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•注意：•1.词数不少于100；•2.可是当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；•3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数。•参考词汇：海河theHaiheRiver•DearMr.Smith,•IamLiHua,chairmanoftheStudentUnion,fromChenguangHighSchool.__YourssincerelyLiHua•假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自于美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排在津的一日活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见。•①上午与我校学生座谈（话题如校园生活、文化差异等）；•②中午与我校学生共同进餐（午餐包括饺子、面条等）；•③下午与我校学生游览海河。一、认真审题，确立话题，归纳要点通过审题，确定本文的话题为“给对方介绍活动安排并征求对方意见”。围绕这个话题，将题目中叙述的文字转换成以下要点：①你们6月26日来访我们学校；②我受学校委托，负责安排你们在津的一日活动；③我给你们做一下简单介绍；④上午与我校学生座谈（话题如校园生活、文化差异等）；⑤中午与我校学生共同进餐（午餐包括饺子、面条等）；⑥下午与我校学生游览海河；⑦征求对方意见。二、理顺要点，增加细节，连贯表达本篇书面表达的文字提纲实际上就是按照表达顺序提供的，所以不存在理顺要点的环节。但为了表达的连贯，还需要增加要点：①得知（你们6月26日来访我们学校），我非常高兴。②（我受学校委托，负责安排你们在津的一日活动），我非常荣幸；③根据“上午与我校学生座谈（话题如校园生活、文化差异等）”这一要点结合常识应该增加：带你们参观校园等；④座谈目的是什么？增加相互之间的理解⑤简要说明一下吃饺子、面条的理由：中国特色的食品，让客人了解中国传统习俗和文化；⑥海河是著名的风景名胜；⑦访问到此结束；•⑧在征求对方意见时要增加一些客套话。如：•您认为我的这个活动计划如何？•如果您对这个活动计划安排不满意的•话，我们会按照您的建议改进。•我盼望您的回复。三、化解难点，灵活表达，句能达意本篇所给要点和增加的细节比较多，有些要点和细节表达起来还比较棘手。1.化解难点①受学校委托beappointedbytheschoolbeaskedbytheschool②共进午餐havelunchtogetherhaveaget-togetherinourschool'sdininghall③饺子、面条：中国特色的食品ChinesetypicalfoodsuchasdumplingsandnoodlessuchChinesetypicalfoodasdumplingsandnoodleseatChinesetypicalfoodsuchasdumplingsandnoodles•④增加相互之间的理解•promoteunderstandingeachother•helpunderstandeachothermore•improvemutualunderstanding•⑤海河：著名的风景名胜•HaiheRiver：afamousplaceofinterest.•visittheHaiheRiverandenjoythemost•beautifulscenerythere2.变点为句①I’mgladtoknowyou’llpayavisittoourschoolonJune26.•I’mgladtoknowyou’llcometoourschoolonJune26.②Ifeel/amhonoredtohavebeenappointedtotakechargeofarrangingalltheactivitiesonthatday.•Ifeel/amhonoredtohavebeenaskedtoinchargeofyourscheduleonthatday.③Nowwouldyoulikemetointroduceittoyoubriefly/inbrief?④Inthemorning,wewillshowyouaroundourschoolcampus.⑤Inthemorning,you’llhaveatalkwith/communicatewithusstudents.Thetopicincludesschoollife,theculturaldifferencesinordertopromoteunderstandingeachother.•Inthemorning,adiscussionwillbeheld,whichmaycoversuchtopicsasschoollife,culturaldifferences,aimingtoimprovemutualunderstanding.⑥We’llhavelunchtogether.YouwillbeabletoeatChinesetypicalfoodsuchasdumplingsandnoodles,helpingyouknowmoreaboutourtraditionalcustomsandculture.•Toletyouknowmoreaboutourtraditionalcustomsandculture,wewillpreparedumplingsandnoodlesasmainfood.⑦HaiheRiverisafamousplaceofinterestinTianjin.Sointheafternoon,you’llvisitittogether(along)with/aswellasus.•Intheafternoon,youtogetherwithsomeofourstudentrepresentativesaregoingtovisittheHaiheRiverandenjoythebeautifulscenerythere.⑧Youwillendyourvisittoourschool.⑨Whatdoyouthinkoftheplan?Ifyouarenotsatisfiedwiththeplan,we’llimproveitaccordingtoyoursuggestions.Ilookforwardtoyourreply.•Whatdoyouthinkoftheplan?Canyougivemesome•adviceonhowtomakeyourvisittoourschoolmore•interestingandimpressive?Ilookforwardtoyourreply.•Thisistheplan(which/that)Ihavemadeforyourvisit.I•wonderifyouaresatisfiedwithit.Ifnot,pleasedoletme•know.We’lltryourbesttomeetyourdemands•We’lldoall(that)wecan(do)tomeetyourdemands/We’lldowhatwecantomeetyourdemands.四、错落有致，连接恰当，发挥有度连接恰当，整理成文DearMr.Smith,IamLiHua,chairmanoftheStudentUnion,fromChenguangHighSchool.I’mgladtoknowyou’llpayavisittoourschoolonJune26.Ifeel/amhonoredtohavebeenappointedtotakechargeofarrangingalltheactivitiesonthatday.Nowwouldyoulikemetointroduceittoyoubriefly/inbrief?Inthemorning,wewillshowyouaroundourschoolcampus.Thenadiscussionwillbeheld,whichmaycoversuchtopicsasschoollife,culturaldifferencesinordertopromoteunderstandingeachother.Atnoon,we’llhavelunchtogetherandyouwillbeabletoeatChinesetypicalfoodsuchasdumplingsandnoodles,helpingyouknowmoreaboutourtraditionalcustomsandculture.HaiheRiverisafamousplaceofinterestinTianjin.Sointheafternoon,you’llvisitittogether(along)withus.Afterthat,youwillendyourvisittoourschool.Whatdoyouthinkoftheplan?Ifyouarenotsatisfiedwiththeplan,we’llimproveitaccordingtoyoursuggestions.Ilookforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua参考范文DearMr.Smith,IamLiHua,chairmanoftheStudentUnion,fromChen-guangHighSchool.Astudents'visitinggroupcomingfromtheUSwillpayavisittoourschoolonJune26andIwasappointedtotakechargeofarrangingalltheactivitiesonthatday.Myplanabouttheseactivitiesisasfollows.Inthemorningonyourarrival,wewillshowyouaroundourschoolandintroduceourmostadvancedsciencelabtoyou.Thenadiscussionwillbeheld,whichmaycoversuchtopicsasschoollife,culturaldifferencesandsoon,aimingtoimprovemutualunderstanding.Atnoon,wewillhaveaget-togetherinourschool'sdininghall.Toletourguestsknowmoreaboutourtraditionalcustomsandculture,wewillpreparedumplingsandnoodlesasmainfood.Intheafternoon,ourgueststogetherwithsomeofourstudentrepresentativesaregoingtovisittheHaiheRiverandenjoythebeautifulscenerythere.Afterthat,youwillendyourvisittoourschool.Whatdoyouthinkoftheplan?Canyougivemesomeadviceonhowtomakeyourvisittoourschoolmoreinterestingandimpressive?Ilookforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua同步练习【网络资源2011届高考预测】假设你是李华，星期天你要和你的同班同学李明一起去敬老院参加义务劳动，你去找他，但他不在家，你给他留言说明要求，内容如下：（1）9：30在学校门口集合；（2）带劳动工具（洗衣粉、理发工具、除草工具等）；（3）自带午饭，骑自行车前往。注意：（1）词数120左右（留言条格式已给出，不计入总词数）；（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearLiMi