考研图画作文预复习资料(2)20111考研图画作文专题三、中间段“天龙八部”(上)“天龙八部”详解图一、由浅入深(若有话写则坚决放弃)二、*深层含义(全段核心,全文关键,必写)三、描述现象的句型(1):调查句三、描述现象的句型(2):现象句四、原因五、后果/影响六、*强行举例(举例论证)七、调查句引出细节—科学论据法八、*总结“意义阐释”范例分析与模仿例一:02年真题(美国女孩穿着中国传统服饰)第二段:①浅:Whattheimpressivephotoconveysgoesfarbeyondanewfashiontrend.②深:Instead,itcarries/reflectscultureimplicationsaswell.③现状及原因:Thepastseveralyearshavewitnessedthephenomenonthatforeignpeopleineverexpanding/increasing/mountingnumbersareattractedtothemysterioustraditionalChineseculture,forthereasonthattosomeextentaculturecanbeaccepted,respected,appreciated,andadvocatedinternationally.④影响:Inotherwords,onenation’sdistinctiveculturecanbecomeinternationalthroughworld-wideeconomicandculturalexchange.⑤总结:Sincethetrendofglobalizationseemsincreasinglyfar-reaching,cultureexchangescaneffectivelyandefficientlyimprovemutualunderstandingandfriendship.•好事六大词:appreciated/advocated/accepted/respected/preserved/treasured例二:(教授站在一堆论文上)天龙八部法分析:(由浅入深略,强行举例略)1.深意:概括性较强的三种深意的写法1)Apparently,whatcanbeinferredinthisthought-provokingpictureisaprevalentandpervasivephenomenonaboutourprofessors(主体)oncampus(地点).2)Thepicturedoesreflectathought-provokingandsubtlesocialphenomenonwhichisnotuncommononcampus(地点)nowadays.3)Thepurposeofthispictureistoconvinceusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtotheissueofeducation(话题),especially,thebehaviorsofsomeprofessors(主体).“深意”写法套句背诵(任选4句熟记):1)Whatcanbeinferredinthispictureisvirtuallya(prevalentandpervasive)socialissueandthesignificance/severityof____.2)Thepurposeofthepictureistoinform/remindusofthefactthatweshouldnotneglectthesignificanceof____.3)Thewittedauthormasterfullyunfoldsatruththatwehaveto…(usetheInternetinarationalway).4)Thissketchdoesreflectathought-provokingsocialphenomenonwhichisnotuncommoninChinanowandremindsusthatonnoaccountcanweignorethesignificanceof____.5)Themetaphoricandimpressiveportrayalhassubtlyrevealed…6)Itisapparentthatthecartoonistaimsatremindingusoftheimportanceof…7)Apparently,thepurposeofthepictureistoemphasizethenecessityof…inourdailylife.Themessageconveyedinthecartoonistwofold.8)Fromthetwopictureswecansenseacrazytendencyof(idolworship)intoday’sChina.9)Theuniquemetaphorinthisenlighteningdrawingendowsuswiththeconception/notionthat____.10)Undoubtedly,thephotoshavesubtlyreflectedaprevalentandpervasivesocialphenomenonandremindusofthesignificance/severityof________.2.现状的两种写法1)Thepastseveralyearsareaccompaniedbythephenomenonthatprofessorsandlecturersinincreasingnumbersare考研图画作文预复习资料(2)20112onlyinpursuitoftheirresearchpapersandtitles,whiletotallyturningablindeyetotheirobligationasqualifiededucators.重视…忽视…句型!!2)Thepastseveralyearswitnessedmanyuglybehaviorsofourprofessorsandlecturers.Theyspendsomuchtimeandenergyonthesiscomposingthattheyhavelittletimetocaretheirstudents,whichistheprimarypriority(首要任务)oftheirresponsibility.3.原因的写法原因的写法1:(过渡句—双原因—结果)过渡句:Consideringeveryaspectoftheissue,wemayascribeittothefollowingtworeasons.(attribute/owe/ascribe果to因)原因一(向外看):Foronething,agreatnumberofcollegesanduniversitiesregardthenumberofpapersasanessentialstandardtojudgeateacher.原因二(向内看):Foranotherthing,themostsignificantthingsformanyprofessorsbecomemoney,positionandluxury.结果:Education,thefundamentaltask,isruthlesslyandrelentlessly(无情地)ignored.原因的写法2:(*)现状+原因(单原因)Theirresponsibleteacherdepictedinthepictureisnaturallyassociatedwithagreatnumberofprofessorsinreallife,whoareonlyinpursuitoftheirresearchpapersandtitles,whiletotallyturningablindeyetotheirobligationasqualifiededucators,forthereasonthatagreatnumberofcollegesanduniversitiesregardthenumberofpapersasanessentialstandardtojudgeateacher.表示图画中本体与喻体的关系的短语本体berevealedas喻体本体bereferredtoas喻体喻体beassociatedwith本体喻体referto/standfor/indicate/epitomize…成为...的缩影4.影响1)Theindifferentattitudetowardseducationnotonlyunderminestheteachingqualityofuniversitiesandadverselyaffectsstudents’desireforknowledge,butalsosoundsanalarmtoeducationsystemincontemporarysociety.(多变原则)2)Undeniably,thisphenomenonwillreduce/impair/affecttheeducationquality.Andstudentsontheotherhand,willhavenospecificandprofessionalinstruction.坏的影响:•undermine=weaken(sth/sb)graduallyorinsidiously•adverselyaffect•exertanegativeinfluenceon•putanenormouspressureupon•bringaboutanadverse/unfavorableconsequenceon•poseapotentialandprobablethreatto•bedetrimentalto=doharmto好的影响•bringabouta(n)far-reachinginfluence/impacton•layasolidfoundationfor•playanirreplaceablerolein•serveasacatalystfor(促进)•exertapositiveinfluenceon•bebeneficialto=dogoodto5.威胁性总结•空洞版:Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,theeducationsystemwoulddeteriorateandcollapse./wouldbecomeunimaginableandunpredictable.•虚拟语气版:Werethesituationtocontinue,itwouldbecomeuncontrollable.=(Ifthesituationweretocontinue,……)•详细具体版(自己发挥言之有物版):Ifnoeffectiveandefficientmeasuresweretaken,studentswouldacceptnousefulknowledge,teacherswouldbecomebusinessmen,anduniversities,theplacefornobleeducation,woulddescendtoasupermarket.