutthetruthuntilhereturned.(优秀)C:Onlywhenhereturneddidwefindoutthetruth.(优秀)3.句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句式,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格结构、分词结构等也可使用。(1)他的父亲是否能痊愈还是个问题。他为此非常焦虑不安。A:Hedon'tknowwhetherhisfatherwillrecover,soheisveryupset.(一般)B:Whetherhisfatherwillrecoverisstillaproblem.Andheisveryupset.(简单句与复合句共用)(优秀)2014·新课标高考总复习·英语(WY)(2)你每天帮我学英语。你太好了!A:YouhelpmestudyEnglisheveryday.Youareverykind.(一般)B:It'sverykindofyoutohelpmelearnEnglisheveryday.(优秀)C:HowkindofyoutohelpmelearnEnglisheveryday!(优秀)2014·新课标高考总复习·英语(WY)Ⅰ.阅读下列两段文字,比较其差异性A.Wecanimaginethebeautifulsurroundings.Therearemanytreesalongthestreets.Thereisacleanriverinthecity.Therearemanyfishesintheriver.Therearewillowtreesontheoneside.Therearesomepiecesofgrasslandontheotherside.Therearemanyflowersonthem.2014·新课标高考总复习·英语(WY)B.Justimaginethebeautifulsurroundingsifwemakeourcitiesgreener.Greentreeslinethestreets.Acleanriverwindsthroughthecity,inwhichalotoffishesabound.Ontheonesidestandrowsofwillowtrees.Ontheothersideliesastretchofgrasslandsprinkledwithmanyyellowandredflowers.A:B:文中七个句子都是简单句,句型结构单一,而且句子长短统一,都在七八词左右,十分单调。改写后的这段文字,有长句,也有短句,一长一短,抑扬顿挫的节奏感就出来了。不仅句子长短交叉,而且句型结构变化也很大,使文章流畅自然,生动活泼。2014·新课标高考总复习·英语(WY)Ⅱ.选择适当的单词填空1.Don'treadthesunlight.(in/under)2.Hehasabodytemperature.(high/hot)3.Shelivesandoftenfeels.(alone/lonely)4.Ithinkthepatientwillgetsoon.(good/well)5.WeChristmaswithatreeandmanypresents.(congratulate/celebrate)Ⅲ.一句多译1.妈妈匆匆忙忙上班去了,连早饭都没吃。Motherwenttoworkhurrily,shedidn'thavebreakfast.=MotherwenttoworkU.Shedidn'thavebreakfast.=Motherwenttoworkinahurrybreakfast.inhighalonelonelywellcelebrateinahurrywithouthaving2014·新课标高考总复习·英语(WY)2.我宁愿呆在家里也不愿去看电影。Ipreferathomeratherthanthefilm.=Ipreferathometothefilm.=Iwouldratherathomethanthefilm.3.我们到达农场时,受到了农民的热烈欢迎。Whenwegottothefarm,weweregivenawarmwelcomebythefarmers.=Whenthefarm,weawarmwelcomefromthefarmers.=On,wewerebythefarmers.tostaygotoseestayinggoingtoseestaygotoseereachingreceivedarrivingatthefarmwarmlywelcomed2014·新课标高考总复习·英语(WY)Ⅳ.改写句子1.Heseatedonthegrass.→2.Therewerealotofpeoplediedinthefire.→3.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)→4.Iwon'tbelievewhathesays.(使用状语从句)→Heseatedhimselfonthegrass.Therewerealotofpeoplewhodiedinthefire.Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon'tbelieve.2014·新课标高考总复习·英语(WY)5.HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒装句改写)→NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.2014·新课标高考总复习·英语(WY)本小节结束请按ESC键返回

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