18非谓语动词在写作中的应用

Non-finiteVerbsinwriting非谓语动词在写作中的应用非谓语不定式（todo)V-ingV-edasanounasadj.oradv.现在分词动名词过去分词非谓语动词的分类使用条件一个句子当中，已经存在一个主句（谓语动词）,又没有连词的情况下,还有别的动词出现时,这些动词就充当了非谓语动词.非谓语动词的•1Whileshewasgettingme34(settle)intoatinybutcleanroom,theheadofthevillagewastyinguphishorseto……•2Forexample,theproverb,“pluckingupacrop32(help)itgrow”,isbasedonthefollowingstory.•3Hespatitout,37(say)itwasawful.•4Igotonthebusandfoundaseatneartheback,andthenInoticedaman18(sit)atthefront.高考链接settled宾补tohelp目的saying伴随状语sitting宾补•5therewasonlyaverysmallamountofunfairnessintheworld,buteveryoneaddedalittle,always25(think)thatitwasonlysmallandnotveryimportant。•6Footballisplayedinmorethan80countries,(make)itthemostpopularsportaroundtheworld.thinking伴随状语makingVing结果状语找出非谓语动词，并判断成分•1.Smokingisnotallowedinthemeetingroom.•2.Toplayfootballisveryinterestingforthosekids.•3.ThecoverofabookentitledWizardcaughtmyattention.•4.Whoisthemanshakinghandswithourteacher?v-ing作主语不定式作主语V-ed作后置定语V-ing作后置定语•5.Scoldedbyhermother,thelittlegirlsattherewithoutliftingherhead.•6.Moreandmorepeopledrivecarstowork,placingmuchpressureonthetraffic.•7.LiNahaswontheFrenchOpen，becomingthefirstAsiantowinaGrandSlam.•8.Tohelpmydisabledaunt，Ispendanhourworkinginherhouseeveryday.过去分词作状语V-ing作结果状语V-ing作伴随状语不定式作目的状语写作中非谓语动词常见的错误1、状语动作行为者与主句主语不一致1.Seeingfromthetopofmountain,thecityisbeautiful.Seenfromthetopofmountain,thecityisbeautiful.Correction写作中非谓语动词常见的错误2、用V.ing短语充当主语、表语和宾语2.Inmyopinion,climbmountainisanenjoyablething.Inmyopinion,climbingmountainisanenjoyablething.写作中非谓语动词常见的错误3、主动、被动含义混淆3.—Whichteamisgoodatcooking?—Ateamcallingthesuppercook.Ateamcalledthesuppercook.•1.因为在这国家又没有朋友，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。用连词becauseBecauseshehasnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.用非谓语结构Havingnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子2.这本用简易英语写成的书很容易读懂用定语从句Thebook,iseasytounderstand.用非谓语结构Thebook,iseasytounderstand用非谓语结构改写和美化句子whichwaswritteninsimpleEnglish,writteninsimpleEnglish,3.Moyanstoodthereandwassurroundedbymanyreporters.Moyanstoodtheresurroundedbymanyreporters.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子←①Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivities.②Wewanttomakeourselvesmorehealthy.Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivitiestomakeourselvesmorehealthy.4.用非谓语结构合并下列句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子200920102011……•(2014)人物：英国人查理德·阿维斯（RichardAvis）•出生日期：1974年12月1日•目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含义•时间：2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日生的人Step1：拆分成几个简单句(中文)Step2：分别翻译这几个简单句1RichardAviswasbornonDecember1,1974.2Heaimsatunderstandingwhatasuccessfullifemeansindifferentcultures.3Hehasbeenlookingfortimetwinsaroundtheworldsince2011.•1RichardAviswasbornonDecember1,1974.•2Heaimsatunderstandingwhatasuccessfullifemeansindifferentcultures.3Hehasbeenlookingfortimetwinsaroundtheworldsince2011.Step3：合并句子Sentence1:BornonDecember1,1974,RichardAvishasbeenlookingfortimetwinsaroundtheworldsince2011,aimingatunderstandingwhatasuccessfullifemeansindifferentcultures..2009广东高考基础写作：你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况:时间:上周末对象:眼科医生（eye-doctor）王教授主题:我国中小学生近视（short-sightedness）问题基本信息:（1）发生率:略高于50％（2）人数:世界第一1.Slightlymorethanhalfoftheschoolchildreninourcountryareshort-sighted.2.Itranksthefirstintheworld.Step1：拆分成两个简单句(中文)Step2：分别翻译这两个简单句1.略高于50％的中国学生患有近视2.这在世界排名第一合并句子slightlymorethanhalfoftheschoolchildreninourcountryareshort-sightedanditranksthefirstintheworld.2非限制性定语从句slightlymorethanhalfoftheschoolchildreninourcountryareshort-sighted,Whichranksthefirstintheworld.slightlymorethanhalfoftheschoolchildreninourcountryareshort-sighted,rankingthefirstintheworld.3非谓语1并列句2.2010广东高考基础写作：受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿因二手烟死忙人数：超过10万/年1.Around540millionpeopleareaffectedbysecond-handsmoke2.itcauses100,000deathsayear.Step1：拆分成两个简单句(中文)Step2：分别翻译这两个简单句1.并列句Around540millionpeopleareaffectedbysecond-handsmokeanditcauses100,000deathsayear.合并句子(并列句,非限制性定语从句,非谓语2.非限制性定语从句Around540millionpeopleareaffectedbysecond-handsmoke，whichcauses100,000deathsayear.3.非谓语Around540millionpeopleareaffectedbysecond-handsmoke,causing100,000deathsayear.•(2013)志愿者观点•厌倦地球生活，想体验火星生活•1)because原因状语从句•Becausethevolunteersgettiredoflivingontheearth，theyhavebeenlookingforwardtoexperiencingthelifeontheMars•2)非谓语•Gettingtiredoflivingontheearth,thevolunteershavebeenlookingforwardtoexperiencingthelifeontheMars.Conclusion:基础写作中，常用分词短语作定语或者结果、伴随状语。Nowadays,somestudentsoftencheatinexams.Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Also,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams.用非谓语结构美化文章Homework•Nowadays,somestudentsoftencheatinexams.Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.•Nowadays,cheatinginexamsispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.用非谓语结构美化文章↓Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Theycheattogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.用非谓语结构美化文章↓Also,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams.Beingafraidoffailinginexams,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillalsocheatinexams用非谓语结构美化文章↓Nowadays,cheatingi