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专升本作文既要看考生的语言表达能力，又要看考生的思维逻辑能力。其中特别需要注意的是：1）结构完整。首尾呼应，让阅卷老师对文章主题一目了然。2）用词准确。这是语言表达的基本要求，也是阅卷老师对考生英语水平的最初印象。恰如其分的词汇选择，让老师对文章含义清楚明了。3）长句、短句、简单句、复杂句交叉使用。不同句型之间的转换，让阅卷老师更好地了解考生对句子结构的掌握运用。4）句与句之间、段与段之间的衔接。关系词的正确使用让文章结构紧凑，逻辑关系明确，思想表达更为成熟。过渡词1.时间、顺序atfirst,inthefirstplace,tobeginwith,first,firstly;inthesecondplace,next,second,secondly;eventually,finally,intheend2.比较incomparison,inthesameway,similarly3.对比but,despite,inspiteof,however,incontrast,inspiteofthis,nevertheless,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,whereas,yet4.因果accordingly,asaconsequence,asaresult,because,becauseofthis,consequently,forthisreason,hence,inconsequence,inorderto,owingtothis,since,so,sothat,therefore,thus5.举例forexample,forinstance,suchas,asfollows6.归纳asarule,forthemostpart,generally,ingeneral,normally,usually,onthewhole,inmostcases,tosomeextent,7.显然afterall,asonemightexpect,clearly,itgoeswithoutsaying,naturally,obviously,ofcourse,surely8.态度admittedly,certainly,fortunately,luckily,oddlyenough,strangelyenough,undoubtedly,unfortunately9.结论inbrief,inconclusion,inshort,toconclude,tosumup10.解释说明inotherwords,namely,thatistosay,thismeans,tobemoreprecise,toputitanotherway11.另外apartfromthis,aswellas,besides,furthermore,inaddition,moreover,notonly...butalso,too,whatismore12.事实上actually,asamatteroffact,infact13.强调chiefly,especially,indetail,inparticular,mainly,notably,particularly高分作文——文章有亮点一、词汇选择——标新立异1.越来越多的人moreandmorepeople---agrowingnumberofpeople2.越来越becomemoreandmoreimportant/significant---becomeincreasinglyimportant/significant;3.使人灰心makesbdisappointed---disappointsb4.大多数学生moststudents---themajorityofstudents绝大多数学生theoverwhelmingmajorityofstudents5.很多manystudents---heapsofstudents/aconsiderablenumberofstudentsmuchhomework---endlesshomework6.好good/nice---hospitable,considerate,warm-hearted,beneficial,beautifullycut,well-furnished7.很棒great---extraordinary,marvelous,splendid,magnificent,prominent,outstanding8.不但…而且…notonly…butalso---…,and…aswell9.对…有害/有益begoodto/dogoodto---bebeneficial/beconduciveto/bringbenefitsto/benefitsb.bebadto/doharmto/beharmfulto---bedetrimentalto/harmsbconsiderably10.出现appear---arise(have/hasarisen):Newproblemshavearisen.11.增加increase---ontherise/ontheincrease/grow/climb/soar/skyrocket减少decrease---onthedecrease/fall/decline/reduce/descend12.大约about---approximately二、过渡词汇的恰当使用三、表达准确性——语言切忌绝对化inmostcases,tosomeextent,tosomedegree,onsomeoccasions四、易拼错的词：nowadays,convenient,healthy,difficulty,succeed,success,successful,comfortable五、结构造句——与众不同1）唐山曾在1976年发生过一次大地震。A:TherewasastrongearthquakeinTangshanin1976.B:Aterribleearthquakehit/struckTangshanin1976.C:1976witnessed/sawacatastrophicearthquakestruckTangshan.2）你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。A:IreceivedyourletterwhichwaswrittenonAugust15ththismorning.B:YourletterofAugust15threachedmethismorning.六、多个单一主谓结构或主系表结构的句子可以视情况合并。①Womenhavetoworkoutside.②Theyareunabletotakegoodcareoftheirchildren.a.Workingoutsidemakeswomenunabletotakegoodcareoftheirchildren.b.Workingoutsidemakesitimpossibleforwomentotakegoodcareoftheirchildren.c.Workingoutsidedepriveswomenofthechancetotakegoodcareoftheirchildren.d.Workingoutside,womencanhardlytakegoodcareoftheirchildren.七、简单句改写为复合句大学生刚刚毕业就想立刻找到高薪的工作是不可能的。①Everyyear,manycollegestudentsgraduate.②Theyallwanttofindjobs.③Thesejobscangivethemalotofmoney.④Thisisimpossible.a.Everyyear,heapsandheapsofcollegestudentsgraduatefromuniversitiesandinstitutes.Theyallwanttofindjobs，whichtheyhopecanofferthemhandsomesalaries，butthisishardlypossible。b.Itisimpossiblefornewly-graduatedstudentstofindwell-payingjobs.写作例句I.用于文章主题句1.不用说…Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…/（Itis）needlesstosay（that）/Itisobviousthat…/Obviously,…例︰不用说早睡早起是值得的。Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitisworthwhiletokeepearlyhours.2.无可否认…Thereisnodenying(thefact)that.../Itisoutofthequestiontodeny...例︰不可否认的,成功的事业关键在于健康的身心。Thereisnotdenying(thefact)thatsuccessfulbusinessliesinahealthybodyandmind.3.我深信…Iamfirmlyconvinced（that）/Iamgreatlyassured（that）例︰我深信预防是于治疗。Iamfirmlyconvincedthatpreventionisbetterthancure.4.在各种…之中,…Amongvariouskindsof…，…/Ofallthe…，…例︰在各种运动中，我尤其喜欢慢跑。Amongvariouskindsofsports，Ilikejogginginparticular/thebest.(,joggingismyfavorite.)5.…是很容易证明的。Itcanbeeasilyproved（that）…例︰时间最珍贵是很容易证明的。Itcanbeeasilyprovedthatnothingismorepreciousthantime.6.…无论如何强调都不为过…cannotbeoveremphasized例︰交通安全的重要性无论如何强调都不为过。Theimportanceoftrafficsafetycannotbeoveremphasized.7.就我的看法…，我认为…Inmyopinion，…/tomymind/AsfarasIamconcerned…例︰就我的看法,打网络游戏既花费时间也有害健康。Inmyopinion，playingnetgames/cybergamesnotonlytakesmuchtimebutalsoisharmful/detrimentaltohealth.8.每个人都知道/众所周知…Everyoneknows（that）…/Asisknowntoall,…9.毫无疑问地，…Thereisnodoubt（that）…/Undoubtedly,…/beyonddoubt…例︰毫无疑问地，近视在我国的年轻人中是一个严重的问题。Thereisnodoubtthatnear-sightednessisaseriousproblemamongtheyouthofourcountry.Undoubtedly,near-sightednessisaseriousproblemamongtheyouthofourcountry.Near-sightedness,beyonddoubt,isaseriousproblemamongtheyouthofourcountry.10.根据我个人经验,…Accordingtomypersonalexperience，…/Basedonmypersonalexperience，…例︰根据我个人经验，微笑已带给我许多好处。Accordingtomypersonalexperience，smilehasdonemealotofgood.Accordingtomypersonalexperienc