2011年高考英语书面表达-江苏漫画

2011-3Attentionplease!《2011江苏高考说明》高考英语书面表达示例2---看图作文：看图作文的“图”不局限于某一类型的图，如漫画、广告，也包括其他图片、照片、图表等情景材料。考生们可根据图示的寓意、内容或情节线索，自己组织文字，进行描述、叙述、比较或表达思想观。作文应覆盖提示的要点，但应避免仅根据提示文字作简单翻译。•Differentformsofpictures70%76%67%62%0%10%20%30%40%50%60%70%80%韩国日本美国中国WritingbasedoncartoonsAreyoufamiliarwiththiscartoon?Whatabilitiesshouldwehave?1.读图3.谋篇2.解意Ⅰ.读图：TopicsofcartoonsTopicsofcartoonsEnvironmental/NaturalproblemsSocialphenomenonAttitudestowardslifeⅡ.解意(theme)-----tothepoint注意:文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)，切记要认真阅读！！！1.辨明褒贬，找准角度(angle)２.联系生活，明晰主旨(theme)下面的漫画反映了一种社会现象，请你根据对这幅漫画的理解，用英语写一篇短文，描述一下他们的不同境遇，并就如何解决此问题发表你的看法。Example1._______角度comparison主旨educationinequality•ThecomparisonindicatesthephenomenonofeducationinequalityinmodernChina.角度criticize主旨Thestudentsaswellastheirparentsonlyfocusontheiracademicachievements,neglectingpsychologicalqualityandmoralstandards.Example2Judgethethemesofthefollowingcartoonsasquicklyaspossible.Comeon!Chooseme!21345Peoplelackcommunication.Picture1Protectanimals.Nobuying,nokilling.Picture2Peoplecan’taffordheavymedicalfees.Picture3Picture4Onefalsemovemaylosethegame.Lookbeforeyouleap.Moneycan’tbuyeverything.Healthisthebestwealth.Picutre5下图是某人寿保险公司的一则经典广告招画，这则广告想要告诉我们什么？——————ifunexpectedcan’tforeseeprotectourselvesbuyinsurancePicture6Theadvertisementaboveshowsusthattherearealwayssomeunexpected“ifs”inourlife,butnotallofuscanforeseethemclearly.Sobuyinginsuranceforlifeislikelythebestwaytoprotectourselvesfromadeadly“if”.Conclusion:Whenitcomestoattitudestowardslife,usingpropersayingsmakessense.Ⅲ.谋篇---organizationStep1.Descriptionstep2.AnalysisStep3.Solutions发现问题解决问题分析问题Step1Description（人称/时态）Towhatdegreeshouldwedescribethecartoon?OrganizationExampleacountryboycryinglongforeducationacityboyenjoyallthebenefitsofeducationAsisvividlyshowninthepicture,Ascanbeseeninthepicture,Inthepicture,thereare…Thepictureshowsacommonphenomenon.……Sentencestructures:_______________________________,acountryboyiscryinghelplessinthedarkness,longingeagerlyforschooleducation,incontrast,thecityboyontherightisenjoyingallthebenefits.Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,Step2Analysis(联系实际分析)(facts/reasons/results…)Sentencestructures1.Whatarethereasonsforthisphenomenon?2.Itseemsveryridiculousthat…However,thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere.3.Thepictureshowsthat…Itistheexactreflectionof…4.Thepictureindicatesthatwe…/Nowadays,itisacommonphenomenonthat…5.Thisisaironic(讽刺的)cartoonwhichdescribesvividlyakindofcommonphenomenonamong……Clues：描述一下他们的不同境遇，并就如何解决此问题发表你的看法。Indicate:educationinequalityFacts:dropoutofschoolsufferfromlowstandardsof…comparativelybetteropportunitiesResults:lowerenrollmentratesworsentheproblemExampleThecomparisonindicatesthephenomenonofeducationinequalityinmodernChina.(facts)School-agecountrychildrenareoftendroppingoutofschoolduetopoverty.Eventhosewhomanagedtostayinschoolarestillsufferingfromthelowstandardsofeducationalfacilitiesandacademicquantities.Comparatively,citychildrenhavemuchbetteropportunitiestoreceivegoodeducation.(results)Thus,schoolinthecountrysidegenerallyhavemuchlowerenrollmentratesthanthoseinthecity,whichinturnworsenstheproblemofeducationalinequality.●AsfarasI’mconcerned/Inmyopinion,Frommypointofview,…Onlyinthiswaycan…./Onlyif…,canwe…Step3Solutions(opinions/suggestions)Itishightimewetooksomemeasurestoputanendtothisphenomenon./Immediatemeasuresshouldbetakento…●Thegovernmentshouldmakelawsto…●Themediashouldappealfor…●Weshouldraisepeople’sawarenessof…●Everyoneshouldmakegreateffortsto…从大到小从意识到行动ThegovernmentThemediabeawareofOnlyif…socialjusticeharmonioussocietyExampleTosolvethisproblem,thegovernmentshouldspendmoremoneyontheimprovementofeducationinruralareas.Meanwhile,themediacanappealforthepublicdonationsforruraleducation.Moreover,allpeopleinthecommunityshouldbeawareoftheseriousnessoftheproblemanddowhatevertohelp.OnlyifwedothesecanwehavemoresocialjusticeandthusmakeoursocietymoreharmoniousPractice目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以“HealthCare”为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。__________________________________Clues:简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。StepsContentsDescriptionAnalysisSolutionsanoldmansufferfromgotohospitalmedicalbillcan’taffordanotherattach…Results:1.indebt2.bearthepain3.waitfordeath…1.reducemedicalexpenses2.buildupmedicalinsurance/caresystem…HealthCare(Description)Fromthepicture,wecanseethattheoldmanwassufferingfromhearttrouble/attack.Hehadtogotohospitalformedicalcare.Whenhesawthemedicalbillwith$5,0000fromthehospital,hewassoshockedthathecouldn’tstandonhisfeet.Itwasbeyondwhathecouldafford．It’sreallyanotherheartattackforhim.SampleAnalysisAtpresent,manypeoplecan’taffordheavymedicalfees.(Results)Becauseofthis,theymaygetintodeepdebtinordertogetpropermedicalcare.Worsestill,somecannotborrowanymoneysotheyhavetobearthepainofdiseasesorwaitforthelastdayoftheirlife.Whatapity!SolutionsTosolvetheproblem,westronglycallforthemedicalexpensestobereduced．Thegovernmentshouldbuildupmedicalinsurancesystem,andtryitsbesttoexploreanddevelopanewhealthcaresothateveryonewillbeabletoenjoytheirlifeaslongaspo