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雅思写作完全攻略上海环球雅思俞伟国Blog:课时安排MarkingSystemEssayWritingIntroductionBodyConclusionStructureReportWriting雅思考试作文部分题型题型分值字数要求建议时间小作文图表作文(Report)1/3150words20mins大作文议论文(Essay)2/3250words40mins近年雅思考试中国大陆考区作文部分得分情况(FromMatClark)Band4orbelow:15%-20%Band5:60%Band6:15%-20%Band7:5%Band8orabove:RareAverageBandofWritingin2010:5.11KeyLanguageFeaturesinMarkingSystemTaskResponse:1.Noevidenceofdigression/irrelevantcontent2.AdequateWords3.Position+SupportingIdeas+DevelopmentCoherenceandCohesionCohesivedevicesPart-timejobsoccupyalotoftimeofthecollegestudents.Andtheirstudymightbeaffected.Part-timejobsoccupyalotoftimeofthecollegestudents.Asaresult,theirstudymightbeaffected.LexicalResource1.Accurateness雅思写作最容易出错的两类词：(1).形似词ContactContractContrast(2).“伪同义词”Collegestudentsaretooyoungandnotripeenoughtogetmarried.Collegestudentsaretooyoungandnotmatureenoughtogetmarried.Peopletendtohavestrongdoubt/suspectastotheauthenticityofthenews.Womeninhighpositionsoftenhavetobesobusywiththeirworkthattheirfamilylivesareoftenignored/neglected.ImportantSignificantCrucialVitalEssentialIndispensablePlayasignificantroleBeofgreatimportance2.LV=Less-commonVocabularyNowadays,sportsstarsmake/earnalotofmoney.Atpresent,sportsstarsarepaidhandsomely.3.Variety人类thehumanracehumanitymanhumankindHomosapiensmortalGrammaticalRangeandAccuracy1.AccuratenessDespitetherearealotofpeoplesupportthisproposal,encouragecollegestudenttakeuppart-timejobsarestillregardedasabadideabysomeothers.Despitethefactthattherearealotofpeoplewhosupportthisproposal,encouragingcollegestudentstotakeuppart-timejobsisstillregardedasabadideabysomeothers.2.C.S=ComplexSentence3.VarietyChapterOneEssayWriting第一章.议论文完全攻略PartOneIntroduction－闪亮开篇－TheStructureofIntroduction1.BackgroundInformation(1).Lead-inSentence(Introducethesubjectofthetopic)(2).PublicOpinion2.Statement(Stateyourposition)(1)Inthelastcentury,thefirstmanwalkingonthemoonsaidthatitwasabigstepformankind.However,somepeoplethinkitmadelittledifferencetopeople’slives.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?(2006.4.8)LanguageSkill:Paraphrase方法之一－具体化(Specification)(笼统概念－缩小范围)Inthe1960s’,whenAmericanastronautArmstronglandedonthemoonforthefirsttime,BackgroundInformationheexcitedly/proudlyannouncedthatitwasagreatstepformankind.Nowadays,however,somepeoplebelievethatitactuallyhadlittleimpactonmostpeople’sdailylives.StatementFrommypointofview,(IthinkthisopinionisnotrightandIdon’tagreetoit.)Idon’tthinktheopinionholdsmuchwater.(2).Foodcanbeproducedmuchmorecheaplytodaybecauseofimprovedfertilizersandbettermachinery.However,somepeoplethinkthemethodsusedtodothismayhavenegativeeffectsonlocalcommunitiesandbedangeroustohumanhealth.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?(2005.2.5)LanguageSkill:Paraphrase方法之二－单词转换优先考虑三大词类：VadjadvParaphrase方法之三－句型转换方法一:主动－被动Nowadayspeoplecanmanufacturefoodfarmoreeconomicallythankstomoreadvancedfertilizersandmachinery.Nevertheless,somepeopleholdthemethodsusedmaydoharmtopeople’shealthaswellaslocalcommunities.BackgroundInformation方法2:and并列句－aswellas递进句StatementInmyopinion,theirconcernhasitsreasonstoacertainextent.(3).Manypeoplesayteachersshouldonlyteachstudentsacademicsubjects；Otherssayteachersshouldalsotaketheresponsibilityofteachingstudentstojudgewhatisrightandwrong.Discussthebothviewpointsandgiveyourownopinion.(2006.3.18)LanguageSkill:句型转换(方法3):实义动词(…怎么样)Somepeopleholdtheopinionthatitisthesoletaskforateachertointroduceacademicknowledgetothestudents.BackgroundInformation↓Be动词(…是什么)Whilesomearguethatatrulyoutstandingteachershouldbethementorofbothknowledgeandlifetotheirdisciples.Statement(Inmyopinion,Isupportthesecondviewpoint.)Personally,Iaminfavorofthelatteropinion.(4)Somepeoplebelievethatairtravelshouldbeprohibitedasitusesupfuelresourcesandcausespollution.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement?(2006.2.18)Accordingtosomecritics,(supporter/advocate)airtravelshouldbebannedduetothefactthatitcontributesto(cause)(leadto)(resultin)environmentalproblemsaswellasconsumestoomuchfuel.BackgroundInformationStatementAsfarasIamconcerned,Idon’tthinktheviewpointholdsanywater.(5)Somepeoplebelievethatscientificresearchshouldbeconductedbythegovernmentratherbyprivatecompanies.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?(2005.12.10)Ratherby－InsteadofLanguageSkill:句型转换-方法4:一般陈述句肯定句－强调句Somepeopleproposethatitisthegovernmentinsteadofprivatecompaniesthatshouldtakechargeofscientificresearch,BackgroundInformationStatementwhichIfullyagreewith.It+be+强调对象+that+说明部分(6).Inmodernsociety,therearemoreandmoreoldpeople.Doyouthinkitsbenefitsoutweighitsdrawbacks?(2006.2.12)LanguageSkill:信息量偏少的TopicIntroduction写作对策追根溯源法－Factor(s)[因]－Phenomenon(Subject)[果]ImprovedlivingstandardIncreasinglifeexpectancyMoreandmoreoldpeopleWiththeimprovementofthelivingstandard,humanlifeexpectancyisincreasing,whichhasresultedinthephenomenonthatthenumberandtheproportionofseniorcitizensarebooming.BackgroundInformationStatementAsfarasIamconcerned,Iopinethatcomparedwiththebenefits,thepotentialproblemsstillprevailingeneral.2.Report－Introduction写作对策Fartoolittlehasbeendonetopreventanimalsand