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IELTSWRITINGGenarlIntroduction时间字数题型考查能力分数比重A类G类Task120mins/15mins150wordsChart(line,pie,bar,flow)Table,mapLetter（complaint,request,apology…)客观描述信息和数据40%Task240mins/45mins250words议论文说理和论证60%TASK2Brainstorming1：Childrennowwatchmoretelevisionthanatanytimeinthepast.Writeanessayforauniversitylecturerconsideringitspotentialrisksandbenefits.For:gainknowledgeobtaininformationwiden(broaden,expand)theirvision/horizonswatchitforrelaxation.importanteducationaltool.IELTSWRITINGAgainst:Physical:weakenchildren’seyesight/doharmto/impaircouchpotatoPatientgrowthin/switchthechannelStudy:1.wastetime2.takeuptoomuchofchildren’slimitedprecioustimewhichcanotherwisebeusedformorevaluableactivities,suchassportsorhomework,andthereforeresultinpooracademicperformance.Studentsbecomeaddictiveandtheycannotgetthemselvesawayfromthenegativeinfluenceoftelevision.IELTSWRITINGMind:Alienate/distancetheirrelationshipwithfamiliesadultonlyprogramsConfuse/puzzlechildrenMislead:violence/sexuallyappealingthingsIELTSWRITINGBrainstorming2Boardingschool:For：1.Cultivatethespiritofindependence,lookafterthemselves.2.Communicatewiththeirpeers,learntocooperateandtolerate,developasenseofteamworkandcollectivism.3.LesslikelytobespoiledIELTSWRITING1.Lackofadequatecommunicationandemotionalexchangewithparents,thuswideningthegenerationgap.2.Badforphysicaldevelopment3.Psychologicalhealth:homesick,lonely4.Pronetonegativeinfluence5.Expenditure/costAgainst:1.充分利用原题信息改写实例Atpresentitishardforcollegegraduatestofindjobs.Manypeopleclaimthatcollegeteachersshouldgiveprioritytopracticalcourseslikecomputerscienceandbusinessoversuchtraditionalonesashistoryandgeography.Whatdoyouthink?AtpresentThesedays,nowadays,atthepresenttime,currently,inthecontemporarysociety/worldHardFinditdifficulttodo,havedifficultiesindoingsth.CollegegraduatesCollegestudents…whentheygraduateManynumerous,agreatnumberof,countlessClaimargue,contend,insist,maintain,proclaim,state,advocate,holdtheviewthat,assertGiveprioritytoprioritize,paymore/increasingattentionto,laymorestresson,attachgreatimportanceto改写后Thesedaysthereisagrowingtendencyforcollegestudentstohavedifficultiesinfindingjobswhentheygraduate.（事实引入）Alargenumberofpeopleholdtheopinionthatlackofpracticalknowledge,amongotherthings,contributestothissituation.Inlightofthis,theycontendthatcollegeteachersshouldlaymorestressonpracticalcoursesthanontraditionalones.Formypart,Iaminfavoroftheirviewpoint.现代社会AtpresentInthecontemporary/modernsocietyInthisinformationeraAsweareusheredintotheinformationageIELTSWRITING提供大背景1.Recently,sth.hasbecomeapriorityforsb.seekingtosecureabrightfutureinthisrapidlychangingworld.IELTSWRITING2.Theissueofsb.doingsth.isacomplexandsensitiveonewhichhasdrawnattentionfromsb1.,sb2,andsb3.IELTSWRITING3.Thereisagrowingtendencyforsb.todosth.3.Overthelasthalfcenturythepaceofchangeinthelifeofhumanbeingshasincreasedbeyongourwildestexpectations.Thishasbeendrivenbytechnologicalandscientificbreakthroughsthatarechangingthewholewayweviewtheworldonanalmostdailybasis.IELTSWRITINGComputerandlibrary?IELTSWRITINGIELTSWRITING一.包含关系1.amongwhichA…A由很多后果（thisphenomenonmighthavequiteafewnegativeeffects）,amongwhichBcouldbeoneofthemostremarkable.Arecentsurveyshowsthatteenagersspend14hourswatchingtelevisionprogramseachweek,butonly6hourswiththeirfamilymembers.Somepeopleclaimthatthishasanunfavorableinfluenceontherelationshipbetweenthemandtheirfamilymembers.→IELTSWRITINGArecentsurveyindicatesyoungpeopleintheirteensspendthevastmajorityoftheirsparetimewatchingTVratherthantalkingwithotherfamilymembers.Thisphenomenonmightbringquiteafewnegativeeffects,amongwhichtheunfavorableinfluenceonthefamilyrelationshipcouldbeoneofthemostremarkable.IELTSWRITING2:在问题——解决引出主题的过程中，都可以套叠一个大范围——小范围问题——很多解决方案amongwhich…couldbeoneofthemostremarkableItisimportantforchildrentolearnwhatisrightandwhatiswrongatanearlyage.Punishmentisnecessarytohelpthemlearnthedistinction.Towhatextentdoyouagree,andwhatsortofpunishmentshouldbegiven?——Childrenshouldbeinstilledwhatisrightandwhatiswrongatanearlyage.Therearequiteafewwaystoachievethisend,amongwhichpunishmentisaverypopularmeans.Thebestwaytoimproveenvironmentistoincreasethepriceoffuel?IELTSWRITING二.对等关系通过强对比引出主题：先写强对比的事物A，然后再写主题AIELTSWRITING1)WhereasWhatareyouropinionsabouttheadvantagesanddisadvantagesof“fastfood”and“traditionalfood”?→Somepeoplehurrytofastfoodrestauranttosavetheirtime,whereassomeotherswaitarelativelylongtimefortraditionalfood.IELTSWRITINGPublictransportorprivatecars?IELTSWRITING2)OntheotherhandNowadays,therearetwokindsofschool:publicandprivate.→Recently,thereisagrowingtendencyforstudentstoenterprivateschools.Ontheotherhand,somepeoplestillprefertogotopublicschools.Generalknowledgeorpracticalskills?IELTSWRITING三．转折关系通过转折引出主题BbutA1)shouldhave…however/Admittedly…howeverAreportindicatesthatnowadayschildrenarebecomingmoreandmorelazy;fatandunsociable.——Thesocialandeconomicdevelopmentshouldhaveresultedinahappierlife.However,(nowadays)recentlymoreandmore(increasinglymore)parentsareconcerningtheirchildrenhavebecomelazy,fatandunsociable.IELTSWRITING