【三维设计】2014高考英语二轮课件：增分篇专题 书面表达 词汇美、妙语多

词汇美、妙语多，阅卷老师心愉悦——多给分第三讲一份高考作文在阅卷时往往在1分钟内就被判定为生死，大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇，老师的给分也绝不会吝啬！一、使用高级词汇的4大原则1．多实少虚原则写文章不要空话连篇，要多写一些实际的东西，这就要求写作时多用实词，少用虚词。虚词是指那些大而没有实际意义的词，多用蕴涵感情色彩的词语。如good指人时可用以下形容词替换：kind,honest,generous,selfless,brave,warm­hearted,sympathetic,honorable,humorous,smart,gentle等；good指事物或事情时可用以下形容词替换：great,fantastic,splendid,marvelous,excellent,wonderful,meaningful,enjoyable等。因此，以下句子中的形容词虽然都可以用good代替，但远不如原句出彩。①Ihopeeveryonecanhaveawonderfultime.②Heisawarm­heartedteacher.③ThisisreallyaniceideatogoclimbingMountHuathisweekend.2．短语优先原则多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。例如：①Also,I'dlikeyoutome.(2013·新课标全国卷Ⅰ)→Also,I'dlikeyouto.②I'veaskedhimtobringyoutheChinesepaintingyou.(2013·新课标全国卷Ⅰ)→I'veaskedhimtobringyoutheChinesepaintingyou.这样单词数明显增加，句子更生动，表达也更准确。helpdomeafavourwantHavebeenlookingforwardto3．弃旧取新原则写作中要恰当得体地使用高中学过的、较长的词汇。如可以用eventually代替finally，用challenging代替hard，用attachimportanceto代替payattentionto，用delightedly代替happily，用immediate代替quick，用beoccupiedwith代替bebusywith等。例如：①Withyourfinancialaid,I'mmorefinlessporpoiseswillsurvive.(2013·重庆高考)→Withyourfinancialaid,I'mthatmorefinlessporpoiseswillsurvive.②Iwilltrafficrulesalltheway.(2013·安徽高考)→Iwilltrafficrulesalltheway.③Makingfulluseoftimeisagoodhabit,whichonetoplancarefully.(2013·四川高考)→Makingfulluseoftimeisagoodhabit,whichonetoplancarefullysureconvincedrememberinmindasksrequireskeep4．避免重复原则尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。例如：①Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingfootballmatches.→Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingfootballmatches.②We'vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingbesidetheoldoneandwe'vealsobuiltalibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe.→We'vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingbesidetheoldoneandwe'vealsosetupalibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe.1．第一first→tobegin/startwith2．第二second→inaddition/what'smore3．第三third→lastbutnotleast4．总之inaword→tosumup/inconclusion/insummary5．但是but→however6．机会chance→opportunity7．选择choice→alternative8．考虑consider→takeintoaccount/consideration9．课程course→curriculum10．充足enough→adequate11．影响effect→influence12．最终finally→eventually13．勤奋hardworking→diligent14．帮助help→assist15．分发handout→distribute16．后果result→consequence17．替代replace→substitute18．拒绝refuse→deny19．应该should→besupposedto20．缺点shortcoming→drawback21．理解understand→makesenseof/figureout22．可用useful→available23．使用use→employ/makeuseof24．艰难的difficult→painstaking25．求同存异agreepartly→agreewithreserve/agreetodisagree26．种类繁多allkindsof→awiderangeof27．也；和aswellas→inadditionto/apartfrom28．反对beagainst→objectto29．厌烦beboredwith→befedupwith30．忙于bebusyin/with→beoccupiedin/with31．发生happen→occur/comeabout32．几乎不hardly→barely33．提高improve→promote34．重要important→vital35．立即immediately→inaflash36．不可能impossible→outofthequestion37．有趣interesting→absorbing/striking/appealing38．参加join→participate39．幸运lucky→fortunate40．巨大large→enormous41．有意义meaningful→rewarding42．许多many→alargequantityof43．明显obvious→apparent44．合适proper→appropriate45．丰富rich→abundant46．小心谨慎becareful→becautious47．与……不同bedifferentfrom→differ/varyfrom48．渴望做……beeagertodo→bedyingtodo/longtodo49．因为becauseof→onaccountof50．闻名befamousfor→haveareputationfor51．伤心besad→becastdown52．正在建设beingbuilt→underconstruction53．感到着急feelanxious→experienceanxiety54．感到舒心feelcomfortable→feelatease55．在我看来inmyopinion→asfarasIamconcerned56．美化学校makeourschoolbeautiful→beautifyourschool57．故意onpurpose→deliberately/bydesign58．置若罔闻refusetolistento→turnadeafearto59．成功做某事succeedindoingsth.→makeit60．无法描述的美丽toobeautifultodescribe→beautybeyonddescription61．震区theareaswhicharehitbytheearthquake→thequake­hitareas62．合作teamup→becooperative63．一个表现好的孩子achildwhobehavesinaproperway→awell­behavedchild64．一个脾气坏的人amanwhoeasilyloseshistemper→anill­temperedman65．节能的房子ahousewhichsavesenergy→anenergy­savinghouse66．一位受到良好教育的妇女awomanwhohasreceivedgoodeducation→awell­educatedwoman67．精心组织的活动anactivitythatisorganizedwell→awell­organizedactivity68．悲痛欲绝的母亲themotherwhoisextremelyupset→theheart­brokenmother69．一个爱好和平的人apersonwholovespeace→apeace­lovingPerson70．一件震惊世界的事情anincidentthatshakestheworld→aworld­shakingincident(2013·安徽高考)假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征文活动，请你以“OntheWaytoSchool”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容主要包括：1．遵守交通法规；2．注意举止文明。注意：1．词数120左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4．短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数。OntheWaytoSchool____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________请使用高级词汇提升下面考生作文[平庸作文]OntheWaytoSchoolThesedays,breakingtrafficrulesandlitteringarenotuncommon,causingseriousharmtolifeandtheenvironment.Changingthissituation①considerableeffortonthepartofeveryone.Asforme,itshouldstartonmywaytoschool.needsIwill②trafficrulesalltheway.IfIrideabike,I'llalwayskeeptotherightandnevercrossaroaduntilthetrafficlightturnsgreen.IfIwalk,I'll③tousethepedestriancrossing.④,_Iwill⑤_____itmydutytohelpkeepourenvironmentcleanandhealthy.IwillkeepfromlitteringandspittinganywhereandIwill⑥helpcleanuptheroadsidelitterwheneverpossible.Ihopemybehaviou