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看图作文写作技巧看图作文的关键：•1.看懂图片，以防跑题。•2.确定短文的时态和人称。•3.审-译-改-誊•4.适当添加评论等内容2011年北京高考假设你是你是李华，本周你们正在学习LifeintheFuture单元。白天，你们进行了讨论；夜晚，你梦见乘坐时间飞船到3012年的学校参观。请根据下面五幅图，写一篇日记。时态和人称•人称：一人称•时态：本周学习（现在时）对梦中的描述（过去式）本周正在学习LifeintheFuture白天进行了讨论WearelearningLifeintheFuturethisweek.WehavelearnedLifeintheFuture.WehavebeenlearningLifeintheFuturethisweek.Wehadadiscussionaboutit.本周正在学习LifeintheFuture白天进行了讨论WelearnLifeintheFuturethisweek.WelearnedLifeintheFuturethisweek.Wehaveadicussionaboutit.同学们存在的问题晚上，我梦见乘坐时间飞船到3012年的学校参观Atnight,IdreamedthatIvisitedaschoolin3012byatimecraftthroughthetimetunnel.Ivisitedtheschoolandtalkedwiththestudentsatthattime.在未来学校中，我参观了学校和学生进行交谈晚上，我梦见乘坐时间飞船到3012年的学校参观Atnight,IdreamedthatIwenttotheyear3012.Itookatimecraftandthroughedatimetunnel.Ivisitedafutureschool.在未来学校中，我参观了学校和学生进行交谈Ivisitedtheschoolandtalkedwiththestudentsatthattime.Tomygreatsurprise,therewasnoclassroominthefutureschool.Studentsalllearntheknowledgebylookingatthecomputers.同学们存在的问题当我要飞回2012年的时候，我的时间飞船的警报器响了，我感觉非常害怕Afterthevisit,Iwasonmywaybacktotheyear2012.Myalarmonthecraftsoundedtowarnthattherewassomethingwrongwiththecraft.Iwasshocked.当我要飞回2012年的时候，我的时间飞船的警报器响了，我感觉非常害怕Aftervisited,Iwasonmywaybacktotheyear2012.Suddenly,thealarmonthecraftbeginring/shout.Itseemedsomethingwrong.Thatissomethingwrong.Somethingseemedtobewrong.Theremustbesomethingwrong.Thetimecraftedshoked.同学们存在的问题我吓得一下子惊醒，原来是起床的时候了Justatthattime,Iwokeup.Thealarmwasstillringing.Itwasthealarmclockthatwokemeup.Itwastimetogetup.一，简单句与复合句并用，长短句结合二，简单句合并为复合句三，把复合句改为简单句把从句改为分词短语把从句改为介词短语四，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.五，注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。六.适当的联想与发挥。非谓语动词从句特殊句式注意：不能不用，且不能少用，但也不能滥用。使用高级句式定语从句，状语从句，名词性从句(主、宾、表、同位语从句)倒装句，感叹句，强调句，虚拟语气…WehavebeenlearningLifeintheFuturethisweek.Wehadadiscussionaboutit.Thisweek,wehavebeenlearningLifeintheFuture.Inthisunit,wehavenotonlylearnedalotaboutourfuture,butwediscussedaboutthistopicaswell.Atnight,IdreamedthatIvisitedaschoolin3012byatimecraftthroughthetimetunnel.Ivisitedtheschoolandtalkedwiththestudentsatthattime.Atnight,IhadaninterestingdreaminwhichItravelledthroughthetimetunneltotheyearof3012bytimecraft.Ivisitedtheschoolandhadanicetalkwiththestudentsthere.Afterthevisit,Iwasonmywaybacktotheyear2012.Myalarmonthecraftsoundedtowarnthattherewassomethingwrongwiththecraft.Iwasshocked.Afterthevisit,Iwasonmywaybacktotheyear2012whenmyalarmonthecraftsoundedtowarnthattherewassomethingwrongwiththecraft.Iwasshocked.Justatthattime,Iwokeup.Thealarmwasstillringing.Itwasthealarmclockthatwokemeup.Itwastimetogetup.Shocked,Iwokeupsuddenly.However,thealarminthetimecraftwasstillringing!Lookingaround,Irealizeditwasthealarmclockthatwarnedthatitwastimetogetup.Whatarelief!Itwasonlyadream!...thatremindedmeofthetimetogetup...Sept21,2012FridayFineThisweek,wehavebeenlearningLifeintheFuture.Inthisunit,wehavenotonlylearnedalotaboutourfuture,butwediscussedaboutthistopicaswell.Atnight,IhadaninterestingdreaminwhichItravelledthroughthetimetunneltotheyearof3012bytimecraft.Ivisitedtheschoolandhadanicetalkwiththestudentsthere.Afterthevisit,Iwasonmywaybacktotheyear2012whenmyalarmonthecraftsoundedtowarnthattherewassomethingwrongwiththecraft.Shocked,Iwokeupsuddenly.However,thealarminthetimecraftwasstillringing!Lookingaround,Irealizeditwasthealarmclockwhichremindedmeofthetimetogetup.Whatarelief!Itwasonlyadream!总结：1.审题一定要仔细2.要按要求写作(guidedwriting,directions)3.文章中描写部分要注意“人称，时态”的统一4.长短句结合，合理使用高级句式5.不要盲目套用信件等应用文的模式6.功夫下在平时。夯实基础，注重积累好词好句